Acha nahi lagta

by janumanu on March 06, 2013, 07:37:22 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 07, 2013, 01:29:37 AM »
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nice ji
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«Reply #16 on: March 07, 2013, 03:31:40 AM »
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aap sabhi yaar dosto ka bahut shukriyaa... aapne apna wooqt diya pasand kiya mere toote foote kalaam ko...

thanks everyone

god bless u
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«Reply #17 on: March 07, 2013, 07:39:15 PM »
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waah Janumanu ji, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai... bade hi khoobsurat andaaz me bahut pyaari rachnaa likhi hai aapne... padh ke bahut achcha lagaa... bahut bahut khoob ji....!!!
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«Reply #18 on: March 16, 2013, 04:14:45 AM »
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kiraye ki zamiN aur aasmaaN ........acha nahiN lagta
mujhe ye shahar-e-dilli ka makaN ..acha nahi lagta
dear dilli dil waalon ki hai. sab ko raas nahin aati icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
na hi lepa hua aangan.. na hi wo phool gainde ke
bula lo gaoN bapis mujhko maa ......acha nahi lagta
bahut khoob..........! Applause Applause Applause Applause
ziyada kuch kaha to ro padegi ....jaanta huN maiN 
likha hai khat meiN itna hi yahaaN ..acha nahiN lagta 
kyaa kahne wah wah...........! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Har ik din hi yahaN mela.. Har ik hi raat diwaali
Magar tum bin ho koe bhi samaaN acha nahi lagta
bahut bahut khoob.....! Applause Applause Applause
Na hee to chand dikhta hai... Na hee aayeN nazar taare
DhuyeN se laal hota aasmaaN acha nahi lagta

 metro-city ki yehi haalat hai ji. environmental pollution ek serius issue hai. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
 

bahut umdaa.........!
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«Reply #19 on: March 16, 2013, 10:11:22 AM »
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kiraye ki zamiN aur aasmaaN ........acha nahiN lagta
mujhe ye shahar-e-dilli ka makaN ..acha nahi lagta

na hi lepa hua aangan.. na hi wo phool gainde ke
bula lo gaoN bapis mujhko maa ......acha nahi lagta

ziyada kuch kaha to ro padegi ....jaanta huN maiN 
likha hai khat meiN itna hi yahaaN ..acha nahiN lagta 

Har ik din hi yahaN mela.. Har ik hi raat diwaali
Magar tum bin ho koe bhi samaaN acha nahi lagta

Na hee to chand dikhta hai... Na hee aayeN nazar taare
DhuyeN se laal hota aasmaaN acha nahi lagta
BAHUT HI KHOOBSOORAT.
main likh raha hoon
Apko bhale hi dili ka ye shahar achha nahin lagta magar
Aksar Bas jaye yahaan koi use wapas jana achha nhin lagta
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«Reply #20 on: March 26, 2013, 07:01:08 AM »
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bahut umdaa.........!



thankss ... jiii
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