Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

by khwaish on June 25, 2009, 06:29:18 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 26, 2009, 12:36:12 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pops  Applause Applause Applause Beautiful reply dear.
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«Reply #16 on: June 26, 2009, 05:28:17 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 26, 2009, 12:06:49 PM

Har janam me hum tera sath nibhana chahte hai
Kaise kahe tujhe hum apna bnana chahte hai

Khushi baati hai humne har lamha teri
Gum k daur me bhi tera sath nibhana chahte hai

Aaj tujhe dar lagta h tere apno se bhi
Tere har dar ko hum tujhse juda karna chahte hai

Haalat jo laaye h ashq teri aankho mai
Un ashqon ko hum apni aankho me sjana chahte hai

Tha jab mausam bahaar ka tere sath kaate the din-raat
Patjhad me bhi tera sath nibhana chahte hai

Takraar mithi  mithi aksar hoti h pyar me
Tu jo khfaa ho jaye tujhe pyar se mnana chahte hai

Jo keh de tu lafj wahi geet h mere liye
Tere sang tera har geet gungunana chahte hai

Khud k jaisa kaise bna skte hai tujhe hum
Khud ko tere jaisa,tere kaabil bnana chahte h


Mufassal jawaab!! Waah kya kehne... Bohot khoob likha he aapne.
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«Reply #17 on: June 26, 2009, 05:29:31 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 26, 2009, 09:25:40 AM
Sach kaha Sayyid.....Bohot Khoob !

Shukriya celmira ji.
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«Reply #18 on: June 26, 2009, 05:30:27 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 26, 2009, 12:20:01 PM
bahut khub Sayyid ji

Zarrah nwazi ka shukriya.
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«Reply #19 on: June 26, 2009, 05:43:56 PM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on June 25, 2009, 07:35:08 PM
bahoth umda khuwiesh sahab bahoth qoob har ashar apni sacha-e-khud bayan karne pe amda hai apki koshish kamiyaab rahi .. bahoth qoob allah apke kalamo ko miyari izzath de !!

apki tarz per

andheron ko zindagi se mita sako to mujhe bata do !!
meri bina-e- mujhe lauta sako to mujhe bata do !!

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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Qadeer Bhai!! Jab Bhi Kuch Likhta Hoon,Yeh Zaroor Sochta Hoon ke Kaash Yeh Kalam,Mere Pasandida Shayar\Shayara Tak Pahunche..Aapke Comments Iss Ghazal Par Aate Dekh kar,Ek Raahat si mili hai Ke Qadeer Bhai ne Iss Ghazal ko Padha Aur saragha..Teh Dil Se Shukriya Qadeer bhai..

Aur Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #20 on: June 26, 2009, 05:50:08 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 25, 2009, 07:49:41 PM

Bohot khoob khwaish bhai is ke bare me bas yahi kahunga.....

Koi ghazal bhi kisi ki aysi, bata sako to mujhe bata do
Jo baat is me he wo kisi me, dikha sako to mujhe bata do

Jo gham ke maare hain is jahan me, wo dil ki nazron se dekhte hain
Jo dil ke gham ko meri nazar se, chhupa sako to mujhe bata do

                                -: Sayyid Randeri


Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Randerisaheb jo Aap Yahan Par Aaye,Aapne Iss Ghazal Ki Tareef mein Itna Kuch keh Diya Ke,Main kya Kahoon!!!
Randei Saheb Yuhi Humara Hausla Badhate Rahiye,Aap Se Bahut kuch Sikhne Ko Milta Rahega..Teh dil Se shukriya Randeri Saheb!!!

Aur Aakhri Ashaar Mein To Duniya Bhar ki Gehrai Chupi Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: June 26, 2009, 05:52:46 PM »
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Ek baar padha, dobara dekha, teebara fir se nazron yahin aa gai.....aur sach me yun laga mano mere dil ki baat aapke kalam se nikli.....yaqeen mano khwaish bro....yoindia ke taaj me aapki taraf se ye ek beshkeemati nageena hai..
mujhe behad pasand aai aapki ye rachna.....hazaron daad aapko Applause Applause

poppoetry aapne bhi behtreen jawab diya...wah wahhh

aur randeri sahab ne to chaar lines me hi maidaan maar liya bahoot sunder likha janab..lekin gayab kahan ho jaate hain aap  Is it SO!

topachi sahab bahoot khoob rahi aapki do line bhi
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«Reply #22 on: June 26, 2009, 05:54:38 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 26, 2009, 09:24:05 AM
Khwaish ,

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Jitni taareef ki jaaye kam...Bohot sachche jazbaat hain...aur unko khoobsurat lafzon main baandha hai....Bohot Khoob Dost  icon_thumleft

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mere Dost!!!!

Thanx A Million For Appreciating!!! Aapke Comments Na Ho To Darr Sa Lag jaata Hai ke Shayad Iss Ghazal Mein Woh Baat Na Bani,Ke Talat Ke Commnents Naa Aaye..Thankyou Soooooooooo Much!!!! notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #23 on: June 26, 2009, 05:59:03 PM »
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Wah wah kamaal ka likha aap sabne,Khwaish ji,Prateek ji,Sayyid ji,J,Qadeer ji
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Thankyou Sooooooooo Much madhuji For Always Appreciating And Reading My poetries..Yhankyou Sooooooo Much Dear!!! icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #24 on: June 26, 2009, 06:04:51 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 26, 2009, 12:06:49 PM
bahoot behtrin......bahoot bahoot bahoooooooot khuuuuuuub Khwaish ji
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Jwab me khuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....gustakhi maaf

Har janam me hum tera sath nibhana chahte hai
Kaise kahe tujhe hum apna bnana chahte hai

Khushi baati hai humne har lamha teri
Gum k daur me bhi tera sath nibhana chahte hai

Aaj tujhe dar lagta h tere apno se bhi
Tere har dar ko hum tujhse juda karna chahte hai

Haalat jo laaye h ashq teri aankho mai
Un ashqon ko hum apni aankho me sjana chahte hai

Tha jab mausam bahaar ka tere sath kaate the din-raat
Patjhad me bhi tera sath nibhana chahte hai

Takraar mithi  mithi aksar hoti h pyar me
Tu jo khfaa ho jaye tujhe pyar se mnana chahte hai

Jo keh de tu lafj wahi geet h mere liye
Tere sang tera har geet gungunana chahte hai

Khud k jaisa kaise bna skte hai tujhe hum
Khud ko tere jaisa,tere kaabil bnana chahte h


Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja...Aur yakeen Maaniye,Aapki Iss Kalam ne,Aapkke mere Har Baat ke Jawaab ne To mujhe Khamosh Saa Kar gaya..pooja,Aap Yakeenan Yoindia Ke Umda Shayara Mein Se Ek Ho Gaye Ho..Aap Bahut Asaani se Har baat Ko Lafzo mein Dhaal Dete Ho...
Bahut Bhaut Bahut Khhob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #25 on: June 26, 2009, 06:18:32 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 26, 2009, 12:06:49 PM
bahoot behtrin......bahoot bahoot bahoooooooot khuuuuuuub Khwaish ji
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Jwab me khuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....gustakhi maaf

Har janam me hum tera sath nibhana chahte hai
Kaise kahe tujhe hum apna bnana chahte hai

Khushi baati hai humne har lamha teri
Gum k daur me bhi tera sath nibhana chahte hai

Aaj tujhe dar lagta h tere apno se bhi
Tere har dar ko hum tujhse juda karna chahte hai

Haalat jo laaye h ashq teri aankho mai
Un ashqon ko hum apni aankho me sjana chahte hai

Tha jab mausam bahaar ka tere sath kaate the din-raat
Patjhad me bhi tera sath nibhana chahte hai

Takraar mithi  mithi aksar hoti h pyar me
Tu jo khfaa ho jaye tujhe pyar se mnana chahte hai

Jo keh de tu lafj wahi geet h mere liye
Tere sang tera har geet gungunana chahte hai

Khud k jaisa kaise bna skte hai tujhe hum
Khud ko tere jaisa,tere kaabil bnana chahte h


Ab Aapke Iss Kalaam Ke Jawaab Par kuch likhne Ki koshish Kar Raha Hoon Pooja..

Woh Tera Saath Kya Nibha Paayega,
Jisne Har Mehfil mein Apne Aap Ko Hai Tanha Dekha...

Duniya mein Bheed To Bahut Hai Par Usne Hai,
Apne Aap Ko Hai Humesha Se Akela Dekha....

Yeh Baat Nahi Ke Mujhe Tujh Par Aitbaar Nahi,
Maine To Apni Tasveer mein Bhi Hai Chehra Tera Dekha....

Hum To Sirf Kaante Hai, Aur Kaanton Ki Koi Ehmiyat nahi Hoti,
Kaanto ne Kabhi Nahi hai APne Naseeb Mein Gule-Sehra Dekha!!!!!

Ab To Ek Hi Khwaish Hai ke Tujhe Inn Palkon mein Apne Qaid Karloon,
"Khwaish" Hi Jaanta Hai Ke Usne Zinagi Mein Apne Hai Kya-Kya DEkha!!!!

Haan, mujhe Mere Apno se Bhi Darr Lagta Hai,
Jab Bhi Nikla Hoon Apne Ghar se,Iss Shehar Ka Ek Ajeeb Sa Nakhsa Dekha!!!

Teri Baaton se Itna To Yaaken Hai Mujhe,
"Khwaish" Ne Tujhme Hai Kahin Na Kahin Apna Humsaaya Dekha!!!!
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«Reply #26 on: June 26, 2009, 06:26:48 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 26, 2009, 05:52:46 PM
Ek baar padha, dobara dekha, teebara fir se nazron yahin aa gai.....aur sach me yun laga mano mere dil ki baat aapke kalam se nikli.....yaqeen mano khwaish bro....yoindia ke taaj me aapki taraf se ye ek beshkeemati nageena hai..
mujhe behad pasand aai aapki ye rachna.....hazaron daad aapko Applause Applause

poppoetry aapne bhi behtreen jawab diya...wah wahhh

aur randeri sahab ne to chaar lines me hi maidaan maar liya bahoot sunder likha janab..lekin gayab kahan ho jaate hain aap  Is it SO!

topachi sahab bahoot khoob rahi aapki do line bhi

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Bro....Apane Itna Kuch Keh diya Jiske Main Laayak nahi...Yeh Aapka Badapan hai ke Aapne Itni Tareef kardi..Kuch Jazbaaton ko Hum Kalam Se Utaar To dete Hai par Likhne Wale Se Zyaada Usse Padhkar Samajhne Wale ki tareef hai..Aapne Yeh kahan Ke Apane Iss Ghazal Ko Teen Baar Padha,Isse Badhkar Iss Ghazal Ka Koi inaam Nahi Ho Sakta.. Hats off to you!

Thannx A Million Sanjeev Bro.. Thankyou !
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Quote from: Celmira on June 26, 2009, 12:36:12 PM
Bohot Khoob Pops  Applause Applause Applause Beautiful reply dear.
thanx a lot Celmira ji.
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 26, 2009, 05:28:17 PM
Mufassal jawaab!! Waah kya kehne... Bohot khoob likha he aapne.
bahut bahut bahut shukriya sayyid ji.
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«Reply #29 on: June 27, 2009, 06:44:11 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 26, 2009, 06:04:51 PM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja...Aur yakeen Maaniye,Aapki Iss Kalam ne,Aapkke mere Har Baat ke Jawaab ne To mujhe Khamosh Saa Kar gaya..pooja,Aap Yakeenan Yoindia Ke Umda Shayara Mein Se Ek Ho Gaye Ho..Aap Bahut Asaani se Har baat Ko Lafzo mein Dhaal Dete Ho...
Bahut Bhaut Bahut Khhob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
shukriya Khwaish ji....bahut khushi hui aapko jwab pasand aaya....maine jo bhi sikha h yahi se sikha hai.....aap sabse sikha hai...aaj mai khuch likh pati hu to sirf aur sirf yoindia ki vajah se hi.....teh dil se shukriya notworthy notworthy
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