afasaane bane,,,ghazal ,jeet jainam

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is paak mohhobat ko aaj humne jana
jo teri seerat ke hum diwaane bane,

din ko chen na,raato ko neend nahi
jabse yaado ke hamare gharane bane,

hui na puri jo mangi thi muraad,
un bitey dino ke ye afasaane bane,

kiyon gumo ke aansu bahaye na humne,
 ab ye jo tanhaiyo ke nazrane bane,

umeed ki dor main kai rishte banaye
derasl woh sabhi rishte anjaane bane,

nashe ki pyaas main dhoonde ider udher jo
shavaab ki aankho se chalke paiane bane,

is tarah apno ke ehsaan hai mujh par,ke
chot padi dil ko sheeshe ke zamaane bane,

                       jj saini
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2014, 06:38:07 PM »
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वाह....बहुत ही खूब......

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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2014, 06:59:24 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khub jeetji
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2014, 09:10:51 PM »
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Waah !! Badi khoobsurti se muraad e ishq ka bayaan kiya hai !!! Daad aap ko Jeet ji !!!
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Jeet ji behad umdaa... dil se daad...
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