aghosh e tanhaai,,,ghazal,,,,jeet jainam saini

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sabaa  fir  uska  paigaam  laayi hai,
jisne  dee  ye  aghosh e tanhaai hai,

kaise  maaf karu  uske  gunah saare,
jeete jee jisne meri hasti mitaai hai,

tadpte rahe sada khushi ke pal koh,
mili sirf hame   apno se ruswaai hai,

ahal e zahaan  ne thokar maari Yuh,
apne hi shahar se hamari widaai hai,

Jo bhi kareeb  aayaa chala gaya dur,
mohhobat main hame mili judaai hai,

dil main rehkar dil todne waalo,n par,
aksr jeet ne unpar khushiya lutaai hai,
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2015, 09:30:52 AM »
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shir jeet ji, bahut hi badhya ehsash hae dhero daad kabool kre  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2015, 11:36:11 AM »
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Awesome.
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2015, 12:37:49 PM »
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Nice bhai good
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2015, 12:46:05 PM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on May 24, 2015, 08:14:37 AM



sabaa  fir  uska  paigaam  laayi hai,
jisne  dee  ye  aghosh e tanhaai hai,

kaise  maaf karu  uske  gunah saare,
jeete jee jisne meri hasti mitaai hai,

tadpte rahe sada khushi ke pal koh,
mili sirf hame   apno se ruswaai hai,

ahal e zahaan  ne thokar maari Yuh, sir couldnot understand these lines
apne hi shahar se hamari widaai hai,

Jo bhi kareeb  aayaa chala gaya dur,
mohhobat main hame mili judaai hai,

dil main rehkar dil todne waalo,n par,
aksr jeet ne unpar khushiya lutaai hai,


good one,sir
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2015, 06:53:27 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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beautifuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuul Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2015, 10:13:49 PM »
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bahut umdah Jeet jee waah dherooooooooooN daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!!!
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Bahut khoob....wah
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shukriya ram sir ji dil se daaaaadddd kabool
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shukriya saahil bhai
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shukriya marhoom ji
ahal e jahaan ,,is duniya ke log ne thokar maari yuh
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