~~"Avval-Avval Ki Mohabbat"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on October 03, 2009, 06:32:51 AM
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Reza-Reza bikhre pade hain dil ke armaan,
Muskano se wasta nahi, gammo se hai khoob pehchaan,

Wo khush hai bahut door ja kar mujhse,
Mein bhool pao.n, avval-avval ki mohabbat nahi imkaa.n,

Mausam-e-hijraa.n aaya to yaad aaye tum,
Aayegi jab ihq-e-bahar, to aayenge yaad shahjahaa.n,

Marasam the jiss insaan se meri kayi,
Aaj wahi gujarta hai, samne se mere banker anjaan..

Mat sochna ki Azaabo.n se dukhi hai Shally,
De gaya tu mujhe wajah, jeene ko hai tera ehsaan..

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2009, 06:35:49 AM »
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Beautifuly written Shally.very touching.

Keep writing
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2009, 07:47:26 AM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Shally ji,touching  beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2009, 08:02:04 AM »
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Very touching lines.....bahut bahut bahut pyara likha hai aapne Shally ji
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2009, 11:01:34 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Shally!!!

Har Ek Lafz Behtereen,Bahut Khoob Aur Gehre Jazbaat!!!

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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2009, 11:06:15 AM »
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Bahut Accha Likha Hai Shally.. Lafzon Ka chunaaw Lajawab Hai.. Yahi Is Gazal Ki Khubsoorati Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2009, 02:09:05 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob..Shally JI Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2009, 02:21:45 PM »
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Beautiful creation Shally Ji Applause Applause
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