Ajnabi_______ {Angel}

by angel4u on June 12, 2009, 03:54:39 PM
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Aaj Apne Hi Des Mein Ek Ajnabi Hue Hai Hum,
Is Ghutan Ke Saath Saans Liye Jaate Hai Hum,

Kal Hi Tha Yahan Mere Saath Doston Ka Kaafila,
Aaj Veerane Ka Saamna Kiye Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

The Moti Se Keemti Mere Ashq Is Gulisaan Mein,
Aj Un Motiyon Ko Paani Banta Dekh Rahe Hai Hum,

Banjar Se Dilon Mein Utar Bhi Jaaye Mere Ansu To,
Gili Bhi Hogi Kya Mitti Ye Soche Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

Kuch Darakhton Ke Saaye Mein Rehte The Har Pal,
Unki Panahon Ki Berukhi Ab Sahe Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

Sajaya Tha Ye Aashiyaan Humne Jazbaton Ke Phoolose,
Un Phoolonki Chubhan Se Ab Sehem Gaye Hai Hum,

Apne Libaas Se Lapet Liye Kachhe-Pakke Dhage Humne,
Maila Hua Is Qadar Daaman Ke Bas Bilakh Rahe Hai Hum...
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2009, 04:32:34 PM »
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Waah Kyaa baat hai Angel.. bahoot hi Khusurat Ghazal likhi hai.. Bahoot Khoob!
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2009, 04:38:35 PM »
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Thanks A Lot Sophi...
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shab
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2009, 06:23:09 PM »
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bahut khoob Angel ji,kitne khubsurat alfaz hai aapke
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2009, 09:32:39 PM »
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Nice one Angel di...Applause
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aaina
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2009, 09:57:03 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 12, 2009, 03:54:39 PM
Aaj Apne Hi Des Mein Ek Ajnabi Hue Hai Hum,
Is Ghutan Ke Saath Saans Liye Jaate Hai Hum,

Kal Hi Tha Yahan Mere Saath Doston Ka Kaafila,
Aaj Veerane Ka Saamna Kiye Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

The Moti Se Keemti Mere Ashq Is Gulisaan Mein,
Aj Un Motiyon Ko Paani Banta Dekh Rahe Hai Hum,

Banjar Se Dilon Mein Utar Bhi Jaaye Mere Ansu To,
Gili Bhi Hogi Kya Mitti Ye Soche Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

Kuch Darakhton Ke Saaye Mein Rehte The Har Pal,
Unki Panahon Ki Berukhi Ab Sahe Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

Sajaya Tha Ye Aashiyaan Humne Jazbaton Ke Phoolose,
Un Phoolonki Chubhan Se Ab Sehem Gaye Hai Hum,

Apne Libaas Se Lapet Liye Kachhe-Pakke Dhage Humne,
Maila Hua Is Qadar Daaman Ke Bas Bilakh Rahe Hai Hum...


very nice angel
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2009, 10:25:21 PM »
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Excellent,beautiful creation Angel ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2009, 02:02:47 AM »
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Wah wah Angel Ji bahut khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2009, 02:12:59 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 12, 2009, 03:54:39 PM
Aaj Apne Hi Des Mein Ek Ajnabi Hue Hai Hum,
Is Ghutan Ke Saath Saans Liye Jaate Hai Hum,

Kal Hi Tha Yahan Mere Saath Doston Ka Kaafila,
Aaj Veerane Ka Saamna Kiye Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

The Moti Se Keemti Mere Ashq Is Gulisaan Mein,
Aj Un Motiyon Ko Paani Banta Dekh Rahe Hai Hum,

Banjar Se Dilon Mein Utar Bhi Jaaye Mere Ansu To,
Gili Bhi Hogi Kya Mitti Ye Soche Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

Kuch Darakhton Ke Saaye Mein Rehte The Har Pal,
Unki Panahon Ki Berukhi Ab Sahe Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

Sajaya Tha Ye Aashiyaan Humne Jazbaton Ke Phoolose,
Un Phoolonki Chubhan Se Ab Sehem Gaye Hai Hum,

Apne Libaas Se Lapet Liye Kachhe-Pakke Dhage Humne,
Maila Hua Is Qadar Daaman Ke Bas Bilakh Rahe Hai Hum...


Wah wah sweet angel, bahut accha likha hai ye gazal tumne... mujhe shuruwat se aakhir tak ka sab line bahut bahut accha laga.. Keep up seetu  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2009, 02:20:32 AM »
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Kya khoob angel di
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2009, 05:10:12 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 12, 2009, 03:54:39 PM
Aaj Apne Hi Des Mein Ek Ajnabi Hue Hai Hum,
Is Ghutan Ke Saath Saans Liye Jaate Hai Hum,

Kal Hi Tha Yahan Mere Saath Doston Ka Kaafila,
Aaj Veerane Ka Saamna Kiye Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

The Moti Se Keemti Mere Ashq Is Gulisaan Mein,
Aj Un Motiyon Ko Paani Banta Dekh Rahe Hai Hum,

Banjar Se Dilon Mein Utar Bhi Jaaye Mere Ansu To,
Gili Bhi Hogi Kya Mitti Ye Soche Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

Kuch Darakhton Ke Saaye Mein Rehte The Har Pal,
Unki Panahon Ki Berukhi Ab Sahe Jaa Rahe Hai Hum,

Sajaya Tha Ye Aashiyaan Humne Jazbaton Ke Phoolose,
Un Phoolonki Chubhan Se Ab Sehem Gaye Hai Hum,

Apne Libaas Se Lapet Liye Kachhe-Pakke Dhage Humne,
Maila Hua Is Qadar Daaman Ke Bas Bilakh Rahe Hai Hum...




BAHAUT KHOOB ....A ..!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2009, 09:32:02 AM »
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Bahut khub Angel bahut khubsurat gazal pesh kiya hai Dear..Touching.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2009, 02:34:54 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 12, 2009, 04:32:34 PM
Waah Kyaa baat hai Angel.. bahoot hi Khusurat Ghazal likhi hai.. Bahoot Khoob!
Quote from: @kaash on June 12, 2009, 05:31:19 PM
Waah Bahot khoob likha hai aapne Angel ji,dard bhare ehsaas lie hai aapki ye poem,very nice

Shukriya. Shayad ye ehsaas koi nahi samajh paa raha hia...
Thanks for liking anyways.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2009, 02:35:15 PM »
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Quote from: shab on June 12, 2009, 06:23:09 PM
bahut khoob Angel ji,kitne khubsurat alfaz hai aapke

Bahut shukriya Shab Ji..
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2009, 02:35:45 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 12, 2009, 09:32:39 PM
Nice one Angel di...Applause

Shukriya Rahim
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