Achcha Laga Tha.....( Mohib Kousar )

by musaafirhon on July 23, 2009, 10:56:04 AM
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Kuch aise dost aur shayro ke nam jinki shayri ki jinke jazbaat ki kadar nahi ki gayee......

Gharaz mujh ko nahin thi zaahiri surat se us ki!!
Mujhe to sirf andaaz-e-sukhan achcha laga tha!!

Vo sidhi baat bhi karta tha aksar shaayri men !!
Mujhe us ka yehi divanapan achcha laga tha !!

Zamana keh raha tha us ke baare men fasane !!
Magar mujh ko to us kaa har chalan achcha laga tha !!

Dhanak ke rang hi bhate hain aksar ladkiyon ko !!
Mujhe to eik sada pairahan achcha laga tha !!

Bane alfaz angare tu ab hairan hun main !!
Ke us lahje ka mujh ko dhimapan achcha laga tha !!

Mere baalon ki chaandi se gurezaan aaj hai vo !!
Jise kal mera chaandi sa badan achcha laga tha !!

Vo jis dam us ne mujh se khelne ko chand manga !!
Mujhe bachche ka apne, bholapan achcha laga tha !!

Parinda laut ke vapas qafas men aa gaya hai !!
Jise phaila huwa nila gagan achcha laga tha !!

-Mohib Kousar-
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2009, 12:13:30 PM »
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Wah wah Mohib ji,wonderful creation,very nice,bahut acha likha aapne. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2009, 01:08:18 PM »
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achha laga
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2009, 01:15:06 PM »
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Mere baalon ki chaandi se gurezaan aaj hai vo !!

Jise kal mera chaandi sa badan achcha laga tha !!...  Applause



Kitna sukoon kitna aaram tha tere Khanjar me

Har zakhm apna humko bohat achcha laga tha...
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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2009, 06:36:03 PM »
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Nice one dear...Applause
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