Adawat bhi mujhi se Rafaqat bhi mujhi se hai

by @kaash on March 02, 2010, 08:12:35 AM
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doston ek ghazal pesh kar raha hun,the only request is that see it with the poem's eye.
ashaar ache lagen to daad chahunga
 


adavat bhi mujhi se rafaqat bhi mujhi se hai
us shakhs ko be-intaha mohabbat bhi mujhi se hai

dosti me unki unke doston ki dushmani sahi humne
aaj kahte hain wo,dosti ki matanat bhi mujhi se hai

Matanat- firmness, constancy

main apni khushi ka mansab,meri mujhko ye den hai
dard-o-nasoor ki rawaniyaan,ye halat bhi mujhi se hai

tareef karam ki kari meri,phir yun khamosh ho gaya
shayad hai kahna chahta,mazallat bhi mujhi se hai

mazallat - dukh,mushkil


khoja bahut maksad ko hamare,talash na paye rafeeq
kuch karke na pane ki ye meri fitrat bhi mujhi se hai

rafeeq-dost,friends

tujhe hi chhorke saari dunia se mohabbat kari maine “kaash”
tu mujhse bichhad ke kahta hai,yaganat bhi mujhi se hai

yaganat-rishta,relation
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2010, 08:14:44 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Kaashji..

Bahut Khoobsurat Ghazal  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2010, 08:53:06 AM »
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Wah Kaash ji bahut haseen takhleeq hai ye aapki. Dil ko bha gai. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2010, 09:13:58 AM »
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Wah wah Kaash ji,bahut khoobsurt gazal likha aapne.bahut pasand aayi.last 2 lines really beautiful.great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2010, 04:26:29 PM »
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Bohot khoobsurat ghazal, Kaash Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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