Aise Gunhaun Ko kyon karen !!

by qadeer_junaid on April 11, 2010, 11:48:18 AM
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Aise Bhala Gunhaun Ko kyun karen !!
 sajde shajar hawaun ko kyun Karen !!

Uski surath a  haal khuch aisi thi  !!
radh koi duwaun ko kyun Karen !!

andhera hi muqaddar tahera apna !!
badnaam charagon ko kyun Karen !!

manzil sahera me  muqeem  apni !!
ruq bhala  baharon ko kyun Karen !!

har shaq mere gulshan ki qaar se judi !!
tanz qadeer gulabon ko kyun Karen !!

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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 12:42:04 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 06:19:33 PM »
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Is khoobsurat peshkash ke liye daad kabool kare Qadeer Saheb.............. Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2010, 11:24:30 PM »
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wah wah kya kehne ..badi umda ghazal likhi aap ne masha Allah ..bahoot khoob janaab
Aise Bhala Gunhaun Ko kyun karen !!
 sajde shajar hawaun ko kyun Karen !!

Uski surath a  haal khuch aisi thi  !!
radh koi duwaun ko kyun Karen !!

andhera hi muqaddar tahera apna !!
badnaam charagon ko kyun Karen !!

manzil sahera me  muqeem  apni !!
ruq bhala  baharon ko kyun Karen !!

har shaq mere gulshan ki qaar se judi !!
tanz qadeer gulabon ko kyun Karen !!

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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2010, 01:38:20 AM »
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Bahut khoob Qadeer ji.very touching gazal.lovely creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2010, 04:17:32 AM »
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wah wah kya kehne ..badi umda ghazal likhi aap ne masha Allah ..bahoot khoob janaab


Ghazal Ki paziyari ke liye Shukriya .. Is tarha Tarha Hausla Badate rahiyega Nazar Saheb .. Apko Ghazal Pasand aayi Samjho Qimat Wasool .. Allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2010, 06:04:27 AM »
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Mere Aziz ,salamwalekum

Apke Tareef ko Alfaz pahenana Mushkil hai ,, Apke Alfaz apki Mahobbath ko bayan karte hain .. Sub apki mahubbath aur hausla afzai hai jo likhne pe Aamda kar deti hai .. dad ke liye behad mumno hon .. Allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 06:09:09 AM »
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Wah wah Qadeer Sb. bahut behtreen ghazal kahi hai aapne. Marhaba.
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 07:45:48 AM »
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Bahut umda likha hai aap ne Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 09:17:57 AM »
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Aise Bhala Gunhaun Ko kyun karen !!
 sajde shajar hawaun ko kyun Karen !!

Uski surath a  haal khuch aisi thi  !!
radh koi duwaun ko kyun Karen !!

andhera hi muqaddar tahera apna !!
badnaam charagon ko kyun Karen !!

manzil sahera me  muqeem  apni !!
ruq bhala  baharon ko kyun Karen !!

har shaq mere gulshan ki qaar se judi !!
tanz qadeer gulabon ko kyun Karen !!

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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Yakeenan Aap mere Bhi Pasandida Shayaro mein Ek Ho Par yahan Shayari Sab Karte Hai Aur Sab Apne-Apne Jazbaat Apne Tareeke Se Pesh Kiya karte Hai..

Isliye Kisi Ka Bhi yeh Keh Dena  Bilkul Galat Hoga Ke

"Sahi Maayno mein Yeh Hai Shayari Jo Tum karte Ho"

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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 11:17:00 AM »
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Khawish Sahab Aadab ,,

App bilkul sahi farma rahe hain ,, mai apki bath se bilmushafa itefaq dekhana chahunga , hum sub hi shayari karte hain apne apne jaazbaton ko qalam band karte hain , waise mai koi shayar to ho nahi bus sikh raha hon , ap ki mahubbath hai jo ap mujhe kissi qabil samjhte hain , waise mujhe bhi thik nahi laga uper likhe gaye comments padkar .. I request Nafsiyati Mariz ji , please modify the reply , hope you did not misunderstand us , allah subko qair de ..


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«Reply #11 on: April 12, 2010, 11:22:50 AM »
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bahoooot bahoot khoob qadir bhai.....behad asardaar hai har sher...daad kabool karen....
@khwaish bro
aapki baat se mai poori tarah sahmat hun..
again @ qadeer bhai,
aapke jajbe ki tah-e-dil se tareef karta hun
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«Reply #12 on: April 12, 2010, 11:30:06 AM »
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bahoooot bahoot khoob qadir bhai.....behad asardaar hai har sher...daad kabool karen....
@khwaish bro
aapki baat se mai poori tarah sahmat hun..
again @ qadeer bhai,
aapke jajbe ki tah-e-dil se tareef karta hun


Karam Nawazi ka shukriya Sanjeev sahab , Jo baath sach hai wo sach hai , muqalifat honi chahiye .. no one is complete .. we all have to learn a lot .. Shukriya apki faraq dili ka .. Waise bade din baad apki dad pakar acha laga .. waqath nikala kariya doston ke liye janab .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

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«Reply #13 on: April 12, 2010, 12:00:19 PM »
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Khawish Sahab Aadab ,,

App bilkul sahi farma rahe hain ,, mai apki bath se bilmushafa itefaq dekhana chahunga , hum sub hi shayari karte hain apne apne jaazbaton ko qalam band karte hain , waise mai koi shayar to ho nahi bus sikh raha hon , ap ki mahubbath hai jo ap mujhe kissi qabil samjhte hain , waise mujhe bhi thik nahi laga uper likhe gaye comments padkar .. I request Nafsiyati Mariz ji , please modify the reply , hope you did not misunderstand us , allah subko qair de ..


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Aapka yeh Jawaab Padhkar Qadeer Ji bahut Khushi Hui Aur Dil Ko Ek Tasalli Bhi,  ke Aapne Galat Nahi Samjha..Aapki Soch Aur Samaj Ki main Izzat Karta Hoon..Aapne Iss Baat Ko samjha..Teh Dil Se shukriya Aapka Aur Aapke har Kalaam Ka Mujhe Besabri Se Intezaar Hoga...Shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: April 13, 2010, 04:24:40 PM »
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karam nawazi ke liye shukar guzar hon adeel sahab..

khush rahen hamesha ...



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