मिट्टी सजाई किसलिए

by Anaarhi on May 09, 2012, 04:52:44 AM
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जब से सजाईं महफिलें दरबार की तरह,
हर कोई आ रहा है तलबगार की तरह.

मिट्टी सजाई किसलिए किरदार की तरह,
हम जी सके न जब किसी खुद्दार की तरह.

ऐसा लिखा के लाए हैं क्या हम नसीब में,
सोहबत में हैं गुलों की मगर ख़ार की तरह.

अब खुल गईं हैं मुझ पे इलाही हक़ीकतें,
जन्नत भी तेरी हो गई है दार* की तरह. (*= संसार)

हँस हँस के ही छिपा लिया इस दिल के दर्द को,
यूँ जिन्दगी बिताई अदाकार की तरह.

इतना गुमान मत करो शुह्रत पे ए 'परम',
बस इक दिनी ये हुस्न है अख़बार की तरह.

"परम"
०८/०५/२०१२
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2012, 04:56:15 AM »
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bahut hee sunder badhaai ho isee baat par ho jaaye ek (rau)
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wahh param sahab kya kahne.......wahh.bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai.kamaal ki rawaamgi aur umda khyaal.sar se pa tak behtreen ghazal............dili daad haazir hai,qabool kariye.
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Bahut Khoob param Jee
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very beautiful
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2012, 03:27:01 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2012, 12:41:06 PM »
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