Aise Dil Se Mere Dhunwaan Nikle ......Satish Shukla "Raqeeb" -Panna 3:Ghazals

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«Reply #30 on: July 24, 2012, 01:05:49 PM »

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Re: Aise Dil Se Mere Dhunwaan Nikle ......Satish Shukla "Raqeeb"

«Reply #31 on: August 31, 2012, 07:00:41 PM »

Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!

Kai roz se aapki kalaamoN se ruberu nahi ho paaye the...
itne khoob kalaamoN par deri se aane ke liye mazarrat
chahte haiN...

behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab... sabhi ashaar kabil
e daad hai... Humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye
shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 29, 2012, 07:41:14 AM

aise dil se mere dhuNwaaN nikle
jaise yaadonN ka kaarwaaN nikle

Waah janab kia umdaa matla kaha hai... gazab ka
combination hai... dil se dhuaaN.. yaadoN ka karwaaN bahut khoob..

usaki nazroN ke teer aaNkhoN se
jaane kab chhod kar kamaaN nikle

Bahut khoob janab.. daad

aaye kyoN kar bahaar gulshan meN
muntazir hai ki kab khizaaN nikle

Achcha khayaal hai daad...

koyee untees tha naheeN un meN
waaN to sab teesmaarkhaaN nikle

Waah waaH waah janab kia taNz kasa hai bahut
khoob daad daad daad..

chhodkar tum 'Raqeeb' mat jaao
dil ke armaaN abhee kahaaN nikle

WaaH Raqeeb Sahaab gazab ka maqta hai bahut khoob daad daad daad...

---- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb'


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Re: Aise Dil Se Mere Dhunwaan Nikle ......Satish Shukla "Raqeeb"

«Reply #32 on: February 11, 2013, 11:52:33 AM »

Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 29, 2012, 07:41:14 AM

ऐसे दिल से मेरे धुवाँ निकले
जैसे यादों का कारवाँ निकले
meri yaad chhod kar aur kis ki yaad aati hai tumhein Embarrased

उसकी नज़रों के तीर आँखों से
जाने कब छोड़कर कमाँ निकले
nahin ji main nazron se teer nahin chalaati hoon ab. band kar diya hai. kai shikaaytein aai thiin ghar per zakhmi hue logon ke Laughing hard

आए क्योंकर बहार गुलशन में
मुन्तज़िर है कि कब खिजाँ निकले
bahut khoob........! per kisi pe iss qaar bhi dependable nahin hona chaahiye. kya pyaas lage gi tabhi waterwell ka intezaam karein ge Embarrased

कोई उनतीस था नहीं उनमें
वाँ तो सब तीसमारखाँ निकले
maine ye film dekhi hai ab main 31 maar khaan ho gai hoon Laughing hard

छोड़कर तुम 'रक़ीब' मत जाओ
दिल के अरमाँ अभी कहाँ निकले

kab tak nikal jaayein ge. kuch time to bataao. mujhe aur bhi kaam nibtaane hain.pending hain saare icon_flower

   --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'


aise dil se mere dhuNwaaN nikle
jaise yaadonN ka kaarwaaN nikle

usaki nazroN ke teer aaNkhoN se
jaane kab chhod kar kamaaN nikle

aaye kyoN kar bahaar gulshan meN
muntazir hai ki kab khizaaN nikle

koyee untees tha naheeN un meN
waaN to sab teesmaarkhaaN nikle

chhodkar tum 'Raqeeb' mat jaao
dil ke armaaN abhee kahaaN nikle
   ---- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb'

how sweet ghazal.satish ji.................!


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