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ASAR.....A.B

by adil bechain on November 24, 2009, 12:55:45 PM

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«Reply #15 on: March 13, 2010, 05:40:20 AM »

thank u riyaz sb.

jahan tak bahr ke talluk se mujhe bataya gayaa hai ki iss baat ko samajhney ke liye bahut gahri maloomaat aur motaaley ki zaroorat hai....
iska ek thumb rule ya kah lain ki dehaati funda yeh hai ki apni ghazal ko gunguna kar dekhain agar kahin ataktey nahin hain to phir ye bahr main hai...

abb chahey isey koi accept kar ley yaa na karey....bahar haal ye bahas ka mudda nahin ho sakta........!

agar aap iss baarey mazeed bataain to meharbaani hogi....


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Re: ASAR.....A.B

«Reply #16 on: March 13, 2010, 05:45:32 AM »

jis tarah saam aati hai, dil key ainey ko samajhkar
wahi aasar zamaney ke ibadat ko samajhker,


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Re: ASAR.....A.B

«Reply #17 on: March 13, 2010, 08:36:58 AM »

Quote from: anandsagar on March 13, 2010, 05:45:32 AM

jis tarah saam aati hai, dil key ainey ko samajhkar
wahi aasar zamaney ke ibadat ko samajhker,

bahut khoob anand ji


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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2010, 08:37:26 PM »


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Re: ASAR.....A.B

«Reply #19 on: May 06, 2010, 09:29:25 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on May 05, 2010, 08:37:26 PM

thanx


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Re: ASAR.....A.B

«Reply #20 on: January 22, 2011, 07:57:26 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on May 05, 2010, 08:37:26 PM

THANX


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Anshumali

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Re: ASAR.....A.B

«Reply #21 on: January 23, 2011, 03:38:44 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on November 24, 2009, 12:55:45 PM

NIGAAH MERI AAJ USNEY BEZUBAA KAR DIAA,
   BHARI MEHFIL MAIN MUJHEY TANHAA KAR DIAA,

   KHO JAATEY HAIN RISHTEY SAAREY YAHAN AAKAR,
   QABR KO SABNEY MERI SUNAA KAR DIAA,

   THAA EHSAAS ZINDAGI KEY 'PALON' KAA KABHI,
   JAZBAAT MEREY AAJ USNEY FANAA KAR DIAA,

   KUCH ISS TARAH SEY DAGAA KIYA HAI MUJSEY,
   BHATKEY HUEY KO MERAA RAHNUMAA KAR DIAA,

   TOOT TEY NAHIN TAAREY FALAK KEY AAJ BECHAIN,
   RAAT KEY ANDHEREY KO USNEY BADNUMAA KAR DIAA...!!! sad7

Very Impressive ... Good Expression ... Adil Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !


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Re: ASAR.....A.B

«Reply #22 on: February 06, 2011, 08:21:39 AM »

Quote from: Anshumali on January 23, 2011, 03:38:44 AM

Very Impressive ... Good Expression ... Adil Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !

shukria anshumali ji