Apne andar aisa hunar rakh...........................................Aqsh...

by aqsh on December 11, 2013, 01:59:59 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 11, 2013, 04:59:53 PM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal hai , myfeednaseehatein ki hain Aqsh ji . Bahut bhut mubarakbaad aur 1 Rau.
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«Reply #16 on: December 11, 2013, 05:22:55 PM »
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Tujhse milne ke baad, dushman bhi tera dost ban jaaye
LafzoN meiN shahad aur, kaabu meiN apne tevar rakh

Kisi ko chota kahkar, tu kabhi bhi bada ho nahiN sakta
AankhoN meiN apne, doobte hue suraj ka manzar rakh

HaseeN chehre ko bade shauq se, yahaN dekhte haiN “Aqsh”
Dil ke dard ko samajh sake, tu apne andar aisa hunar rakh.
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bbahut khooob aqsh ji  bade dil se de rahi hoon ye rau rakh
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«Reply #17 on: December 11, 2013, 06:02:14 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower :icon_flower:beautiful is baar kuch hat ke andaaz bahoot khoob
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«Reply #18 on: December 11, 2013, 06:37:55 PM »
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Likhne ka jazba hai toh, apne kalam meiN asar rakh
Pyaasa khud chalkar aaye, dil meiN woh saagar rakh

Sukh ke sab saathi, dukh meiN tera saath dega na koi
AuroN par bharosa na kar, khud ko apna rahbar rakh

Tujhse milne ke baad, dushman bhi tera dost ban jaaye
LafzoN meiN shahad aur, kaabu meiN apne tevar rakh
Applause Applause Applause

Kisi ko chota kahkar, tu kabhi bhi bada ho nahiN sakta
AankhoN meiN apne, doobte hue suraj ka manzar rakh
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

HaseeN chehre ko bade shauq se, yahaN dekhte haiN “Aqsh”
Dil ke dard ko samajh sake, tu apne andar aisa hunar rakh.


bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: December 11, 2013, 07:55:46 PM »
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Aaai gajjabb !!!
kya kehne.
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shukriya zaif ji...
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«Reply #20 on: December 11, 2013, 07:56:40 PM »
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thnxxxxxxxxxx qalb ji a lotttttttttt...
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«Reply #21 on: December 11, 2013, 07:59:29 PM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal hai , myfeednaseehatein ki hain Aqsh ji . Bahut bhut mubarakbaad aur 1 Rau.
Bahut bahut shukriya hasan ji... aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut bahut shukriya....
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«Reply #22 on: December 11, 2013, 08:00:17 PM »
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Tujhse milne ke baad, dushman bhi tera dost ban jaaye
LafzoN meiN shahad aur, kaabu meiN apne tevar rakh

Kisi ko chota kahkar, tu kabhi bhi bada ho nahiN sakta
AankhoN meiN apne, doobte hue suraj ka manzar rakh

HaseeN chehre ko bade shauq se, yahaN dekhte haiN “Aqsh”
Dil ke dard ko samajh sake, tu apne andar aisa hunar rakh.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bbahut khooob aqsh ji  bade dil se de rahi hoon ye rau rakh
Saru ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne meri poetry ko itna saraaha.. aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut thnxxxxxxxxxxxx...
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«Reply #23 on: December 11, 2013, 08:08:45 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower :icon_flower:beautiful is baar kuch hat ke andaaz bahoot khoob
thnxxxxxxxx a lottttttttt premdeep ji....
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«Reply #24 on: December 11, 2013, 08:10:00 PM »
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bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause
Adil ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya....
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«Reply #25 on: December 11, 2013, 08:33:35 PM »
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behtereen ghazal aqash ji,.................bohat bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #26 on: December 11, 2013, 08:37:10 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Jee Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #27 on: December 11, 2013, 09:00:14 PM »
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behtereen ghazal aqash ji,.................bohat bohat c daad,.......
thnxxxxx laaiba ji...
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«Reply #28 on: December 11, 2013, 09:03:31 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Jee Clapping Smiley
thnxxxxxxxx yaash ji...
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«Reply #29 on: December 11, 2013, 09:10:54 PM »
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Likhne ka jazba hai toh, apne kalam meiN asar rakh
Pyaasa khud chalkar aaye, dil meiN woh saagar rakh

Sukh ke sab saathi, dukh meiN tera saath dega na koi
AuroN par bharosa na kar, khud ko apna rahbar rakh

Tujhse milne ke baad, dushman bhi tera dost ban jaaye
LafzoN meiN shahad aur, kaabu meiN apne tevar rakh

Kisi ko chota kahkar, tu kabhi bhi bada ho nahiN sakta
AankhoN meiN apne, doobte hue suraj ka manzar rakh

HaseeN chehre ko bade shauq se, yahaN dekhte haiN “Aqsh”
Dil ke dard ko samajh sake, tu apne andar aisa hunar rakh.

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kya khoob likha hai aapne Aqsh Ji...
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