AWAARGI ACHCHI NAHEEN ......................... HASAN

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Bebasi   achhi   naheeN    hai  ,   Bekasi   achhi   naheeN
Jo  jiyeiN  ghut - ghut  ke  Hum , wo zindagi  achhi naheeN

Haal - e - Dil  keeje  bayaaN  par  thodi  Khuddaari  ke sath
Ishq   ke   izhaar   meiN   Be - chaargi   achhi   naheeN

Saaf - goi   se   na   ho   tere   Takabbur   ka    gumaaN
Haq   bhi   kahne   meiN   sada   Barjastagi  achhi  naheeN

Nafs  par  ye  Jabr - e - Bejaa  hai , Qanaa'at  to   nahheeN
Saamne   Darya   ho   to   Tishna - Labi   achhi   naheeN

Intahaa - e - Ishq   hai   sab   kuchh   bhula   dena , magar
Jo   bhulaa   de  Rabb  ko  , aisi  Aashiqui  achhi  naheeN

Uske  aage  sar   jhuka   jo   sab  ka   Paalan - haar  hai
Har  kas - o - Naakas  ke  dar  par  Bandigi  achhi  naheeN

De na deiN  ek  din  tumheiN  bhi  log  MajnooN  ka  khitaab
Koo - e - YaaraaN  meiN   'Hasan'   Awaargi   achhi   naheeN


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Takabbur = pride ; barjastagi = extempore / saying instantly ;
jabr= coercion ; qanaat = contentment ; tishnalabi = keeping thirsty
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2014, 07:34:07 PM »
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Aadaab Sri
zabardast ghazal hai..
Uske  aage  sar   jhuka   jo   sab  ka   Paalan - haar  hai
Har  kas - o - Naakas  ke  dar  par  Bandigi  achhi  naheeN
ghazal ka sabse khoobsurat sher.

baaki ke sabhee ashaar..shayraana andaaz bhara pada hai..lajavaab..dil khush ho gaya
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behad khubsurat lajawab gazal hasan hazaron dilli daad o mubarakbad
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2014, 08:46:01 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,Bahut hi khoobsurat aur jabardast ghazal hai.Aik RAU ke saath dili daad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2014, 09:13:15 PM »
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Bebasi   achhi   naheeN    hai  ,   Bekasi   achhi   naheeN
Jo  jiyeiN  ghut - ghut  ke  Hum , wo zindagi  achhi naheeN

Haal - e - Dil  keeje  bayaaN  par  thodi  Khuddaari  ke sath
Ishq   ke   izhaar   meiN   Be - chaargi   achhi   naheeN

Saaf - goi   se   na   ho   tere   Takabbur   ka    gumaaN
Haq   bhi   kahne   meiN   sada   Barjastagi  achhi  naheeN

Nafs  par  ye  Jabr - e - Bejaa  hai , Qanaa'at  to   nahheeN
Saamne   Darya   ho   to   Tishna - Labi   achhi   naheeN

Intahaa - e - Ishq   hai   sab   kuchh   bhula   dena , magar
Jo   bhulaa   de  Rabb  ko  , aisi  Aashiqui  achhi  naheeN

Uske  aage  sar   jhuka   jo   sab  ka   Paalan - haar  hai
Har  kas - o - Naakas  ke  dar  par  Bandigi  achhi  naheeN

De na deiN  ek  din  tumheiN  bhi  log  MajnooN  ka  khitaab
Koo - e - YaaraaN  meiN   'Hasan'   Awaargi   achhi   naheeN

behatreen peshkash dili daad qubool karen
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2014, 09:17:36 PM »
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Behad khoobsurat Rachna Sirji Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2014, 09:29:23 PM »
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Hasan ji beintehaan khoobsurat peshkash aur bahut hi umda sabhi ashaar rahe... tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi..yeh do sher bahut hi khooooooooooob lage...

Intahaa - e - Ishq   hai   sab   kuchh   bhula   dena , magar
Jo   bhulaa   de  Rabb  ko  , aisi  Aashiqui  achhi  naheeN

Uske  aage  sar   jhuka   jo   sab  ka   Paalan - haar  hai
Har  kas - o - Naakas  ke  dar  par  Bandigi  achhi  naheeN
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2014, 10:45:13 PM »
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Bebasi   achhi   naheeN    hai  ,   Bekasi   achhi   naheeN
Jo  jiyeiN  ghut - ghut  ke  Hum , wo zindagi  achhi naheeN

Haal - e - Dil  keeje  bayaaN  par  thodi  Khuddaari  ke sath
Ishq   ke   izhaar   meiN   Be - chaargi   achhi   naheeN

Saaf - goi   se   na   ho   tere   Takabbur   ka    gumaaN
Haq   bhi   kahne   meiN   sada   Barjastagi  achhi  naheeN

Nafs  par  ye  Jabr - e - Bejaa  hai , Qanaa'at  to   nahheeN
Saamne   Darya   ho   to   Tishna - Labi   achhi   naheeN

Intahaa - e - Ishq   hai   sab   kuchh   bhula   dena , magar
Jo   bhulaa   de  Rabb  ko  , aisi  Aashiqui  achhi  naheeN

Uske  aage  sar   jhuka   jo   sab  ka   Paalan - haar  hai
Har  kas - o - Naakas  ke  dar  par  Bandigi  achhi  naheeN

De na deiN  ek  din  tumheiN  bhi  log  MajnooN  ka  khitaab
Koo - e - YaaraaN  meiN   'Hasan'   Awaargi   achhi   naheeN


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Takabbur = pride ; barjastagi = extempore / saying instantly ;
jabr= coercion ; qanaat = contentment ; tishnalabi = keeping thirsty
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So nice.
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«Reply #8 on: March 10, 2014, 11:03:23 PM »
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Bebasi   achhi   naheeN    hai  ,   Bekasi   achhi   naheeN
Jo  jiyeiN  ghut - ghut  ke  Hum , wo zindagi  achhi naheeN

Haal - e - Dil  keeje  bayaaN  par  thodi  Khuddaari  ke sath
Ishq   ke   izhaar   meiN   Be - chaargi   achhi   naheeN


Saaf - goi   se   na   ho   tere   Takabbur   ka    gumaaN
Haq   bhi   kahne   meiN   sada   Barjastagi  achhi  naheeN

Nafs  par  ye  Jabr - e - Bejaa  hai , Qanaa'at  to   nahheeN
Saamne   Darya   ho   to   Tishna - Labi   achhi   naheeN


Intahaa - e - Ishq   hai   sab   kuchh   bhula   dena , magar
Jo   bhulaa   de  Rabb  ko  , aisi  Aashiqui  achhi  naheeN


Uske  aage  sar   jhuka   jo   sab  ka   Paalan - haar  hai
Har  kas - o - Naakas  ke  dar  par  Bandigi  achhi  naheeN

De na deiN  ek  din  tumheiN  bhi  log  MajnooN  ka  khitaab
Koo - e - YaaraaN  meiN   'Hasan'   Awaargi   achhi   naheeN


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Takabbur = pride ; barjastagi = extempore / saying instantly ;
jabr= coercion ; qanaat = contentment ; tishnalabi = keeping thirsty
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janaab khoobsoorat ghazal ko rau  ka nazrana Applause Applause Applause[/b][/i][/[/b][/i][/color]color]
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2014, 11:20:16 PM »
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Wah Wah Hasan Sahib Kyaa Baat Hai Bahut Khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Surindar.N       Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 11, 2014, 12:05:25 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: March 11, 2014, 01:19:12 AM »
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Bebasi   achhi   naheeN    hai  ,   Bekasi   achhi   naheeN
Jo  jiyeiN  ghut - ghut  ke  Hum , wo zindagi  achhi naheeN

Haal - e - Dil  keeje  bayaaN  par  thodi  Khuddaari  ke sath
Ishq   ke   izhaar   meiN   Be - chaargi   achhi   naheeN

Saaf - goi   se   na   ho   tere   Takabbur   ka    gumaaN
Haq   bhi   kahne   meiN   sada   Barjastagi  achhi  naheeN

Nafs  par  ye  Jabr - e - Bejaa  hai , Qanaa'at  to   nahheeN
Saamne   Darya   ho   to   Tishna - Labi   achhi   naheeN

Intahaa - e - Ishq   hai   sab   kuchh   bhula   dena , magar
Jo   bhulaa   de  Rabb  ko  , aisi  Aashiqui  achhi  naheeN

Uske  aage  sar   jhuka   jo   sab  ka   Paalan - haar  hai
Har  kas - o - Naakas  ke  dar  par  Bandigi  achhi  naheeN

De na deiN  ek  din  tumheiN  bhi  log  MajnooN  ka  khitaab
Koo - e - YaaraaN  meiN   'Hasan'   Awaargi   achhi   naheeN


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Takabbur = pride ; barjastagi = extempore / saying instantly ;
jabr= coercion ; qanaat = contentment ; tishnalabi = keeping thirsty
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sir aapke qalam ki tareef krna mushkil hai , lajawaab kalaam
bohat bohat hee khoob , bohat c daad,
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Waah kya kehne sir..
Laajwabi ki misaal hai ye kalaam..
Dhero dhero daad apko..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: March 11, 2014, 03:44:35 AM »
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Haal - e - Dil  keeje  bayaaN  par  thodi  Khuddaari  ke sath
Ishq   ke   izhaar   meiN   Be - chaargi   achhi   naheeN

Intahaa - e - Ishq   hai   sab   kuchh   bhula   dena , magar
Jo   bhulaa   de  Rabb  ko  , aisi  Aashiqui  achhi  naheeN

Uske  aage  sar   jhuka   jo   sab  ka   Paalan - haar  hai
Har  kas - o - Naakas  ke  dar  par  Bandigi  achhi  naheeN

De na deiN  ek  din  tumheiN  bhi  log  MajnooN  ka  khitaab
Koo - e - YaaraaN  meiN   'Hasan'   Awaargi   achhi   naheeN


Waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah khoobsoorat ghazal Hasan sir, sabhi sher ek se badh kar ek, maza aa gaya padh ke. DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #14 on: March 11, 2014, 10:03:54 AM »
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bebasi   achhi   naheeN    hai  ,   Bekasi   achhi   naheeN
Jo  jiyeiN  ghut - ghut  ke  Hum , wo zindagi  achhi naheeN

Haal - e - Dil  keeje  bayaaN  par  thodi  Khuddaari  ke sath
Ishq   ke   izhaar   meiN   Be - chaargi   achhi   naheeN

Saaf - goi   se   na   ho   tere   Takabbur   ka    gumaaN
Haq   bhi   kahne   meiN   sada   Barjastagi  achhi  naheeN

Nafs  par  ye  Jabr - e - Bejaa  hai , Qanaa'at  to   nahheeN
Saamne   Darya   ho   to   Tishna - Labi   achhi   naheeN

Intahaa - e - Ishq   hai   sab   kuchh   bhula   dena , magar
Jo   bhulaa   de  Rabb  ko  , aisi  Aashiqui  achhi  naheeN

Uske  aage  sar   jhuka   jo   sab  ka   Paalan - haar  hai
Har  kas - o - Naakas  ke  dar  par  Bandigi  achhi  naheeN

De na deiN  ek  din  tumheiN  bhi  log  MajnooN  ka  khitaab
Koo - e - YaaraaN  meiN   'Hasan'   Awaargi   achhi   naheeN
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