Andeshe ...... !!!

by Talat on May 12, 2009, 01:05:07 PM
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2009, 01:13:43 PM »
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Tallu,

Mashallah kya khoobsurat kalam pesh kiya hai Applause Applause Applause

Ek ek line superb hai !

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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2009, 02:07:43 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2009, 05:28:30 PM »
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Bahut Bahut khoob Dost!!!

Hamesha Ki Tarah!! Bahut Ache..
Bahut Khoobsurat Ghazal Pesh Ki Hai Aapne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2009, 05:33:41 PM »
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Wonderful.. Just dont have words to praise.

Lovely creation
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2009, 08:17:41 AM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on May 12, 2009, 01:13:43 PM
Tallu,

Mashallah kya khoobsurat kalam pesh kiya hai Applause Applause Applause

Ek ek line superb hai !

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Thanks so much.....Ab shayad 'Tallu' bolne waale bas aap hi hain yahan.....Tallu se wo sab purane din yaad aate hain !

Thanks so much for your appreciation...Shukriya !
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2009, 08:35:40 AM »
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very nice n beautiful work celmira ji,
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2009, 10:03:07 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 12, 2009, 02:07:43 PM
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Thanks a lot dear Roja
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2009, 10:36:00 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 12, 2009, 01:05:07 PM

waah waah talat ji kya baat hai kuch hunr hame bhi sikha dai.n aisi shayri likhne ke, really bhut hi acha likha hai aapne bilkul unwaan ki wazahat krti hui ek kaamyaab ghazal.......har sher mashallah daad ke qabil,daad qubool karai.n....likhti rahiye..............

mein ye soch kr uske dar se utha tha
ke wo rok laigi mana laigi mujhko
hawaao.n mein lehrata aata tha daman
ke daman padka kar bitha laigi mujhko
qadam aise andaaz se uth rahe thay
ke awaaz de ke bula lagi mujhko
magr unse roka na mujhko bulaya
na awaaz hi di na wapas bulaya
na daman hi pakda na mujhko bikthay
mein aahisat aahinsta badta hi aaya
yahan tak ke usse juda ho gya mein (kaifi aazmi)
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2009, 12:02:30 PM »
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Nice sharing Aslam ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2009, 12:21:11 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Beautifull Lines Celmira Sis
Superb Creations G88 Lines... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2009, 07:05:30 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 12, 2009, 05:28:30 PM
Bahut Bahut khoob Dost!!!

Hamesha Ki Tarah!! Bahut Ache..
Bahut Khoobsurat Ghazal Pesh Ki Hai Aapne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Thanks so much dear Friend...Thanks Khwaish  icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: May 13, 2009, 07:54:52 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 12, 2009, 05:33:41 PM
Wonderful.. Just dont have words to praise.

Lovely creation

Thanks a lot Angel  icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: May 13, 2009, 07:55:28 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 12, 2009, 05:56:46 PM
Waah waah Talat ji behad ache ash'aar likhe hain aapne..behad ache ehsasaat  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tah-e-dil se aapka shukriya, Kaash Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2009, 08:19:19 PM »
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WAH BAHOOT KHOOB CELMIRA!!!
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