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Andhere MeN Jo Murjhaai Sii Hai
Roshni MeN Woh Parchhaai Sii Hai ...
ThiThurti Subha Ne Kauhare Ki
Shabnami Chaadar Bichhaai Sii Hai ...
Saahil Ke TutTne Ki Wazah Jo Ho
LaharoN Ne Mushkile BaDaai Sii Hai ...
Chal Kar Aai Hai Pyaas Safar Se
Barsaat Ne Aankh Dikhaai Sii Hai ...
Kitne Maasoom Hote Hai Bachche
Maa Ko Dekh Muh Se MitTi Hataai Sii Hai ...
Haalaat Se LaDke Lautaa Hai "Naresh"
ZarurateN Ghar Ki Suni-Sunaai Sii Hai ... |
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«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2010, 05:17:48 PM » |
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Andhere MeN Jo Murjhaai Sii Hai
Roshni MeN Woh Parchhaai Sii Hai ...
ThiThurti Subha Ne Kauhare Ki
Shabnami Chaadar Bichhaai Sii Hai ...
Saahil Ke TutTne Ki Wazah Jo Ho
LaharoN Ne Mushkile BaDaai Sii Hai ...
Chal Kar Aai Hai Pyaas Safar Se
Barsaat Ne Aankh Dikhaai Sii Hai ...
Kitne Maasoom Hote Hai Bachche
Maa Ko Dekh Muh Se MitTi Hataai Sii Hai ...
Haalaat Se LaDke Lautaa Hai "Naresh"
ZarurateN Ghar Ki Suni-Sunaai Sii Hai ... Ji bahut khoob ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne ... Naresh Ji ! daad hi daad ..  likhte rahiye ... |
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«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2010, 08:39:43 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Naresh Ji
Daad kubool kijiye
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«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2010, 10:26:44 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2010, 06:02:12 AM » |
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first aur last lines bhot Gazab hai Naresh bhai.
bhot khubsurat peshkas.
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2010, 06:06:43 AM » |
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bahut hi badhiya Naresh ji..
bahut bahut khoob
dher saari daad`
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2010, 01:37:18 PM » |
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Ji bahut khoob ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne ... Naresh Ji ! daad hi daad .. likhte rahiye ... Shukriya ... Radhika Ji ! aapki nawaaazish ka ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... |
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2010, 05:56:29 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Naresh Ji
Daad kubool kijiye
Bahut bahut shukriya ........ Rajesh Ji ! aapki pasandegi aur daad ka ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... |
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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2010, 06:05:38 PM » |
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mast post naresh ji...bht achci lagi aapki ye peshkash sply first and last stanza
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2010, 03:53:48 PM » |
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Bahaut khoob
Rahim Ji ........ Bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... |
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2010, 05:08:21 PM » |
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first aur last lines bhot Gazab hai Naresh bhai.
bhot khubsurat peshkas.
aapki pasandegi ka bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... |
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2010, 03:30:28 PM » |
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bahut hi badhiya Naresh ji..
bahut bahut khoob
dher saari daad`
Abhi Ji ... aapki pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahaut shukriya .. khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... |
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«Reply #12 on: December 23, 2010, 01:36:38 PM » |
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mast post naresh ji...bht achci lagi aapki ye peshkash sply first and last stanza
Kasak Ji ... Koshish ko saraahane ka bahut bahut shukriya ... aise hi saath nibhaate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...! duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2010, 05:05:30 PM » |
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very nice Anshumali ji.....
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