Ashq behte rahe....................................................Aqsh

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Saini sir aapki dee hui beher mein likhne ki koshish kee hai.Chunki wazan par jyaada dhyaan di hoon to shayad aapko khayalath thode kamjor maloom ho.Muaaf kar dijiyega.

Raat  bhar, ashq  behte  rahe
Tum  hame, yaad  aate  rahe

Aaj  tanha,  hui  zindagi
Tum  hame  yun,  rulaate  rahe

Lootkar  roshni,  pyaar  ki
Tum  hame  yun,  jalaate  rahe

Toot  kar  rah  gayi,  saans  sab
Tum  hame  yun,  mitaate  rahe

Chod  kar  jo,  chale  tum  gaye
Bas  hame  yaad,  aate  rahe
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 04:31:51 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2013, 05:11:09 AM »
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Saini sir aapki dee hui beher mein likhne ki koshish kee hai.Chunki wazan par jyaada dhyaan di hoon to shayad aapko khayalath thode kamjor maloom ho.Muaaf kar dijiyega.

Raat  bhar, ashq  behte  rahe
Tum  hame, yaad  aate  rahe

Aaj  tanha,  hui  zindagi
Tum  hame  yun,  rulaate  rahe

Lootkar  roshni,  pyaar  ki
Tum  hame  yun,  jalaate  rahe

Toot  kar  rah  gayi,  saans  sab
Tum  hame  yun,  mitaate  rahe

Chod  kar  jo,  chale  tum  gaye
Bas  hame  yaad,  aate  rahe
waah waah Aqsh ji lajawab
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2013, 05:17:35 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2013, 05:21:02 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 21, 2013, 04:24:58 AM
Saini sir aapki dee hui beher mein likhne ki koshish kee hai.Chunki wazan par jyaada dhyaan di hoon to shayad aapko khayalath thode kamjor maloom ho.Muaaf kar dijiyega.

Raat  bhar, ashq  behte  rahe
Tum  hame, yaad  aate  rahe
Raat bhar ashq hum bahaate rahe
Aaj  tanha,  hui  zindagi
Tum  hame  yun,  rulaate  rahe
inn dono sher mein koee raabta nahin dikhta
Lootkar  roshni,  pyaar  ki
Tum  hame  yun,  jalaate  rahe

Toot  kar  rah  gayi,  saans  sab
Tum  hame  yun,  mitaate  rahe

Chod  kar  jo,  chale  tum  gaye
Bas  hame  yaad,  aate  rahe



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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2013, 05:45:24 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2013, 06:16:22 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 21, 2013, 04:24:58 AM
Saini sir aapki dee hui beher mein likhne ki koshish kee hai.Chunki wazan par jyaada dhyaan di hoon to shayad aapko khayalath thode kamjor maloom ho.Muaaf kar dijiyega.

Raat  bhar, ashq  behte  rahe
Tum  hame, yaad  aate  rahe

Aaj  tanha,  hui  zindagi
Tum  hame  yun,  rulaate  rahe

Lootkar  roshni,  pyaar  ki
Tum  hame  yun,  jalaate  rahe

Toot  kar  rah  gayi,  saans  sab
Tum  hame  yun,  mitaate  rahe

Chod  kar  jo,  chale  tum  gaye
Bas  hame  yaad,  aate  rahe
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2013, 07:08:24 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: January 21, 2013, 08:57:03 AM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoobkalaam kahi hai aapne...
Bher ko achcha nibhaya hai daad.. Usual Smile


Aur ashaar bhi khoob rahe... Humari dheroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2013, 09:00:53 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: January 21, 2013, 10:08:58 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 21, 2013, 04:24:58 AM
Saini sir aapki dee hui beher mein likhne ki koshish kee hai.Chunki wazan par jyaada dhyaan di hoon to shayad aapko khayalath thode kamjor maloom ho.Muaaf kar dijiyega.

Raat  bhar, ashq  behte  rahe
Tum  hame, yaad  aate  rahe

Aaj  tanha,  hui  zindagi
Tum  hame  yun,  rulaate  rahe

Lootkar  roshni,  pyaar  ki
Tum  hame  yun,  jalaate  rahe

Toot  kar  rah  gayi,  saans  sab
Tum  hame  yun,  mitaate  rahe

Chod  kar  jo,  chale  tum  gaye
Bas  hame  yaad,  aate  rahe

good one aqsh.......!
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