"ana ko apni darkinaar karna hai"

by aaina on September 06, 2009, 01:21:48 AM
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Ana ko apni darkinaar karna hai
Mujhay ab tera intezaar karna hai

Manzil e ishq ko paane ke liyn
Hadood e dunaya ko paar karna hai

Ye dooriyaa.n khatm hongi kabhi
Hai to mushil magr eytebar karna hai

Ye saanse.n jo ab talak meri thin
Inpar ab tujko ikhteyaar karna hai

Meri mohabbat ka kuch hisaab nahi
Piyaar tujhay beshumaar karna hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2009, 04:48:34 AM »
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Ana ko apni darkinaar karna hai
Mujhay ab tera intezaar karna hai

Manzil e ishq ko paane ke liyn
Hadood e dunaya ko paar karna hai

Ye dooriyaa.n khatm hongi kabhi
Hai to mushil magr eytebar karna hai

Ye saanse.n jo ab talak meri thin
Inpar ab tujko ikhteyaar karna hai

Meri mohabbat ka kuch hisaab nahi
Piyaar tujhay beshumaar karna hai


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wonderful Gazal dear Aslam...

Bahut accha laga padkar. Thumbs UP icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2009, 05:24:25 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Aslam ji beautiful gazal.wonderful creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2009, 11:05:29 AM »
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Aapka Har Kalaam Kisi Shahkaar Se Kam Nahin,
Hum Ko Aaj Aap Se Ye Aiteraaf Karna Hai !!  icon_salut


Mashallah Aslam Ji, aapki ghazalon ki taareef karte karte humare lafz khatam hone ko aa gaye...Bohot dilkash kalam hai aapka....Allah aapke hunar ko yunhi barqarar rakhe, ameen.
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2009, 11:18:55 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Aslamji..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2009, 02:25:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wonderful Gazal dear Aslam...

Bahut accha laga padkar. Thumbs UP icon_thumleft





thnxxx so much roja.....................
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2009, 02:25:48 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Aslam ji beautiful gazal.wonderful creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thnxxx madhu ji bhut bhut shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2009, 02:31:00 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Aslamji..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



bhut bhut shukriya khwaihs dear
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2009, 02:34:00 PM »
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Aapka Har Kalaam Kisi Shahkaar Se Kam Nahin,
Hum Ko Aaj Aap Se Ye Aiteraaf Karna Hai !!  icon_salut


Mashallah Aslam Ji, aapki ghazalon ki taareef karte karte humare lafz khatam hone ko aa gaye...Bohot dilkash kalam hai aapka....Allah aapke hunar ko yunhi barqarar rakhe, ameen.



thnxxxxxx alot talat aap bhi, youn hi hosla badhaati rahiye god bless  u
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2009, 04:24:31 PM »
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Door to gaye ho mujhse is kadar
ki bas ab apni mahobbat se tumhe bekrar karna he
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2009, 04:27:10 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Aslam ji ,. Bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #11 on: September 08, 2009, 03:05:33 AM »
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Saal-o-saal beet jaate hai
Fir bhi kuch log yaad aate hai

Jab kabhi unka jikr aata hai
Ashq pehron mujhe rulate hai

Kabhi roshan thi zindagi meri
Ab andheron mein dil jalate hai

Jab vo aate, bahar aa jaati
Ab baharon ke khwaab aate hai

Zindagi bhoj hai bigair unke
Ek majburi hai dil ki, utate hai

Kaun sunta hai dastane meri
Ab toh diwaron ko haal apna sunate hai




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«Reply #12 on: September 08, 2009, 06:42:53 AM »
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ARY WAH JANAB KIA BAAT HAI
BHT HI KHOOBBBBBBBBBBB
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«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2009, 10:59:49 AM »
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...really good ghazal...keep it up Aaina...
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2009, 08:52:29 AM »
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Bahut Khoob DoostooN ... Kuch Arz Hai ...


Phir Ishq Ka Woh Safar Yaad Aaya
Terii Galii, Tera Ghar Yaad Aaya

Jha Gaye The Kabhi Ishq ke Fasane
Woh ZameeN Woh Shajaar Yaad Aaya
(Shajaar = Tree)

Lo Phir Bhul Gya Mein Ghar Ka Rasta
KyuN Teraa Raah_Guuzar Yaad Aaya

Kal Shab Dekhaa Jo Meiney Aaina To
Tera Pathar aur Mera Sir Yaad Aaya

Tham Na Paya Tha Zor_E_TufaN Hanoz
Aur Teraa Waqt_E_Safar Yaad Aaya
(Hanoz = Yet)

Ik Boond Paani Ko Tarasta Hai Jigar
Sehraa Ko Dekh Kar Ghar Yaad Aaya

Phir Kissi Majnuu Ka Dil Tootaa
Phir Apnaa Khoon_E_Jigar Yaad Aaya

Cla Jaaungaa Mein Usko Bhi Chod Kar
Ghar Teraa Khuld Mein Gar Yaad Aaya!!
(Khuld=heaven/paradise)

HumTum
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