Abra pur-aab ghane, chaandnee pai hain bhaaree!

by abdbundeli on August 18, 2014, 05:41:25 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 816 times)
abdbundeli
Guest
Reply with quote
Shab guzaaree hai, binaa yaar ke pahloo mein rahe!
Beqaraaree hai, binaa pyaar ke pahloo mein rahe!!

Abra pur-aab ghane, chaandnee pai hain bhaaree;
Zeest haaree hai, binaa yaar ke pahloo mein rahe!

Ab kahaan raah-e-talab mein saraa-e-shab1 khojen;
Reig taaree2 hai, binaa gaar3 ke pahloo mein rahe?

Raahrou4 past, daaman-e-madad ko hai majboor;
Ashk-zaaree hai, binaa jaar5 ke pahloo mein rahe!

Jaw talak roshanee hai, par, 'abd' ko taareekee;
Iztiraaree6 hai, binaa daar7 ke pahloo mein rahe!

1-   Inn for (staying through) night;
2-   Overcast & lingering around;
3-   One, who could do some thing (to avert the unwanted);
4-   One, who is on a journey ( say, a tourist);
5-   A neighbour (or some one who may provide a shelter);
6-   Restlessness (due to profound longing for some one);
7-   House (place for a shelter).

          - abd bundeli
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Lout aaye hain abra: tum bhi sanam aa jaaou! by abdbundeli in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
Na karo deyr, abra aa gaye hain, aa jaaou! by abdbundeli in Ghazals
~Ghane darkhat ke niche~ by suman59 in Share:Poetry of Betrayel
Abra to, abra hain: syaahee deyngey! by abdbundeli in Ghazals « 1 2  All »
Aaye hain abra chaaron taraf aasmaan mein ghir! by abdbundeli in Ghazals
surindarn
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 273
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
134 days, 2 hours and 27 minutes.
Posts: 31520
Member Since: Mar 2012


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2014, 07:20:01 PM »
Reply with quote
waaaaaaaah bahut khoob, dheron daad.
 icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2014, 12:34:32 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause bahut khoob
Logged
amit_prakash_meet
Guest
«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2014, 04:44:34 AM »
Reply with quote
वाह....वाह....

बहुत ही उम्दा....
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2014, 06:05:17 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: surindarn on August 18, 2014, 07:20:01 PM
waaaaaaaah bahut khoob, dheron daad.
 icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Surindarn ji!
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2014, 06:05:56 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: sksaini4 on August 19, 2014, 12:34:32 AM
Applause Applause bahut khoob
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Saini ji!
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2014, 06:06:30 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on August 19, 2014, 04:44:34 AM
वाह....वाह....

बहुत ही उम्दा....
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Amit ji!
Logged
nandbahu
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 122
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 4 hours and 11 minutes.
Posts: 14553
Member Since: Sep 2011


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2014, 08:48:52 AM »
Reply with quote
wah wah
Logged
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2014, 08:59:59 AM »
Reply with quote

Abd Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoobsurat aur dilfareb kalaam kahi hai jee...
Bade hi khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafzoN meiN baNdha hai aapne...

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
Logged
dksaxenabsnl
YOS Friend of the Month
Yoindian Shayar
*

Rau: 109
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 20 hours and 34 minutes.

खुश रहो खुश रहने दो l

Posts: 4127
Member Since: Feb 2013


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: August 19, 2014, 09:17:30 AM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Logged
mann.mann
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 113
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
22 days, 12 hours and 36 minutes.
Posts: 3703
Member Since: Aug 2011


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2014, 09:18:46 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause...

bahut khub abdji
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #11 on: August 19, 2014, 01:16:17 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: nandbahu on August 19, 2014, 08:48:52 AM
wah wah

Shukriyah, Nandbahu ji!
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2014, 01:17:30 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 19, 2014, 08:59:59 AM

Abd Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoobsurat aur dilfareb kalaam kahi hai jee...
Bade hi khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafzoN meiN baNdha hai aapne...

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

Bahut-bahut shukriyah,  ParwaaZ ji! Namaskaar!
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #13 on: August 19, 2014, 01:18:05 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on August 19, 2014, 09:17:30 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Thanks!
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #14 on: August 19, 2014, 01:18:57 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: mann.mann on August 19, 2014, 09:18:46 AM
Applause Applause Applause...

bahut khub abdji

Shukriyah, Mann ji!
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Ghazals > Topic: Abra pur-aab ghane, chaandnee pai hain bhaaree!
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 09, 2024, 01:22:24 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]
INTEQAM - A sequel to "Hi...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.109 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer