Andeshe ...... !!!

by Talat on May 12, 2009, 01:05:07 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 13, 2009, 08:28:31 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 12, 2009, 01:05:07 PM

WAAH CELMIRA JEE
KYA BAAT HAI JEE..
BAHUT KHOOB...................
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«Reply #16 on: May 14, 2009, 03:48:50 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 13, 2009, 08:35:40 AM
very nice n beautiful work celmira ji,

Thanks so much Madhu
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«Reply #17 on: May 14, 2009, 03:50:07 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 13, 2009, 08:19:19 PM
WAH BAHOOT KHOOB CELMIRA!!!

Thanks a lot Pooja
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«Reply #18 on: May 14, 2009, 03:51:08 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on May 13, 2009, 08:28:31 PM
WAAH CELMIRA JEE
KYA BAAT HAI JEE..
BAHUT KHOOB...................

Bohot bohot shukriya Pandit
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«Reply #19 on: May 14, 2009, 04:02:22 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 13, 2009, 10:36:00 AM
waah waah talat ji kya baat hai kuch hunr hame bhi sikha dai.n aisi shayri likhne ke, really bhut hi acha likha hai aapne bilkul unwaan ki wazahat krti hui ek kaamyaab ghazal.......har sher mashallah daad ke qabil,daad qubool karai.n....likhti rahiye..............

mein ye soch kr uske dar se utha tha
ke wo rok laigi mana laigi mujhko
hawaao.n mein lehrata aata tha daman
ke daman padka kar bitha laigi mujhko
qadam aise andaaz se uth rahe thay
ke awaaz de ke bula lagi mujhko
magr unse roka na mujhko bulaya
na awaaz hi di na wapas bulaya
na daman hi pakda na mujhko bikthay
mein aahisat aahinsta badta hi aaya
yahan tak ke usse juda ho gya mein (kaifi aazmi)

Is hausla afzaai ke bohot bohot shukriya.....Aap to sharminda kar rahe hain....hum aap jaisa kahan likh paate hain....You are an excellent poet !! Thanks so much Aslam Ji  happy3

Kaifi Azmi sahab ki ye nazm hume bhi bohot pasand hai....Very nice sharing !!

Iske jawab main ek sher yaad aata hai:

Kuch To Majbooriyan Rahi Hongi
Yunhi Koi Bewafa Nahin Hota !! (NM)

Magar ek baat ye bhi kahi hai, aur sach kahi hai kisi ne:

Kab Nikalta Hai Koi Dil Main Utar Jaane Ke Baad,
Iss Gali Ki Doosri Jaanib Koi Rasta Nahin !! (NM)
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