Anjaam bura har baar huwa

by Sayyid Randeri on July 02, 2008, 02:19:51 AM
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2008, 03:37:28 AM »
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Bahot khoob syyid ji..bahot acha laga padh ke....aur yeh jo do lines sach me aisa hi hota hai...
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2008, 03:57:34 AM »
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Shukriya punam sahiba aap ne ise samjha or saraha meherbaani he aap ki.
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2008, 04:48:41 AM »
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Sayyid Saab..
Bahot Hi Behtrin Nazam Hai Ye..

Har pyaar ki naazuk gardan par
Duniya ka sitam talwaar huwa

gardan..ye Lafz shayad English Hai..
Maaf Kijiye Ga Sayyid saab

Har Pyaar Ke Nazuq Baag Par
Duniya Ka Sitam Talwaar Hua...

Aur Beshak

Padh K is Nazam Ko,
Dil Ko Maqam-e-Ibrat Hasil Hua,
Jo Haal-e-Zaar-e-Sayyid Hua
 
Fir Se Maaf Kijiyega..Sayyid saab
Maine Galti Nahi Dhoondi Par Muje sahi Lafz "Baag" Laga

                                          -- Raza
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2008, 08:21:47 PM »
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WAH KAYA BAAT HAI!!! Bahoot khoob Sayyid jee!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2008, 08:43:54 PM »
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Bohot hi khoobsurat ghazal tehreer kiya hai....bohot khoob Sayyid  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2008, 01:31:55 PM »
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bahoot achche randeri sahab..khob likh aapne...wah wah....

Quote from: Muhammed on July 02, 2008, 04:48:41 AM
Sayyid Saab..
Bahot Hi Behtrin Nazam Hai Ye..

Har pyaar ki naazuk gardan par
Duniya ka sitam talwaar huwa

gardan..ye Lafz shayad English Hai..
Maaf Kijiye Ga Sayyid saab

Har Pyaar Ke Nazuq Baag Par
Duniya Ka Sitam Talwaar Hua...

Aur Beshak

Padh K is Nazam Ko,
Dil Ko Maqam-e-Ibrat Hasil Hua,
Jo Haal-e-Zaar-e-Sayyid Hua
 
Fir Se Maaf Kijiyega..Sayyid saab
Maine Galti Nahi Dhoondi Par Muje sahi Lafz "Baag" Laga

                                          -- Raza



muhammed sahab maafi chahunga beech me bol raha hun...
lekin Randeri jee ne bilkul sahi shabd ka istemal kiya hai....aur wo "gardan" ka matlab..."gale / kanth" se hai na kee baag bagiche wala english me garden............
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2008, 05:46:03 PM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on July 02, 2008, 04:48:41 AM
Sayyid Saab..
Bahot Hi Behtrin Nazam Hai Ye..

Har pyaar ki naazuk gardan par
Duniya ka sitam talwaar huwa

gardan..ye Lafz shayad English Hai..
Maaf Kijiye Ga Sayyid saab

Har Pyaar Ke Nazuq Baag Par
Duniya Ka Sitam Talwaar Hua...

Aur Beshak

Padh K is Nazam Ko,
Dil Ko Maqam-e-Ibrat Hasil Hua,
Jo Haal-e-Zaar-e-Sayyid Hua
 
Fir Se Maaf Kijiyega..Sayyid saab
Maine Galti Nahi Dhoondi Par Muje sahi Lafz "Baag" Laga

                                          -- Raza


Bekarar bhai ne is baare me tafseel bayan kardi he, magar ye jaan kar achha laga ke aap ne is qadar tawajjuh di, ummid he aainda bhi aap ka saath rahega. jazakallah!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2008, 05:47:17 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 02, 2008, 08:21:47 PM
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WAH KAYA BAAT HAI!!! Bahoot khoob Sayyid jee!!

Shukriya muhtarama, aap ki zarrah nawazi ka.
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2008, 05:48:58 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 02, 2008, 08:43:54 PM
Bohot hi khoobsurat ghazal tehreer kiya hai....bohot khoob Sayyid  Applause Applause Applause

Aap ne pasand farmaya badi tasalli hui, jazakallah!
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2008, 05:55:06 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 03, 2008, 01:31:55 PM
bahoot achche randeri sahab..khob likh aapne...wah wah....

muhammed sahab maafi chahunga beech me bol raha hun...
lekin Randeri jee ne bilkul sahi shabd ka istemal kiya hai....aur wo "gardan" ka matlab..."gale / kanth" se hai na kee baag bagiche wala english me garden............

Nawazish, karam, shukriya, meherbaani, aap ne bilkul durust farmaya, mera yahi matlab tha, or uske baad ke misre meN talwaar ka zikar he, to zahir he, gardan ya gale par talwaar ka zikar kiya he, pasand karne or wazaahat karne ka shukriya.  happy3
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2008, 03:59:22 AM »
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Shukriya Bekarar Ji..
Aur Bilkool aapka Bolana Jaeez Hai.,

Bahot Shukriya Randeri Saab..

Kuch Jald Baazi Me Aapki Nazam Ko Padhaa.,
Aur Ye Bhi Na Dekha Ki Eng. Spell Garden...E Ka Istemaal Hota Hai..
Lekin Aap Ne Ga-r-da-n Likha Hai..Bilkool Sahih Hai Randeri Saab.,

Galati Meri Hai Maafi Chahtaa hun...!!!!


               
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2008, 08:18:15 PM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on July 04, 2008, 03:59:22 AM
Shukriya Bekarar Ji..
Aur Bilkool aapka Bolana Jaeez Hai.,

Bahot Shukriya Randeri Saab..

Kuch Jald Baazi Me Aapki Nazam Ko Padhaa.,
Aur Ye Bhi Na Dekha Ki Eng. Spell Garden...E Ka Istemaal Hota Hai..
Lekin Aap Ne Ga-r-da-n Likha Hai..Bilkool Sahih Hai Randeri Saab.,

Galati Meri Hai Maafi Chahtaa hun...!!!!


              

Oh janaab is mein maafi ki baat nahi ye to aap ki tawajjoh ko zaahir karta he, isi tarah koi ghalti ho to agah farmate rahiye, shukriya.....
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«Reply #13 on: August 02, 2008, 06:20:49 PM »
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Nice 1 Sayyid Randeri.
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«Reply #14 on: August 02, 2008, 09:41:48 PM »
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Quote from: techie_guy on August 02, 2008, 06:20:49 PM
Nice 1 Sayyid Randeri.


Shukriya dost, YO ko chhorh diya kyaa? kabhi kahbi aate ho? aate rehna milte rehna......
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