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kiraye ki zamiN aur aasmaaN ........acha nahiN lagta mujhe ye shahar-e-dilli ka makaN ..acha nahi lagta
na hi lepa hua aangan.. na hi wo phool gainde ke bula lo gaoN bapis mujhko maa ......acha nahi lagta
ziyada kuch kaha to ro padegi ....jaanta huN maiN likha hai khat meiN itna hi yahaaN ..acha nahiN lagta
Har ik din hi yahaN mela.. Har ik hi raat diwaali Magar tum bin ho koe bhi samaaN acha nahi lagta
Na hee to chand dikhta hai... Na hee aayeN nazar taare DhuyeN se laal hota aasmaaN acha nahi lagta
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2013, 08:19:25 AM » |
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very good poem! zor e qalam aur ziyada!!
khaas apke leeay ye sher likhay deta hoon! tumhara hein tumhare hee rehein ge umr bhar janaaN Yaqee'N rakho muhabbat per gumaaN achha nahi lagta kabhi sur ko khujata hoon kabhi malta hoon thori ko mujhe ye toota phoota aashiyaaN achha nahi lagta!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2013, 08:39:48 AM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2013, 11:52:38 AM » |
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waah ji kya kehne aapki ghazal ke behad umdaa aur lajawaab aap kalam ke dhani hain saahab kuch ashar dil ke behad kareeb aur sache hain
aapko dili daad aur mubarak baad
aate rahie khus rahie
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2013, 11:54:39 AM » |
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waah bohut khub janumanu ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2013, 11:56:51 AM » |
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waah waah laajawaab
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2013, 01:58:35 PM » |
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zabardust,so nice..
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2013, 02:02:01 PM » |
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Janumanu ji bahut hee umda gazal... Bht hee zabardast... Hazaron daad aur mubarkbaad qabool farmayein
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2013, 02:33:27 PM » |
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Khoob bhai khoob. shahr e nigaraan ki tareekyan aur ghareeb ul watani ka dard ek sath bayan kiya hai . kya baat hai. bahut khubsurat kalaam hai . dheron daad . HASAN
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