Aur bataa kya hai...................................saru........92

by SURESH SANGWAN on May 20, 2014, 02:35:41 PM
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कुछ  रोज़ का बहकना है और  दवा  क्या है
बीमार- ए- इश्क़ बता तेरा  मशवरा क्या है

ग़लत बयानियाँ तिरी कहानी ख़त्म कर गईं
हम  जान  ही  न  पाए  तेरा फ़ैसला क्या है

वो मुझे समझा रहें  हैं हाय क्या- क्या  कुछ
ये जाने बिना कि इस गली की हवा  क्या है

दुनियां पर उठी है नज़र ये सवाली जब जब
झूठी  तसल्ली के  सिवा और मिला क्या है

होले   से  चलती  हवा  की  सहेलियाँ  हैं ये
दामन -ए- तूफ़ां से खुश्बू का वास्ता क्या है

क्यूँ  झील  सी  आँखों  को तन्हा छोड़ चले
अश्क़ों  तुमसे  पूछती  हूँ  माज़रा  क्या  है

पूछे  हैं  वो  'सरु' की  तुमको  हुआ क्या है
जख़्म है  दर्द है  क़सक़ है और बता क्या है
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2014, 03:13:02 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2014, 03:13:11 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बहुत खूब....

होले   से  चलती  हवा  की  सहेलियाँ  हैं ये
दामन -ए- तूफ़ां से खुश्बू का वास्ता क्या है

पूछे  हैं  वो  'सरु' की  तुमको  हुआ क्या है
जख़्म है  दर्द है  क़सक़ है और बता क्या है

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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2014, 04:01:59 PM »
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thankewww sooooo much Premdep ji for such a nice compliments.....
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2014, 04:02:39 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya Amit ji
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on May 20, 2014, 03:13:11 PM
वाह....वाह....बहुत खूब....

होले   से  चलती  हवा  की  सहेलियाँ  हैं ये
दामन -ए- तूफ़ां से खुश्बू का वास्ता क्या है

पूछे  हैं  वो  'सरु' की  तुमको  हुआ क्या है
जख़्म है  दर्द है  क़सक़ है और बता क्या है

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Kya bat hai,,,,,,,

कुछ  रोज़ का बहकना है और  दवा  क्या है
बीमार- ए- इश्क़ बता तेरा  मशवरा क्या है

ग़लत बयानियाँ तिरी कहानी ख़त्म कर गईं
हम  जान  ही  न  पाए  तेरा फ़ैसला क्या है

वो मुझे समझा रहें  हैं हाय क्या- क्या  कुछ
ये जाने बिना कि इस गली की हवा  क्या है

Bahut khoob Sureshji.
Is khoosurat kalam par Rau Saweeqar kareiN.
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2014, 08:18:26 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2014, 09:48:48 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on May 20, 2014, 08:04:31 PM
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Kya bat hai,,,,,,,

कुछ  रोज़ का बहकना है और  दवा  क्या है
बीमार- ए- इश्क़ बता तेरा  मशवरा क्या है

ग़लत बयानियाँ तिरी कहानी ख़त्म कर गईं
हम  जान  ही  न  पाए  तेरा फ़ैसला क्या है

वो मुझे समझा रहें  हैं हाय क्या- क्या  कुछ
ये जाने बिना कि इस गली की हवा  क्या है

Bahut khoob Sureshji.
Is khoosurat kalam par Rau Saweeqar kareiN.
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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2014, 02:17:54 PM »
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Behad umdaa suresh ji ek ghazal yaad aa gayi jagjit singh and chitra singh ki gayi hui,

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waah waah bahut khoob Saru jee.
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