Agar......!!

by Talat on May 30, 2009, 07:19:17 PM

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Talat

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Parveen Shakir Sahiba ki ek ghazal mujhe bohot pasand hai.....

Us ghazal ke ek sher se muttaasir ho kar maine ye ghazal likhi hai, ummeed hai pasand aayegi...!


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angel4u

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Re: Agar......!!

«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2009, 07:28:46 PM »

Simpy beautiful Talat.

No words to express the appreciation.

Just wonderful Applause


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Talat

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«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2009, 10:26:54 PM »

Thanks a lot Sweetie for your appreciation..It's always so good to see your comments Usual Smile


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dead heart

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«Reply #3 on: May 30, 2009, 10:52:32 PM »

Toooo good di...Its a masterpiece...


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Agar......!!

«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2009, 05:31:00 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on May 30, 2009, 07:19:17 PM

Parveen Shakir Sahiba ki ek ghazal mujhe bohot pasand hai.....
Bas us ghazal ke ek sher se muttaasir ho kar maine ye ghazal likhi hai, ummeed hai pasand aayegi...!

BAHAUT ACHCHAA...DR SAHIBA....MAINEY PARVEEN SHAAKIR KEY BAHUT SEY KALAAM SUNEY HAIN... 1994 MAIN JAB UNKAA INTAQAAL HUAA TO USS KEY JAND ROZ BAAD UNHAIN ALL INDIA MUSHAIRAA MAIN DELHI AANAA THAA ...!


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2009, 05:32:53 AM »

Bahut khoob Celmira Ji
Kamal ka likha hai, wah wah
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Talat

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Re: Agar......!!

«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2009, 08:15:47 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on May 30, 2009, 10:52:32 PM

Toooo good di...Its a masterpiece...

Thats so sweet of you dear Rahim...Thanks so much ! icon_flower


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Talat

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Re: Agar......!!

«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2009, 11:40:21 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 31, 2009, 05:31:00 AM

Haulsa afzaai ka shukriya Khamosh Ji... Nice information... 1994 main to main school main padhti thi par baad main bade ho ke shayari ka shuq paida hua...aur Parveen Shakir ko jab padha to unka har creation dil main utarne laga....aur sab se zyada afsos aur ghum tab hua jab pata chala ki wo to kaafi pehle inteqal farma chuki hain sad5


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javedarshad

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«Reply #8 on: May 31, 2009, 12:42:26 PM »

nice and good

keep it up

javed


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Roja

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«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2009, 12:51:55 PM »

Wah waaaaaahhhhh..... Bahut khoob Dear Talat. Bahut accha aapne likha hai.


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salil2002

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«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2009, 01:01:19 PM »

bahut achche di bahut achcha likha hai aapne...........


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Talat

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Re: Agar......!!

«Reply #11 on: May 31, 2009, 05:05:56 PM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 31, 2009, 05:32:53 AM

Bahut khoob Celmira Ji
Kamal ka likha hai, wah wah
SARVESH RASTOGI

Bohot bohot shukriya Sarvesh Ji..Izzat afzaai ka tah-e-dil se shukriya !


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Talat

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«Reply #12 on: May 31, 2009, 06:32:01 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 31, 2009, 10:57:20 AM

Waah bahot khoob Talat ji behatareen ghazal likhi hai aapne,har sher ehsaasaat lie Clapping Smiley

n thanks K_A ji nice information.well, Talat ji awesome poem koshish karenge kuch likhne ki

Thanks so much Kaash Ji...Always good to have your views and comments on my creations Usual Smile


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Re: Agar......!!

«Reply #13 on: May 31, 2009, 06:40:50 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on May 30, 2009, 07:19:17 PM

Parveen Shakir Sahiba ki ek ghazal mujhe bohot pasand hai.....
Bas us ghazal ke ek sher se muttaasir ho kar maine ye ghazal likhi hai, ummeed hai pasand aayegi...!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!

Itni Khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi Hai Aapne Ke Kya Kahoon..

"Zubaan Se Tu Kuch Ab Bhi Kehte Nahi,
Aankhon Ke Afsaane Kis Ko Samjhayenge...

Kis Ki Nazmein Labon par bikhrengi phir,
Kis Ke As'haar Hum Gungunaynge..."

Bahut Bahut Ache Talat!!


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Sayyid Randeri

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«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2009, 07:50:33 PM »

Subhanallah!
Bohot khoob din-b-din nikhar or nikhar saaf nazar aata he aap ke kalaam me.
Shairi me zubaan ki saadgi bohot hi mushkil hunar he, jo yahan saaf nazar aata he, bohot khoob!

Bohot dino ke baad kuchh likhne ki himmat kar raha hun, ummid he ahbaab ise pasand farma kar himmat afzai farmayege.........

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