APNEE DO TASWEER KOI....................HASAN

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Humne  na  kee  tadbeer  koi ,
Likh  hi  gaya  taqdeer  koi

Dekhe  thhe  sapne  kya  kya ,
Such  na  hu'ee  taabeer  koi

Lagta  nahiN  hai  dil  tum  bin ,
Apnee  do  tasweer  koi

Shor  hai  har  soo  baatil  ka ,
Haq  ki  uthhe  shamsheer  koi

Ishq  hai  kya  abb  jaane  kaun ,
Raanjha  hai  naa  Heer  koi

Kar  gaya  pal  meiN  apne  naam ,
Dil  ki  mere   jaageer  koi

Saare  din  haiN  eik  samaan ,
Mangal , Buddh  naa  Peer  koi

Kaaghaz - e - dil  per  chund  nuqoosh ,
Bun  hi  gayee  tasweer  koi

Kaash  mana  laata  meree ,
Roothhi  huee  taqdeer  koi

Faqq  hai  'Hasan'  kuyuuN  chehra  tera,
Dil  pe  lagaa  kya  teer  koi

 
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2011, 06:36:03 AM »
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Hasan Sahab Aadaab
bahut khoob.. Kya gajal hai..
Ranjha hai na heer koi.... vaah .. kya chot ki hai jamane par..
sabhi ashaar dil ko choone vale hai..
dil se nikli daad kubool kare
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2011, 07:31:51 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah waah Janab Masha Allaah kia umdaa gazal kahi hai
aapne choti si bher meiN aik laa jawaab kavish ko anjaam
diyaa...

Sabhi sher aik se badhkar aik rahe janab...
Is umdaa aur khub gazal par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul
kijiye... Behad khoob daad daad daad ...


Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2011, 07:34:45 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah waah bahut khoob...

Dili daad qubool farmaayen

Raqeeb
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2011, 08:04:14 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 01, 2011, 06:18:03 AM
Humne  na  kee  tadbeer  koi ,
Likh  hi  gaya  taqdeer  koi

Dekhe  thhe  sapne  kya  kya ,
Such  na  hu'ee  taabeer  koi

Lagta  nahiN  hai  dil  tum  bin ,
Apnee  do  tasweer  koi

Shor  hai  har  soo  baatil  ka ,
Haq  ki  uthhe  shamsheer  koi

Ishq  hai  kya  abb  jaane  kaun ,
Raanjha  hai  naa  Heer  koi

Kar  gaya  pal  meiN  apne  naam ,
Dil  ki  mere   jaageer  koi

Saare  din  haiN  eik  samaan ,
Mangal , Buddh  naa  Peer  koi

Kaaghaz - e - dil  per  chund  nuqoosh ,
Bun  hi  gayee  tasweer  koi

Kaash  mana  laata  meree ,
Roothhi  huee  taqdeer  koi

Faqq  hai  'Hasan'  kuyuuN  chehra  tera,
Dil  pe  lagaa  kya  teer  koi

 
Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya Kehne Siddiqui Ji..

Har ek A'shaar Lajawaab

Bahut Bahut AChe  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2011, 09:13:42 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 01, 2011, 06:18:03 AM
Humne  na  kee  tadbeer  koi ,
Likh  hi  gaya  taqdeer  koi

Dekhe  thhe  sapne  kya  kya ,
Such  na  hu'ee  taabeer  koi

Lagta  nahiN  hai  dil  tum  bin ,
Apnee  do  tasweer  koi

Shor  hai  har  soo  baatil  ka ,
Haq  ki  uthhe  shamsheer  koi

Ishq  hai  kya  abb  jaane  kaun ,
Raanjha  hai  naa  Heer  koi

Kar  gaya  pal  meiN  apne  naam ,
Dil  ki  mere   jaageer  koi

Saare  din  haiN  eik  samaan ,
Mangal , Buddh  naa  Peer  koi

Kaaghaz - e - dil  per  chund  nuqoosh ,
Bun  hi  gayee  tasweer  koi

Kaash  mana  laata  meree ,
Roothhi  huee  taqdeer  koi

Faqq  hai  'Hasan'  kuyuuN  chehra  tera,
Dil  pe  lagaa  kya  teer  koi

 

               teri kavish choarti hai asar dil pe hasan,
               tu insaan hai ya fakeer koi


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2011, 12:50:09 PM »
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woww --Hasan sahab--
gazabb ki ghazal kahi aapne.

shuru se end tak baandhe rakha hume Usual Smile

iss umdaa ghazal par bahot bahot daad aur mubarakbaad kubul karen

muskurate rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2011, 03:51:39 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 01, 2011, 06:18:03 AM
Humne  na  kee  tadbeer  koi ,
Likh  hi  gaya  taqdeer  koi

Dekhe  thhe  sapne  kya  kya ,
Such  na  hu'ee  taabeer  koi

Lagta  nahiN  hai  dil  tum  bin ,
Apnee  do  tasweer  koi

Shor  hai  har  soo  baatil  ka ,
Haq  ki  uthhe  shamsheer  koi

Ishq  hai  kya  abb  jaane  kaun ,
Raanjha  hai  naa  Heer  koi

Kar  gaya  pal  meiN  apne  naam ,
Dil  ki  mere   jaageer  koi

Saare  din  haiN  eik  samaan ,
Mangal , Buddh  naa  Peer  koi

Kaaghaz - e - dil  per  chund  nuqoosh ,
Bun  hi  gayee  tasweer  koi

Kaash  mana  laata  meree ,
Roothhi  huee  taqdeer  koi

Faqq  hai  'Hasan'  kuyuuN  chehra  tera,
Dil  pe  lagaa  kya  teer  koi

 
Siddiqui Ji,
Waaaaaaaaa......ah. Waaaaaa...h. Kya baat hai.
Daad kubul kijiye. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2011, 08:48:23 PM »
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Wah Siddiqui Sahab...Kamal kar diya aapne....bahut umda...daad..!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2011, 08:40:48 AM »
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mkv saheb,Aapko ghazal pasand aayi.Hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukrguzaar hoon.
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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2011, 08:54:52 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 01, 2011, 06:18:03 AM
Humne  na  kee  tadbeer  koi ,
Likh  hi  gaya  taqdeer  koi

Dekhe  thhe  sapne  kya  kya ,
Such  na  hu'ee  taabeer  koi

Lagta  nahiN  hai  dil  tum  bin ,
Apnee  do  tasweer  koi

Shor  hai  har  soo  baatil  ka ,
Haq  ki  uthhe  shamsheer  koi

Ishq  hai  kya  abb  jaane  kaun ,
Raanjha  hai  naa  Heer  koi

Kar  gaya  pal  meiN  apne  naam ,
Dil  ki  mere   jaageer  koi

Saare  din  haiN  eik  samaan ,
Mangal , Buddh  naa  Peer  koi

Kaaghaz - e - dil  per  chund  nuqoosh ,
Bun  hi  gayee  tasweer  koi

Kaash  mana  laata  meree ,
Roothhi  huee  taqdeer  koi

Faqq  hai  'Hasan'  kuyuuN  chehra  tera,
Dil  pe  lagaa  kya  teer  koi

 

Saddiqui Sahab BAhut Khoob

Kamal Ke Sher Kahen Hai Aapne

BAhut Khoob JAnab BAhut Khoob

Dil Se Daad Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2011, 12:54:59 PM »
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Parwaaz saheb,Aapke tabsire aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Yuunhi apna karam banaaye rakhiye.Duago,HASAN   
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2011, 04:37:40 PM »
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Saish shukla ji,Badi inayat ki aapne ghazal parhi.Hausla afzai ke liye mamnoon hoon.Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: October 03, 2011, 03:25:02 AM »
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Khwaish ji,Himmat afzai ke khoobsurat alfaaz ke liye tah e dil se mashkur hoon.Khush rahye aur apne pyaare kalaam se nawazte rahiye.HASAN
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«Reply #14 on: October 03, 2011, 05:29:45 AM »
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Sheba ji,Kis qadar zarranawazi ke saath hausla afzai ki hai. Aap ko is faqeer ki dheron duaae'N.Hasan
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