apne raste ko manzil bana sathiya

by suman59 on September 30, 2012, 01:48:04 PM
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apne raste ko manzil bana sathiya
zindagi ko khushi se bita sathiya

raah kanton ki hai toh bhi kuch gam nahi,
har museebat gale se laga sathiya

In andheron se darna buri baat hai
raah mein koyi deepak jala sathiya

saat lehron ke behna uchit hai kahan
batke tufan se rishta bana sathiya

jo bi kuch hai fakth ye teri soch hai,
kuch nahi jag mein accha bura saathiya

ye zamana kisee ka hua hi nahi
jis tarah nibh sake tu nibha sathiya
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2012, 02:12:20 PM »
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nice , sumanji !!
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2012, 03:13:30 PM »
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WAAH WAAH WAAH
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2012, 03:31:25 PM »
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bahut umda kalaam
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2012, 05:31:12 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 30, 2012, 01:48:04 PM
apne raste ko manzil bana sathiya
zindagi ko khushi se bita sathiya

raah kanton ki hai toh bhi kuch gam nahi,
har museebat gale se laga sathiya

In andheron se darna buri baat hai
raah mein koyi deepak jala sathiya

saat lehron ke behna uchit hai kahan
batke tufan se rishta bana sathiya

jo bi kuch hai fakth ye teri soch hai,
kuch nahi jag mein accha bura saathiya

ye zamana kisee ka hua hi nahi
jis tarah nibh sake tu nibha sathiya


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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2012, 07:58:22 PM »
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Suman Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke is khoob kalaam ke....
badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai...
gehre ahsaas O khayaal aur pur asar andaaz e bayaaN

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob lage hume par yeH qouted
ashaaroN ke kia kahne behad umdaa hai.. Usual Smile

Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O
Mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhti rahiye.. aati rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



Quote from: suman59 on September 30, 2012, 01:48:04 PM


raah kanton ki hai toh bhi kuch gam nahi,
har museebat gale se laga sathiya


jo bi kuch hai fakth ye teri soch hai,
kuch nahi jag mein accha bura saathiya

ye zamana kisee ka hua hi nahi
jis tarah nibh sake tu nibha sathiya

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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2012, 10:12:51 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 30, 2012, 01:48:04 PM
apne raste ko manzil bana sathiya
zindagi ko khushi se bita sathiya

raah kanton ki hai toh bhi kuch gam nahi,
har museebat gale se laga sathiya

In andheron se darna buri baat hai
raah mein koyi deepak jala sathiya

saat lehron ke behna uchit hai kahan
batke tufan se rishta bana sathiya

jo bi kuch hai fakth ye teri soch hai,
kuch nahi jag mein accha bura saathiya

ye zamana kisee ka hua hi nahi
jis tarah nibh sake tu nibha sathiya

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mazaak meri baato ka na uda sathiya
khud ko paane ka tarika sujha sathiya

khud ko meri manjil na bata sathiya
kuch kadam to meri aur badha sathiya
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bahut hi achche.......
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2012, 05:49:37 AM »
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Bahut khoob umda khyalato se bhari hue behad shandaar creation Sumaan ji .
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2012, 01:16:18 PM »
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Bahut Khub Likha Suman Ji Daad Hazir Hai
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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2012, 06:52:12 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut khoob, umda likha hai aapne Suman ji... ek dum too good... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke.....!!!
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 30, 2012, 02:12:20 PM
nice , sumanji !!
shukriya hasan jee
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 30, 2012, 03:13:30 PM
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Quote from: mkv on September 30, 2012, 03:31:25 PM
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