Aisa geet na gaya ker

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on September 15, 2013, 12:11:22 AM
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Begano'n ki mahfil me
soch samajh ke jaya kar

aankho'n me aansu aa jayein
aysa geet na gaya ker

ye bhi hai ek neyk amal
roote bachche bahlaya ker

jab paas bulana ho mujhko
aanchal ko lahraya ker

apne hi liye na maang dua
sab ki khair manaya ker

garjein badal tab apni
zulfoo'n ko bikhraya ker

nafrat ki aag bujhana hai
prem ke deep jalaya ker

teri gali se jab guzru'n
kothe per aa jaya ker
    
         .....S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2013, 12:20:51 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on September 15, 2013, 12:11:22 AM
Begano'n ki mahfil me
soch samajh ke jaya kar

aankho'n me aansu aa jayein
aysa geet na gaya ker

ye bhi hai ek neyk amal
roote bachche bahlaya ker

jab paas bulana ho mujhko
aanchal ko lahraya ker

apne hi liye na maang dua
sab ki khair manaya ker

garjein badal tab apni
zulfoo'n ko bikhraya ker

nafrat ki aag bujhana hai
prem ke deep jalaya ker

teri gali se jab guzru'n
kothe per aa jaya ker
     
         .....S.M.Mahzar

Bahut Khoob Syed Mohd Mahzarji.
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2013, 12:52:33 AM »
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bahut khubsurat kalaam hai , dheron daad Mahzar saheb
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2013, 03:43:34 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on September 15, 2013, 12:11:22 AM
Begano'n ki mahfil me
soch samajh ke jaya kar

aankho'n me aansu aa jayein
aysa geet na gaya ker

ye bhi hai ek neyk amal
roote bachche bahlaya ker

jab paas bulana ho mujhko
aanchal ko lahraya ker

apne hi liye na maang dua
sab ki khair manaya ker

garjein badal tab apni
zulfoo'n ko bikhraya ker

nafrat ki aag bujhana hai
prem ke deep jalaya ker

teri gali se jab guzru'n
kothe per aa jaya ker
    
         .....S.M.Mahzar


bahut khoob ..........!
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2013, 04:26:17 AM »
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waah waah waah waah behad khoobsoorat rachnaaa....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2013, 08:40:28 AM »
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dheron daad dheron mubarakbad
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2013, 09:57:45 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaah kya kehne.. bahut bahut khoob... dheron daaaaaaaad...
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 15, 2013, 12:20:51 AM
Bahut Khoob Syed Mohd Mahzarji.
Advo.RavinderaRavi ji,
                      bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaaa
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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2013, 12:29:52 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 15, 2013, 12:52:33 AM
bahut khubsurat kalaam hai , dheron daad Mahzar saheb

Mohtaram F.H.Siddiqui Saheb,
                        Aapka behad mamnoon wa mashkoor hoon..........
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«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2013, 12:33:15 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on September 15, 2013, 03:43:34 AM
bahut khoob ..........!
Sheeba ji,
              bahut khoob kahne ka bahut bahut shukriya....
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«Reply #10 on: September 16, 2013, 12:35:44 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 15, 2013, 04:26:17 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah behad khoobsoorat rachnaaa....!!!
  Hriday ji,
             Meri rachna ko khoobsurat samjha,iska main aabhaari hoon..........
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«Reply #11 on: September 16, 2013, 12:37:54 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 15, 2013, 08:40:28 AM
dheron daad dheron mubarakbad
Dr.S.K.Saini Saheb,
                   Daad aur Mubarbaad, dono ka bahut bahut shukriya..............
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Quote from: aqsh on September 15, 2013, 09:57:45 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaah kya kehne.. bahut bahut khoob... dheron daaaaaaaad...
aqsh sahiba,
             kalaam ki tareef ka behad shukrguzar hoon......
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«Reply #13 on: September 16, 2013, 07:22:32 PM »
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waah waah waah waah, taro taaza kar diya aapke is ghazal ne
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«Reply #14 on: September 17, 2013, 12:01:29 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on September 16, 2013, 07:22:32 PM
waah waah waah waah, taro taaza kar diya aapke is ghazal ne
livingbythe,
           meri Ghazal ne aapko tazgi di,mujhe bahut khushu hui, tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya........
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