Aise Dil Se Mere Dhunwaan Nikle ......Satish Shukla "Raqeeb"

by Satish Shukla on June 29, 2012, 07:41:14 AM
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ऐसे दिल से मेरे धुवाँ निकले
जैसे यादों का कारवाँ निकले

उसकी नज़रों के  तीर आँखों से
जाने कब छोड़कर कमाँ निकले

आए क्योंकर बहार गुलशन में
मुन्तज़िर है कि कब खिजाँ निकले

कोई उनतीस था नहीं उनमें
वाँ तो सब तीसमारखाँ निकले

छोड़कर तुम 'रक़ीब' मत जाओ
दिल के अरमाँ अभी कहाँ निकले
      --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'
              

aise dil se mere dhuNwaaN nikle
jaise yaadonN ka kaarwaaN nikle

usaki nazroN ke teer aaNkhoN se
jaane kab chhod kar kamaaN nikle

aaye kyoN kar bahaar gulshan meN
muntazir hai ki kab khizaaN nikle

koyee untees tha naheeN un meN
waaN to sab teesmaarkhaaN nikle

chhodkar tum 'Raqeeb' mat jaao
dil ke armaaN abhee kahaaN nikle
     ---- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2012, 08:30:37 AM »
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Priya Satish ji bahut dino kebaad padhne ko milaa aate rahaa karo kyonki kuchh dhang ke kalaam padhne ko man bachain rahtaa hai bahut umdaa peshkash dheron daad qubool kare bahut bahut mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2012, 09:38:22 AM »
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Saini Sahab,

Jawab dene aur hausala afzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya...aur bhi bahut see priorities hain
phir bhee koshish karoonga ke kuchh ziyada waqt
YO par bita sakoon.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2012, 09:55:30 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat kalaam, dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2012, 10:01:01 AM »
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Shukla Ji bahut khoob,

bahut nikle mere armaan
fir bhi kam nikle

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«Reply #5 on: June 29, 2012, 11:14:40 AM »
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Bahut khubsurat ghazal kahi hai , Satish ji .Bahut bahut mubarakbad. Jaldi jaldi aaya kijye .Aapko naam se ghazlon mein bhi yaad karta rahta hoon , yeh to aap jaante hi hain.
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2012, 01:17:22 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
koyee untees tha nahiN un meN....
BAHUT SUNDAR.MUBARAKBAD EVAM SHUBHKAMNAYEN.
-Arun Mishra.
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2012, 01:50:37 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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Bahut Khoob Satish Bhai...Is Ghazal ke liye dili daad kabool karen...

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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2012, 02:52:03 PM »
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wahh janaab waah.kya kahne....bhai wahh.pahli baar pada hai aapko aur pahli baar men hi kaayal ho gaya......ghazal  bahut khoob hai...sar se paa talak.....maqte men jis tarah aapne takhallus use kiya hai. achcha rahaa...........daad o mubaaraqbaad.
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2012, 03:06:17 PM »
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bohut khub satish ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2012, 03:20:45 PM »
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Waah waah Satish jee, maza aa gaya padh ke. Ek Rau meri taraf se qubool karein.
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2012, 03:25:40 PM »
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satish jee umda ghazal kahi hai .wah wah wah.  Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 29, 2012, 04:16:56 PM »
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kaafi dino ke baad sach mein kuch achha padha hain, dil kush ho gaya, nihayat hi khoobsurat
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«Reply #13 on: June 29, 2012, 04:26:07 PM »
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goldy_shayar ji..Hausala afzai ka tahe dil se shukriya...Raqeeb
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Amit Ji....bahut bahut shukriya...Raqeeb
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