Anjaam bura har baar huwa -Panna 3:Ghazals

SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #30 on: June 01, 2009, 12:32:13 PM »

Bahut Shukriya Roja Ji
Bahut Shukriya Celmira Ji
Bahut Bahuuuuuut Shukriya Randeri Saheb
Aapko ashar pasand aaye, tarif ki, is shayar ko khuraak mil gai.
NAZAR JHUKI HAI MAGAR DIL ME BEKARARI HAI ghazal isi naam se Ghazal Section me mil jayegi. Krapaya shauk farmaen. Waise aapke liye main apni ek aur ghazal pesh kar raha hun, ummeed hai aag kuchh aur bhadkegi:

NAASAMAJH HO KISI KI JAAN NA LO
IS TARAH HAATH ME KAMAAN NA LO

KARO NA BARISHON KI BAAT SANAM
HAMARI CHHAT KA IMTIHAN NA LO

JAHAN ZAMEEN SE RISHTA NA RAHE
AISI UNCHI KOI UDAAN NA LO

APNI KHUSHION KA INTAZAM KARO
HAMARI MAUT KA SAAMAAN NA LO

DHAAR KE SATH HI BAHE JAO
KISI MALLAH KA AHSAAN NA LO

APNE MAKSAD PE HI NAZAR RAKKHO
YUN HI DUNIYA SE BAIR THAAN NA LO

SARVESH RASTOGI


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Anjaam bura har baar huwa

«Reply #31 on: June 02, 2009, 12:04:28 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 01, 2009, 05:16:35 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sayyid Randeri Saheb!!! Har Ek As'haar Lajawaab..

Yuhi Likhte Rahiye,Hume Bhi Sikhne Ka Mauka Milte Rahega..

Sharmindah na karo yaaaar.....

Jab tak ham ek gazal likhte hain aap 25-30 likh dete ho, himmat afzai ke liye mashkoor hun.


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Anjaam bura har baar huwa

«Reply #32 on: June 02, 2009, 12:17:14 AM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 01, 2009, 12:32:13 PM

NAASAMAJH HO KISI KI JAAN NA LO
IS TARAH HAATH ME KAMAAN NA LO

APNE MAKSAD PE HI NAZAR RAKKHO
YUN HI DUNIYA SE BAIR THAAN NA LO

SARVESH RASTOGI

Wah bohot khoob!
Khas kar ye dono shear bohot hi pasand aaye, bohot achha likhte hain aap Yoindia ke gulshan me ayse hi gul khilate rahiye.


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MHussain

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Re: Anjaam bura har baar huwa

«Reply #33 on: June 02, 2009, 02:13:50 PM »

Mr. Randeri, as per your suggestion I have modified last 2 lines of my work. If you feel any thing less please do write and inform.

Ms Roja, Please read the suggestion carefully, bram is bharam and pattar is patthar.Hope you get it now. Do not mind.


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Roja

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Re: Anjaam bura har baar huwa

«Reply #34 on: June 02, 2009, 03:45:31 PM »

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KARO NA BARISHON KI BAAT SANAM
HAMARI CHHAT KA IMTIHAN NA LO

JAHAN ZAMEEN SE RISHTA NA RAHE
AISI UNCHI KOI UDAAN NA LO

APNI KHUSHION KA INTAZAM KARO
HAMARI MAUT KA SAAMAAN NA LO

Bahut khoob ..... Sarvesh Rastogi ji


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Anjaam bura har baar huwa

«Reply #35 on: June 03, 2009, 07:53:47 PM »

Jazakallah Hussain bhai.


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Anjaam bura har baar huwa

«Reply #36 on: June 04, 2009, 12:55:07 AM »

Quote from: Roja on June 02, 2009, 03:45:31 PM

Bahut khoob ..... Sarvesh Rastogi ji

Bahut Shukriya Roja Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI


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