....~~Apney Hathon~~....

by HumTum on April 19, 2005, 10:53:10 AM
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apane haathon ki lakiron main basaale mujhko
main hoon tera, to nasib apana bana le mujhko..

mujhse tu puchane aayaaa hai wafaa ke maani
yeh teri sadaa-dili maar na daale mujhko...

main samandar bhi honn, moti bhi hoon, gotaazan bhi
koi bhi naam meraa,,, leke,,, bula le mujhko ..

tune dekhaa nahin aaine se aage kuchh bhi
khudaparasti main kahin tu na ganvaale mujhko..

kal ki baat aur hai main ab saa rahoon yaa na rahoon
jitanaa ji chaahe teraa,, aaj sataale mujhko..

khud ko main baant na daaloon kahin daaman-daaman
kar diyaa tuune agar mere havaale mujhko..

main jo kaantaa hoon to chal mujh se bachaakar daaman
main hoon gar phuul to joode main sajaale mujhko...

main khule dar ke kisi ghar kaa hoon saamaan pyaare
tu dabe paanv kabhi aake churaale mujhko...

tark-e-ulfat ki qasam bhi koi hoti hai qasam
tu kabhi yaad to kar bhoolane-vaale mujhko...

baadaa phir baadaa hai main zahar bhi pi jaaoon "Qateel"
shart ye hai koi baahon main sambhale mujhko...

Shayar hai janab "Qateel Shifai"

HumTum
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2005, 11:32:04 AM »
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WOWoWoWoW My favourite ghazal!!!! Always leaves me in tears :-( so touching !!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2005, 11:37:33 AM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
WOWoWoWoW My favourite ghazal!!!! Always leaves me in tears :-( so touching !!!!!!!!!



koi baat nhi talat ji ... roney se Ankhein saaf ho jati hai .... kabhi kabhi rona bhi chihye  :wink:
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2005, 06:32:30 AM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
WOWoWoWoW My favourite ghazal!!!! Always leaves me in tears :-( so touching !!!!!!!!!



koi baat nhi talat ji ... roney se Ankhein saaf ho jati hai .... kabhi kabhi rona bhi chihye  :wink:


JE janab APP nay Bikul THeak farmiya >>>KAY RONAY sa ANkhian Saaf HO jati HAI ..aur ANkhain saaf hOOnay KAY saath SaatH DIL BHE KUCH Halka HO jata HIA:)


ISLIya INSAN KO RONA TO thora Sa chahaye.....
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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2005, 06:34:27 AM »
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THe Ghazal IS really KOOll

MEIN NAY bHE jAB read KE to Mari bHE ankhoN SAY THORay Say ANso NIkal AYe ....
 
AUR wasey BHE jO BAat DIL Say NIkali HO TO US Baat PAY har INSAN kO RONa ata hia Zaroor..aur YEH Ghazal to Wasi HEE kafi achi hia aur >>>>SadOO hai/:) LOVe it >>>

THanx for sharing WITH us..........

>>>SAda KHUSH Rahain>>>

and always keep sharing good ghazals with us:)
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2005, 01:52:50 AM »
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Wonderful Choice Hum Tum....

Always Anjli
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2005, 02:14:11 AM »
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this ghzal is already posted




plz dont repeat  again and again






Yoinda Moderator



Always Faree
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2005, 11:39:12 PM »
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THe Ghazal IS really KOOll

MEIN NAY bHE jAB read KE to Mari bHE ankhoN SAY THORay Say ANso NIkal AYe ....
 
AUR wasey BHE jO BAat DIL Say NIkali HO TO US Baat PAY har INSAN kO RONa ata hia Zaroor..aur YEH Ghazal to Wasi HEE kafi achi hia aur >>>>SadOO hai/:) LOVe it >>>

THanx for sharing WITH us..........

>>>SAda KHUSH Rahain>>>

and always keep sharing good ghazals with us:)


Shukriya ji .. aur kya khoob kha apney
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2005, 11:39:47 PM »
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Wonderful Choice Hum Tum....

Always Anjli


Shukriya Anjli ji ..
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2005, 05:21:45 AM »
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khusboo jese rozz mile aafsane mein.........

ek purana khaat khola anjaane mein.......!!!!!!!!!! glasses2  glasses2  glasses2
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«Reply #10 on: August 02, 2005, 07:19:27 AM »
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apane haathon ki lakiron main basaale mujhko
main hoon tera, to nasib apana bana le mujhko..

mujhse tu puchane aayaaa hai wafaa ke maani
yeh teri sadaa-dili maar na daale mujhko...

main samandar bhi honn, moti bhi hoon, gotaazan bhi
koi bhi naam meraa,,, leke,,, bula le mujhko ..

tune dekhaa nahin aaine se aage kuchh bhi
khudaparasti main kahin tu na ganvaale mujhko..

kal ki baat aur hai main ab saa rahoon yaa na rahoon
jitanaa ji chaahe teraa,, aaj sataale mujhko..

khud ko main baant na daaloon kahin daaman-daaman
kar diyaa tuune agar mere havaale mujhko..

main jo kaantaa hoon to chal mujh se bachaakar daaman
main hoon gar phuul to joode main sajaale mujhko...

main khule dar ke kisi ghar kaa hoon saamaan pyaare
tu dabe paanv kabhi aake churaale mujhko...

tark-e-ulfat ki qasam bhi koi hoti hai qasam
tu kabhi yaad to kar bhoolane-vaale mujhko...

baadaa phir baadaa hai main zahar bhi pi jaaoon "Qateel"
shart ye hai koi baahon main sambhale mujhko...

Shayar hai janab "Qateel Shifai"

HumTum



wow.............very nice Humtum.......... very touching.................
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«Reply #11 on: August 19, 2005, 10:14:46 PM »
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hi  humtum
its  really nice hum tum,, lekin agar DIL dukh se bharra ho to ansoo har ik baat pe nikal aate hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, again wanna say nice ghazal,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, thanks for sharing with us

bye
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2005, 10:54:24 AM »
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very nice ghazal humtum Usual Smile :oops: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2005, 11:01:28 AM »
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khusboo jese rozz mile aafsane mein.........

ek purana khaat khola anjaane mein.......!!!!!!!!!! glasses2  glasses2  glasses2


kuch lines add karta hoon !!!!

mein to kab se tiyaar tha lekin
ussi ne der kar di stane mein


ik funny sher ...

itni badbuu aa rhi hai janab
kya jata hai aap ka nhane mein !!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2005, 11:02:05 AM »
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Thanks Khushi , Arzuu n Nidhi ji  !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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