Adhura samjhane lage ho..Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 09, 2011, 07:16:53 PM
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Ab mujhe zamane ki baate batane lage ho,
rasm-o-riwazo ka matlab sikhane lage ho,

nigaho se door tou bahut pehle hi ho gye the,
yado mein bhi ab mujhe dhundhle nazar aane lage ho,

tumhari baato mein ek anjan sa ehsas paati hu,
ya main hi nadaan hu ya tum mujhe adhura smjhane lage ho,

kabhi tum sab chhod k merre paas aana chahte the,
aaj apni ankho tak se merri tasvir mitane lage ho,

ek waqt tha jab merri judai tumhe pagal kar deti thi,
ab mujhe faaslo ki haqiqat se ru-ba-ru karwane lage ho,

ladh jaya karte the sbse merri ek jhalak pane k liye,
aaj hokar unhi logo k mujhe khudse begane lage ho,

jitne naaz-o-mhbt se bithaya the apni palko pe tumne,
utni berehemi se merri zaat k sath merra hausla bhi girane lage ho,

badal tum gye ho ya halat phir mujhe azma rahe hai,
tumhare lafzo k sath merre haal se b tum mujhe bahut anjane lage ho.........
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«Reply #1 on: March 09, 2011, 07:27:32 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 09, 2011, 07:16:53 PM


Ab mujhe zamane ki baate batane lage ho,
rasm-o-riwazo ka matlab sikhane lage ho,

nigaho se door tou bahut pehle hi ho gye the,
yado mein bhi ab mujhe dhundhle nazar aane lage ho,

tumhari baato mein ek anjan sa ehsas paati hu,
ya main hi nadaan hu ya tum mujhe adhura smjhane lage ho,

kabhi tum sab chhod k merre paas aana chahte the,
aaj apni ankho tak se merri tasvir mitane lage ho,

ek waqt tha jab merri judai tumhe pagal kar deti thi,
ab mujhe faaslo ki haqiqat se ru-ba-ru karwane lage ho,

ladh jaya karte the sbse merri ek jhalak pane k liye,
aaj hokar unhi logo k mujhe khudse begane lage ho,

jitne naaz-o-mhbt se bithaya the apni palko pe tumne,
utni berehemi se merri zaat k sath merra hausla bhi girane lage ho,

badal tum gye ho ya halat phir mujhe azma rahe hai,
tumhare lafzo k sath merre haal se b tum mujhe bahut anjane lage ho.........

BAHUT DARD HAI GHAZAL MEIN BROKEN JI
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«Reply #2 on: March 09, 2011, 07:33:25 PM »
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Bahut shukriya adil ji...
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«Reply #3 on: March 09, 2011, 07:42:29 PM »
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nice 1
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Shukriya samir ji..
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2011, 04:20:29 AM »
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wah bhai bahut achha andaz hai aap ka padh ke achha laga Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2011, 04:35:06 AM »
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wah wah....geet.... kya kahun.... sach kahu to yese laga... ise padkar ek teer dil se aar paar ho gaya .... bahut gahre tak gai hai tumhari baat.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2011, 05:15:58 AM »
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haaaaayyyyyyyyyy

kitna aacha likha he apne geet ji.....maja aa gaya...........

esa lag raha he ki mere dil ki baat aapne padkar likha diya....bht aache geet ji........keep it up
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Bahut bahut shukriya kishan ji manju mann ji aur utkarsh ji..
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boht acha likha hai apne very nice
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Bahut shukriya saahil ji..
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«Reply #11 on: March 10, 2011, 05:43:57 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Brokenbyluv Ji...
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Shukriya humdum ji...
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Khush rahiye..
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Shukriya rahim...
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