afsaana...A.B

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«Reply #15 on: March 09, 2011, 07:23:54 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 23, 2011, 08:12:05 PM

Waah Waah Adil ji .. kYa kamaal ka likha hai .. jaise mere dil ki baat aapne keh di ho ... bahoot khoob !!!

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«Reply #16 on: May 19, 2011, 08:56:22 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 18, 2011, 06:48:55 PM
good one

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«Reply #17 on: August 09, 2011, 09:54:28 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 07, 2011, 01:55:38 PM
BAhut Khub Adil JI

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«Reply #18 on: August 09, 2011, 10:00:04 AM »
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Adil ji kya kehne iss poetry ke
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Quote from: adil bechain on February 06, 2011, 08:05:44 PM
                           
                              dastur-e-duniya hai nibhaana to hoga,
                              janaaze mein mere aanaa to hoga,

                             
                              guzaari zindagi raah mein bhatkta hue,
                              achcha hai abb ek thikaana to hoga,


                              pareshan rahaa muddaton wo saath mere,
                              akele rahne ka abb bahaana to hoga,


                              ho gayaa andhera jaane ke baad mere,
                              chiraag aashiyane mein jalanaa to hoga,


                              diwaana raha 'BECHAIN'na jaane kis liye....!
                              bekhudi ka magar kuch afsaana to hoga..!!


                             
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«Reply #19 on: September 10, 2011, 01:03:40 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 09, 2011, 10:00:04 AM
Adil ji kya kehne iss poetry ke
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thank you suresh ji
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«Reply #20 on: September 12, 2011, 11:16:40 AM »
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dil ko choo lene vali lines hai. excellent
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«Reply #21 on: September 15, 2011, 08:49:41 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 12, 2011, 11:16:40 AM
dil ko choo lene vali lines hai. excellent

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«Reply #22 on: September 15, 2011, 09:51:31 AM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah janab waah.... Masha Allah bahut hi umdaa kalaam kahi
hai aapne... Waah janab gazab ke khayaal kahe hai..

Umdaa adaaygi ... bahut khoob and bahut umdaa .. Usual Smile

Gazab janab gazab .. aik behtrin kalaam par tah e dil se hazaaroN
daad hazir hai janab...


Likhate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         


Quote from: adil bechain on February 06, 2011, 08:05:44 PM
                           
                              dastur-e-duniya hai nibhaana to hoga,
                              janaaze mein mere aanaa to hoga,

Behad umdaa aur laa jawaab matla kaha janab..
daad daad daad daad.. Usual Smile         

                             
                              guzaari zindagi raah mein bhatkte hue,
                              achcha hai abb ek thikaana to hoga,

Bahut khoob janab waqai shayari ki hai daad .. Usual Smile         

                              pareshan rahaa muddaton wo saath mere,
                              akele rahne ka abb bahaana to hoga,

Masha Allah Masha Allah kia kahne janab..
Gazab ka khayaal kalam baNd kiya hai.. bahut umdaa..
hazaaroN daad is sher ke liye.. Usual Smile         

                              ho gayaa andhera jaane ke baad mere,
                              chiraag aashiyane mein jalanaa to hoga,
Kia kahne janab .. behad faraaqdili wala sher kaha hai..
daad daad daad Usual Smile         


                              diwaana raha 'BECHAIN'na jaane kis liye....!
                              bekhudi ka magar kuch afsaana to hoga..!!

Bahut khoob janab Maqta bhi behad khoob raha daad..
         



                             
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«Reply #23 on: September 24, 2011, 09:51:24 AM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah janab waah.... Masha Allah bahut hi umdaa kalaam kahi
hai aapne... Waah janab gazab ke khayaal kahe hai..

Umdaa adaaygi ... bahut khoob and bahut umdaa .. Usual Smile

Gazab janab gazab .. aik behtrin kalaam par tah e dil se hazaaroN
daad hazir hai janab...


Likhate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         



shukriya parwaaz sahab
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«Reply #24 on: September 24, 2011, 11:59:07 AM »
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«Reply #25 on: October 02, 2011, 07:50:05 AM »
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