Anjaam ye hai seene mai dabi gum ki kahani le ke chale.

by R.M. Dixit on April 11, 2011, 02:45:37 PM
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              Ah pyaar teri duniyan se hum bus itni kahani le ke chale,
              Ek Toota hua dil paas raha ek roti jawani le ke chale.

              Aaye the bare arman liye seene main kai toofan liye
              Anjaam ye hai seene mai dabi ek gum ki kahani le ke chale.

              Do din ki mohabbat main aakhir, hum teri gali se kya lete
              Itni bhi navajis hai teri, aankhon mai ye paani le ke chale.   
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«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2011, 08:43:10 AM »
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bht bht khoob dixit ji...
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«Reply #2 on: April 12, 2011, 10:50:35 AM »
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              Ah pyaar teri duniyan se hum bus itni kahani le ke chale,
              Ek Toota hua dil paas raha ek roti jawani le ke chale.

              Aaye the bare arman liye seene main kai toofan liye
              Anjaam ye hai seene mai dabi ek gum ki kahani le ke chale.

              Do din ki mohabbat main aakhir, hum teri gali se kya lete
              Itni bhi navajis hai teri, aankhon mai ye paani le ke chale.   



bahut khoob dixit sahab , baraye meharbaani ise ek moqammal ghazal ki shakal dein to aur bhi achcha hoga
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«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2011, 01:44:25 PM »
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bht bht khoob dixit ji...

             Hi Mohterma,

             Shukriya aapne hamari pesh ki Ghazal ki
             tavazzo di aur sraha. Dekhie aapne jo mashwara
             isko Ghazal ka Muqammal shakal dene ka to
             main aapse gujarish kerta huin ki aaphi ishko jaisa
             acha lage ker deejiye.  Main aapkashukra gujar
             honga. So nice of u. Bye Bye.     
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2011, 10:51:51 AM »
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wah.... bahut khub dixitji.....
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2011, 03:08:09 PM »
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              Ah pyaar teri duniyan se hum bus itni kahani le ke chale,
              Ek Toota hua dil paas raha ek roti jawani le ke chale.

              Aaye the bare arman liye seene main kai toofan liye
              Anjaam ye hai seene mai dabi ek gum ki kahani le ke chale.

              Do din ki mohabbat main aakhir, hum teri gali se kya lete
              Itni bhi navajis hai teri, aankhon mai ye paani le ke chale.   


Good One ...... R.M. Dixit JI!

dil se daad .. !!!
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