afsaana...A.B

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                              dastur-e-duniya hai nibhaana to hoga,
                              janaaze mein mere aanaa to hoga,

                              
                              guzaari zindagi raah mein bhatkta hue,
                              achcha hai abb ek thikaana to hoga,


                              pareshan rahaa muddaton wo saath mere,
                              akele rahne ka abb bahaana to hoga,


                              ho gayaa andhera jaane ke baad mere,
                              chiraag aashiyane mein jalanaa to hoga,


                              diwaana raha 'BECHAIN'na jaane kis liye....!
                              bekhudi ka magar kuch afsaana to hoga..!!


                              
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2011, 03:36:05 AM »
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bahut khub peshkash AB ji.
dili daad
khus rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2011, 03:36:44 AM »
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bahut khub peshkash AB ji.
dili daad
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2011, 06:43:25 AM »
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wah Adil ji .
kya mast likha aapne
dard e dil ki bechaini ka ehsaas hua
daad hai ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2011, 09:07:46 AM »
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wah Adil ji .
kya mast likha aapne
dard e dil ki bechaini ka ehsaas hua
daad hai ji

SHUKRIA NIRALA JI
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«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2011, 11:47:04 AM »
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nice lines adil ji...
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«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2011, 01:55:38 PM »
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BAhut Khub Adil JI
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2011, 09:21:12 AM »
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bahut khub peshkash AB ji.
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khus rahiye
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THANK YOU KILLBILL JI
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2011, 11:59:52 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 07, 2011, 11:47:04 AM
nice lines adil ji...

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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2011, 06:48:55 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on February 06, 2011, 08:05:44 PM
                           
                              dastur-e-duniya hai nibhaana to hoga,
                              janaaze mein mere aanaa to hoga,

                             
                              guzaari zindagi raah mein bhatkta hue,
                              achcha hai abb ek thikaana to hoga,


                              pareshan rahaa muddaton wo saath mere,
                              akele rahne ka abb bahaana to hoga,


                              ho gayaa andhera jaane ke baad mere,
                              chiraag aashiyane mein jalanaa to hoga,


                              diwaana raha 'BECHAIN'na jaane kis liye....!
                              bekhudi ka magar kuch afsaana to hoga..!!


                             

good one
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2011, 07:26:55 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 18, 2011, 06:48:55 PM
good one

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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2011, 06:01:22 AM »
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khub kaha adil ji Applause
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«Reply #12 on: February 23, 2011, 08:06:33 PM »
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Quote from: kamal aggarwal on February 22, 2011, 06:01:22 AM
khub kaha adil ji Applause

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«Reply #13 on: February 23, 2011, 08:12:05 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on February 06, 2011, 08:05:44 PM
                           
                              dastur-e-duniya hai nibhaana to hoga,
                              janaaze mein mere aanaa to hoga,

                             
                              guzaari zindagi raah mein bhatkta hue,
                              achcha hai abb ek thikaana to hoga,


                              pareshan rahaa muddaton wo saath mere,
                              akele rahne ka abb bahaana to hoga,


                              ho gayaa andhera jaane ke baad mere,
                              chiraag aashiyane mein jalanaa to hoga,


                              diwaana raha 'BECHAIN'na jaane kis liye....!
                              bekhudi ka magar kuch afsaana to hoga..!!


                             


Waah Waah Adil ji .. kYa kamaal ka likha hai .. jaise mere dil ki baat aapne keh di ho ... bahoot khoob !!!
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«Reply #14 on: February 24, 2011, 06:23:22 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 07, 2011, 01:55:38 PM
BAhut Khub Adil JI

thank you rishi ji
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