Aitbaar

by javedarshad on May 03, 2012, 11:37:40 PM

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Aitbaar
Jis sanjeedgee se
usne waida kia tha
Usi sanjeedgee se
Maine aitbaar kia tha

Shaiad us ka waieda
Bahut hi pur faraib hai
Mager mera aitbaar
Utna hi pur aitbaar hai

Shaiad woh
Apne waiede per ba ikhtiyaar nahin
mager main
Apne aitbaar per ab bhi moatber hun

Waida faramooshi
Shaied uske ikhlaqiyaat ka koi pahlu ho
Meri koi sard aah
Uske ikhlaaq ko shermsaar na karegee

Jis shaan se
Usne intezaar ko mujhe saunpa tha
Usi karr- o- fer se
Main usko sanjooye baithee hun

Ab dekhna yeh hai
Kis ke nafs ki jeet hooti hai
Aur
Kis ke nafs ki haar hooti hai

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2012, 01:46:26 AM »

Bahut acche...


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Re: Aitbaar

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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2012, 06:04:48 AM »

Bahut khoobsurat nazm hai , javed bhai .
Bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur daad . HASAN


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2012, 09:46:39 AM »

Bhut achchi peshkas h


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javedarshad

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2012, 12:33:22 PM »

Tx

Kohenoor ji

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javedarshad

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2012, 10:35:25 PM »

Tx
Saini sb

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2012, 03:07:30 AM »

VERY NICE DEAR


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javedarshad

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2012, 01:29:01 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 04, 2012, 06:04:48 AM

Bahut khoobsurat nazm hai , javed bhai .
Bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur daad . HASAN

Hasan sb

aap ki himmatafzayee aur muhabbat ka shukria

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javedarshad

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2012, 02:14:02 PM »

shukria
masoom

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2012, 02:22:28 PM »

Javed Sb,

Pehle toh iss khubsoorat kalaam ke liye daad haazir hai,

Ab mujhe aapse ek saawal hai,
Jab bhi aapki poetry dekhti hun toh thoda confuse ho jati hun,abhi main isse Padhne aai ki apne koi ghazal likhi hogi par mujhe ye ghazal jaisi naa lagi, (Kyunki aapne ghazal section mein post ki) .

Mujhe aisa laga ki jaise aapk koi dili khyal bayan kar rahe hain, agar ye ek azaad nazm hai toh theek warna mujhe ye andaze bayan samajh nahi aaya.

Maafi chahungi agar koi ghustakhi ki ho magar apki jawab ki muntazir hun, shayad apse kuch seekhne ko mile.


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javedarshad

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2012, 03:57:41 PM »

shiba saheba
adaab

aapka kahna bilkul baja hai
yeh aazad nazm hai meri ghalti yeh hai keh mujhko ooper nazm likh dena chahiyia tha
doosri baat yeh hai keh yahan nazm ka koi hissa makhsoos nahin hai , aur is ghazal ke hisse mein kia kia dekhne ko milta hai jo bayan se baher hai
main samajhta hun aap ka gila door ho gaya hooga aap Admin se kah dain ke nazm ki jagah bana dain to main azad aadmi azad nazm wahin post ker diya karon

shukria

mukhlis

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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2012, 04:05:26 PM »

bahut khoob javedji...


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Re: Aitbaar

«Reply #13 on: June 24, 2012, 12:39:59 PM »

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