Agar......!!

by Talat on May 30, 2009, 07:19:17 PM

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Talat

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«Reply #15 on: May 31, 2009, 08:20:12 PM »

Quote from: javedarshad on May 31, 2009, 12:42:26 PM

nice and good

keep it up

javed

Thanks a lot for your suggestions and encouragement....Thank You Usual Smile


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Re: Agar......!!

«Reply #16 on: June 01, 2009, 06:16:21 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on May 30, 2009, 07:19:17 PM

Parveen Shakir Sahiba ki ek ghazal mujhe bohot pasand hai.....
Bas us ghazal ke ek sher se muttaasir ho kar maine ye ghazal likhi hai, ummeed hai pasand aayegi...!

ek aur khoobsrat paishkash jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai lafzo.n ka pirona aapko bakhoobi aata hai..........likti rahiye......aur hum log aapke likhne ka lutf uthaate rahenge


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madhuwesh

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«Reply #17 on: June 01, 2009, 06:21:52 AM »

very nice and beautiful gazal Celmira ji.and nice one by Sayyid ji too.
Clapping Smiley


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Talat

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«Reply #18 on: June 01, 2009, 10:23:39 AM »

Quote from: Roja on May 31, 2009, 12:51:55 PM

Wah waaaaaahhhhh..... Bahut khoob Dear Talat. Bahut accha aapne likha hai.

Thanks so much dear Roja for appreciation Usual Smile


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«Reply #19 on: June 01, 2009, 11:01:14 AM »

bahut khoob Talat ji
kamaal likha hai aapne... Applause


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Talat

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«Reply #20 on: June 01, 2009, 02:21:32 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on May 31, 2009, 01:01:19 PM

bahut achche di bahut achcha likha hai aapne...........

Thanks so much Salil dear


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Talat

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«Reply #21 on: June 01, 2009, 04:28:55 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 31, 2009, 06:40:50 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!

Itni Khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi Hai Aapne Ke Kya Kahoon..

"Zubaan Se Tu Kuch Ab Bhi Kehte Nahi,
Aankhon Ke Afsaane Kis Ko Samjhayenge...

Kis Ki Nazmein Labon par bikhrengi phir,
Kis Ke As'haar Hum Gungunaynge..."

Bahut Bahut Ache Talat!!

Bohot bohot shukriya Dost Khwaish, aapke words humesha hausla badhaate hain...Thanks so much for your lovely appreciation Usual Smile


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Re: Agar......!!

«Reply #22 on: June 01, 2009, 04:37:18 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 01, 2009, 04:28:55 PM

Bohot bohot shukriya Dost Khwaish, aapke words humesha hausla badhaate hain...Thanks so much for your lovely appreciation Usual Smile

It's All My Pleasure Talat!!!

Bas..Aap hamesha Yuhi Khoobsurat Likhte Rahiye,
Hum Daad Dene Ke Liye Hamesha Haazir Rahenge..


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Re: Agar......!!

«Reply #23 on: June 01, 2009, 04:41:04 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sayyid Randeri Saheb!!Asaan se Lafzo mein Itni Khoobsurat Baatein keh Dena koi Aap Se Sikhe..Bahut Ache..


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«Reply #24 on: June 01, 2009, 04:54:26 PM »

Beintehaan Khubsoorat Gazal Hai Talat Ji... Lajawab Alfaazon se saji Gazal hai aapki.. Parveen Shakir Sahiba Ki Gazal to Maine Nahi Padhi Par itna Zaroor Kaha sakta hoon Ki Yeh Gazal bhi usse kam Nahi Hogi.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #25 on: June 01, 2009, 04:57:59 PM »

Sayyid Saheb aapne Bhi Lajawab Likha Hai Dost.. Very Touching.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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Talat

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«Reply #26 on: June 01, 2009, 06:35:14 PM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on May 31, 2009, 07:50:33 PM

Subhanallah!
Bohot khoob din-b-din nikhar or nikhar saaf nazar aata he aap ke kalaam me.
Shairi me zubaan ki saadgi bohot hi mushkil hunar he, jo yahan saaf nazar aata he, bohot khoob!

Bohot bohot shukriya Sayyid ...aapne itne khoobsurat lafzon se hausla afzaai ki....... Iss taareef ka tah-e-dil se shukriya Usual Smile


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Talat

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«Reply #27 on: June 01, 2009, 06:39:31 PM »

Bohot Khoob Sayyid...aap ke kalaam main wahi khoobsurti hai jo humesha se aapki pehchaan hai........Bohot Khoob likha hai aapne Applause


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«Reply #28 on: June 01, 2009, 06:50:15 PM »

Quote from: aaina on June 01, 2009, 06:16:21 AM

ek aur khoobsrat paishkash jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai lafzo.n ka pirona aapko bakhoobi aata hai..........likti rahiye......aur hum log aapke likhne ka lutf uthaate rahenge

Thanks so much Aslam Ji ..It feels so good to get such beautiful comments from some one who himself writes amazing ghazals notworthy


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aaina

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«Reply #29 on: June 02, 2009, 09:09:44 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 01, 2009, 06:50:15 PM

Thanks so much Aslam Ji ..It feels so good to get such beautiful comments from some one who himself writes amazing ghazals notworthy

ur welcome celmira ji rahi baat amazing ghazal ki to aisa kuch bhi nhi hai zarra nawaazi hai aap logo.n ki jo adna se kalaam ko bhi itni izzat daite hain......bhut bhut shukriya