Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do..... -Panna 3:Ghazals

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«Reply #30 on: June 27, 2009, 06:46:09 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on June 26, 2009, 05:52:46 PM

Ek baar padha, dobara dekha, teebara fir se nazron yahin aa gai.....aur sach me yun laga mano mere dil ki baat aapke kalam se nikli.....yaqeen mano khwaish bro....yoindia ke taaj me aapki taraf se ye ek beshkeemati nageena hai..
mujhe behad pasand aai aapki ye rachna.....hazaron daad aapko Applause

poppoetry aapne bhi behtreen jawab diya...wah wahhh

aur randeri sahab ne to chaar lines me hi maidaan maar liya bahoot sunder likha janab..lekin gayab kahan ho jaate hain aap

topachi sahab bahoot khoob rahi aapki do line bhi

bahut bahut shukriya bekarar ji


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #31 on: June 27, 2009, 09:18:39 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 26, 2009, 05:50:08 PM

Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Randerisaheb jo Aap Yahan Par Aaye,Aapne Iss Ghazal Ki Tareef mein Itna Kuch keh Diya Ke,Main kya Kahoon!!!
Randei Saheb Yuhi Humara Hausla Badhate Rahiye,Aap Se Bahut kuch Sikhne Ko Milta Rahega..Teh dil Se shukriya Randeri Saheb!!!

Aur Aakhri Ashaar Mein To Duniya Bhar ki Gehrai Chupi Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob

Karam farmai or izzat afzai ka shukriya dost..


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #32 on: June 27, 2009, 09:26:06 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on June 26, 2009, 05:52:46 PM

aur randeri sahab ne to chaar lines me hi maidaan maar liya bahoot sunder likha janab..

Bohot bohot shukriya dost khush rahiye.

Quote from: bekarar on June 26, 2009, 05:52:46 PM

lekin gayab kahan ho jaate hain aap

Sachh kaha dost kuchh din ayse bhi guzre, magar ab to b-dastoor aata hun aap ahbaab ki khidmat me, or yahi koshish rahegi aainda bhi.


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #33 on: June 27, 2009, 09:31:43 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 26, 2009, 06:18:32 PM

Ab Aapke Iss Nazm Ke Jawaab Par kuch likhne Ki koshish Kar Raha Hoon Pooja..

Woh Tera Saath Kya Nibha Paayega,
Jisne Har Mehfil mein Apne Aap Ko Hai Tanha Dekha...

Duniya mein Bheed To Bahut Hai Par Usne Hai,
Apne Aap Ko Hai Humesha Se Akela Dekha....

Yeh Baat Nahi Ke Mujhe Tujh Par Aitbaar Nahi,
Maine To Apni Tasveer mein Bhi Hai Chehra Tera Dekha....

Hum To Sirf Kaante Hai, Aur Kaanton Ki Koi Ehmiyat nahi Hoti,
Kaanto ne Kabhi Nahi hai APne Naseeb Mein Gule-Sehra Dekha!!!!!

Ab To Ek Hi Khwaish Hai ke Tujhe Inn Palkon mein Apne Qaid Karloon,
"Khwaish" Hi Jaanta Hai Ke Usne Zinagi Mein Apne Hai Kya-Kya DEkha!!!!

Haan, mujhe Mere Apno se Bhi Darr Lagta Hai,
Jab Bhi Nikla Hoon Apne Ghar se,Iss Shehar Ka Ek Ajeeb Sa Nakhsa Dekha!!!

Teri Baaton se Itna To Yaaken Hai Mujhe,
"Khwaish" Ne Tujhme Hai Kahin Na Kahin Apna Humsaaya Dekha!!!!

Bohot umda......ye kaante hi phool ke muhafiz hote hain, jin phoolon ko kaanton ki hifazan nahi milti wo kuchle jaate hain.


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #34 on: June 28, 2009, 07:10:05 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on June 26, 2009, 06:30:22 PM

Bahot bahot khoob poem likhi hai aapne Khwaish ji and very nice replies from everyone,behad lajawaab Khwaish ji daad kubool karen

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji...
Aapne Iss Ghazal ko padha Aur saraha,
Yeh jaankar,Behad Khushi Hui hai..


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #35 on: June 28, 2009, 07:38:18 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 25, 2009, 06:29:18 PM

Kuch Gehre Aur Anmol Jazbaat Ko Zehan mein rakh kar Yeh Ghazal Likh Raha Hoon..Iss Ghazal mein Bahut si Baatein Aisi Hai Jo Rozaana Zindagi Se Juudi Hai..Umeed Karta Hoon..Aap Sab Ko yeh Pasand Aaye...

Zindagi Bhar Saath Mera Nibha Sako To Mujhe Bata Do..
Mere Har Gham Ko Apne Gale Se Laga Sako To Mujhe Bata Do...

Chalte-Chalte,Girte-Sambhalte Ab Thak Sa Gaya Hoon Main,
Ek Nayi raah Mujhko Tum Dikha Sako To Mujhe Bata Do....

Aandhiyon Ne Tufaan Ne Mujhse Meri Muskaan Tak Cheen Li,
Inn Sab ke Beech mein Rehkar Bhi Ghar Mera Tum Basa Sako To Mujhe Bata Do...

Main Jo Bhi Hoon, Jaisa Bhi Hoon, Bas Tera Hoon!!!!!
Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

Yeh Baat Sach hai ke Mujhe Aaj Mere Apno Se Bhi Darr Sa Lagta Hai!!!
Kuch Rishto Mein Phir se Woh Vishwaas Ko jaga sako to Mujhe Bata Do.....

Mere Halaat, meri Majbooriyon par main To Rota Hi Hoon!!!!
Saath Mere Do Boond Ashq Tum bhi Baha Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

Kisi Musafir Ke Liye Manzil Khud Chal kar Kahan Aati Hai!!!
Meri Himmat,Meri Taakat Bankar Mujhko Meri Manzil Tak Pahuncha Sako To Mujhe Bata Do..

Kisi Baat Par Yuh Dil Mein Naraazgi Paalne Se Kuch Bhi Nahi Haasil!!!
Kabhi khud Se Bhi mujhko Mana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

Baithe-Baithe Aaj Likh Baitha Hai "Khwaish" Woh ghazal!!!
Jo Dil Ke Bahut Kareeb Se Hai Guzri...
Guzarte Waqt Ke Saath Apni Awaaz Mein,
Tum Bhi Iss Ghazal Ko Guunguna Sako To Mujhe Bata Do....

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Very well written khwaish ji as usual, just too good. aapki to harek poem bahut achhi hot. Dil ko chhu jaate hai aapke har ek alfaaz...

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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #36 on: June 28, 2009, 08:38:54 AM »

Its fantastic.. App hamesha se hi Zindgai ki sachai k alag alag roop ko hamre beech laate rahehai.. yea ak umda shyar ki pehchan hai .. Smiply perfect..

mere pass tho sabd hi nahi tareef k liye.. isliye Clapping Smiley

Pooja ji aapne bhi bade hi khubsurat dang se reply kiya hai.. bahooot Khoob Applause

Sayyid ji.. kya baat kahi hai.. bahoot Khoob! Applause

Prateek ji.. Bahoot hi Khoob Likha hai aapne bhi Applause


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #37 on: June 28, 2009, 02:21:47 PM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 27, 2009, 06:44:11 AM

shukriya Khwaish ji....bahut khushi hui aapko jwab pasand aaya....maine jo bhi sikha h yahi se sikha hai.....aap sabse sikha hai...aaj mai khuch likh pati hu to sirf aur sirf yoindia ki vajah se hi.....teh dil se shukriya notworthy

Chaliye!!! Bahut AChi Baat Hai..Humne Bhi Aapse Bahut kuch seekha Aur Aapne Bhi Humse Kuch seekha...Hum sab ek Dusre Se Seekhte Hi Rahenge..That's The Right Spirit....

Phir se Kahunga..Bahut Bahut khoob likha Tha Aapne..


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #38 on: June 28, 2009, 05:37:00 PM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 27, 2009, 09:31:43 PM

Bohot umda......ye kaante hi phool ke muhafiz hote hain, jin phoolon ko kaanton ki hifazan nahi milti wo kuchle jaate hain.

bahut Umda baat kahin hai Aapne...Yehi Sach hai..

Hausle-afsaai Ke Liye Teh dil se Shukriya Randeri saheb


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #39 on: June 28, 2009, 07:20:13 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on June 28, 2009, 08:38:54 AM

Sayyid ji.. kya baat kahi hai.. bahoot Khoob! Applause

Shukriya Sophi ji khush rahiye.


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #40 on: June 29, 2009, 01:09:55 AM »

KHWAISH JI KAMAL KI KAVITA LIKHI HAI APNE... EK EK LINE KAMAAL KI HAI

Nice lines Prateek ji

Sayyid Randeri ji apne char line main kamaal ka likh diya... Good work

Poppoetry ji bahoot khoob sath nibhaya hai apne is post per khwiash ji ka..


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #41 on: June 29, 2009, 11:39:25 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 26, 2009, 06:18:32 PM

Bohot Khoob Dost Applause


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #42 on: June 29, 2009, 04:14:57 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on June 28, 2009, 07:38:18 AM

Very well written khwaish ji as usual, just too good. aapki to harek poem bahut achhi hot. Dil ko chhu jaate hai aapke har ek alfaaz...

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Thanks A Lot Dear!!!

Thankyou so Much for Always Appreciating..


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Re: Apne Jaisa Mujhko Bana Sako To Mujhe Bata Do.....

«Reply #43 on: July 09, 2009, 04:29:15 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on June 28, 2009, 08:38:54 AM

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Sophi...

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooo Much!!!!!

Sophi,Aapne Humesha Se Meri Har koshish Ko saraha Hai..Ab Aapka Comment Na Ho Agar Meri koi Poetry Par To mujhe Aisa Lagta Hai ke Shayad Woh baat Naa Bani Ke Sophi Ka Comment Aaye..Thank's A Lot Dear For Always Appreciating my Work...