Ashq behte rahe....................................................Aqsh

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«Reply #30 on: January 21, 2013, 11:32:01 AM »
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Quote from: azad mishra on January 21, 2013, 10:45:55 AM
bahoot khoob aqshji
thnx azad mishra jee
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«Reply #31 on: January 21, 2013, 02:06:45 PM »
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«Reply #32 on: January 21, 2013, 03:07:05 PM »
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nice keep it up
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«Reply #33 on: January 22, 2013, 01:21:06 PM »
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Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut khoob, bahut achhi koshish, aur haaN apne meiN confidence jagaane ki zarurat hai, baaqi aap agar Saini Jee ke saannidhya meiN haiN to wo dheere dheere sikha hi denge.
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«Reply #34 on: January 23, 2013, 05:34:24 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 21, 2013, 02:06:45 PM
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«Reply #35 on: January 23, 2013, 05:34:54 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 21, 2013, 03:07:05 PM
nice keep it up
thank you soooooo much saini sir.it means to me
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«Reply #36 on: January 23, 2013, 05:35:27 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 22, 2013, 01:21:06 PM
Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut khoob, bahut achhi koshish, aur haaN apne meiN confidence jagaane ki zarurat hai, baaqi aap agar Saini Jee ke saannidhya meiN haiN to wo dheere dheere sikha hi denge.
thank you so so so sooooooooooo much ifthakar jee
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«Reply #37 on: January 23, 2013, 05:24:57 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 21, 2013, 04:24:58 AM
Saini sir aapki dee hui beher mein likhne ki koshish kee hai.Chunki wazan par jyaada dhyaan di hoon to shayad aapko khayalath thode kamjor maloom ho.Muaaf kar dijiyega.

Raat  bhar, ashq  behte  rahe
Tum  hame, yaad  aate  rahe

Aaj  tanha,  hui  zindagi
Tum  hame  yun,  rulaate  rahe

Lootkar  roshni,  pyaar  ki
Tum  hame  yun,  jalaate  rahe

Toot  kar  rah  gayi,  saans  sab
Tum  hame  yun,  mitaate  rahe

Chod  kar  jo,  chale  tum  gaye
Bas  hame  yaad,  aate  rahe

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«Reply #38 on: January 24, 2013, 12:28:46 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on January 23, 2013, 05:24:57 PM
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thnx adil jee
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«Reply #39 on: January 24, 2013, 03:51:43 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #40 on: January 25, 2013, 06:10:58 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on January 24, 2013, 03:51:43 PM
very nice
thanks livingbytheday
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«Reply #41 on: January 25, 2013, 06:34:08 PM »
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Appreciable effort.
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«Reply #42 on: January 27, 2013, 10:27:41 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on January 25, 2013, 06:34:08 PM
Appreciable effort.

thank you sooooooooooooooo much mukesh jee
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