Aqri Lamhon Ka ahetram to kar

by qadeer_junaid on April 18, 2010, 04:01:26 PM
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na kar saka khuch mera eak kaam to kar !!
apne haton se zindagi meri tamam to kar !!

khole jo ankh to wohi virani hai musasal !!
kabhi khawabgha me khuch der qiyam to kar !!

hayath kaati hai teri justuju me maine !!
ab aqri khuch lamho ka ahetram to kar !!

mai begunha hun ye gumaan duniya ko !!
de ilzaam mera naam badnaam to kar  !!

Ye iltaja hai bechain ankhon ki Qadeer !!
bhool ke maazi , pal do pal  araam to kar !!

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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2010, 04:07:40 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2010, 04:52:15 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on April 18, 2010, 04:07:40 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:bahut khoob

hausla afzai ke liye mumnoo hon .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2010, 05:38:40 PM »
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       Bahut khoob ek baar fir bahut achha likha hai qadeer ji.
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2010, 09:39:43 PM »
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wah wah janaab ,Abdul Qadeer sahab behtreen ghazal paish ki hai aap ne ,har shair umda ..lajawaab kardiya aap ne.iss ghazal ki hifazat ke liye majboor kardiya aapne.
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2010, 02:24:55 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai         Qadeer_Junaid ji....


zindagi bar toh kuch na kar sakha
bas aakhri lamhon ko mere naam toh kar
aur kuch umeed nahi ki jaati tumse
in akhri lamhon mein ye kaam to kar.....
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2010, 06:42:31 AM »
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Wah ji wah kya hi khoob likha hai Qadeer Sb. Marhaba.
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2010, 01:27:00 PM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on April 18, 2010, 09:39:43 PM
wah wah janaab ,Abdul Qadeer sahab behtreen ghazal paish ki hai aap ne ,har shair umda ..lajawaab kardiya aap ne.iss ghazal ki hifazat ke liye majboor kardiya aapne.

Behad mamno hon nazar sahab .. apki purquloos dad pa kar dil bagh bagh ho gaya ..jis andaz me apne ghazal ki pazirai ki hai ke bus yun samjho likhne ko himmat mil gayi .. is tarha hausla afzai karte rahen janab .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

apka bhai

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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2010, 01:32:37 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai..

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!

Bahut Hi zabardast peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2010, 10:00:47 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 19, 2010, 01:32:37 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai..

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!

Bahut Hi zabardast peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


ghazal ki pazirai ke liye mumno hon khawish sahab .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

Duwa go..

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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2010, 10:02:11 AM »
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bahut ache qadeer sahab...badhya likha hai
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2010, 02:20:13 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 18, 2010, 04:01:26 PM
na kar saka khuch mera eak kaam to kar !!
apne haton se zindagi meri tamam to kar !!

khole jo ankh to wohi virani hai musasal !!
kabhi khawabgha me khuch der qiyam to kar !!

hayath kaati hai teri justuju me maine !!
ab aqri khuch lamho ka ahetram to kar !!

mai begunha hun ye gumaan duniya ko !!
de ilzaam mera naam badnaam to kar  !!

Ye iltaja hai bechain ankhon ki Qadeer !!
bhool ke maazi , pal do pal  araam to kar !!

Qadeertoopchi



Bohot Khoob Qadeer Bhai, aapki ghazlain to humesha hi khoobsurat hoti hain...Bohot Khoob...!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2010, 03:50:02 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Qadeer Bhai,.
Mashallah, Allah Aur Taaqat Bakhshe Aapke Kalam Ko,.


Musalsal Haadso Se Bas Itni Shikaayat Hai,.
Ke Ye Aansoon Bahaane Ki Bhi Mohallat Nahi Dete,.

-Waseem Barelvi-
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2010, 07:14:35 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 23, 2010, 02:20:13 PM
Bohot Khoob Qadeer Bhai, aapki ghazlain to humesha hi khoobsurat hoti hain...Bohot Khoob...!!

karam nawazi ke liye mumno hon talat bahen..allah apko khush rakhe..


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«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2010, 01:28:42 PM »
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bhai aapko kya kahoon aap log toh mere senior hoon bas itna kahoonga kii aapki kalam se nikla ek lafz bhi ek khoob surat ghazal hai

do lines aapke liye agar pasand aaye toh chhote bhai ka saath dijiyega



badi der se aaye tum ab toh mujhe jaana hai
tere hisse kii main chhod gaya mehfil. mere hisse toh kabra ka aashiana hai
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