Baadal

by suman59 on July 03, 2012, 10:17:43 PM
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ek ghazal.. plz friends read and comment

Bharasti tez hawawon mein bisra gaye badal
hamari aankh mein kuch bhoond tehra gaye badal

kahi per jaa giri bhijlee na jaane kya hua hoga
are woh dekh kitni jor se takra gaye badal

nahi tha haat mein chaata bhala woh dhur kyu rehte
kisee ko dekhkar is haal mein gehra gaye badal

garajkar is tarah aaye ki jaane kya karenge woh
hawa ke ek jhonke se chithra gaye badal

hamare gaon se guzre kabhi to, tez se guzre
kahani fir usee ethihas ki dohra gaye badal

mahinon mein edhar laute magar jaane kidhar laute
ki humko dhur se hi dekhkar katra gaye badal

bhari barsat mein toh aag bharsi thi yahan dekho
is kadkadathi thand mein ethra gaye badal
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2012, 03:28:40 AM »
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bahut hee khoobsoorat
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2012, 10:25:22 AM »
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very very good, lutf aa gaya padhkar
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2012, 06:36:48 PM »
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Aapki is ghajal ke kya kahne.
khayaal-o-ehsaas to bahut gahre..
itni sanjeedgee se likha hai...ki tareef ke liye shabda nahee mere paas.
Bahut umda..
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2012, 11:35:12 PM »
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wah kya bat hai, maja aa gaya
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2012, 12:43:54 PM »
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wahhh kya khoob likha hai :-D.
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2012, 06:13:35 PM »
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bahut hi khub aunty ji..... kya likha hai aapne umda qalaam... padhkar behad achha laga...... dhero daad aur dher sara pyar bhi.........

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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2012, 09:23:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya dr jee, Living jee, nandbahu jee, nidhi jee and saudagar beta.
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2012, 03:07:11 PM »
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suman ji, bahut hi khoobsurat gazal pesh ki hai aapne bahut bahut badhai
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2012, 03:53:43 PM »
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boht boht khub ghazal likhi apne
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2012, 04:27:37 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 04, 2012, 03:28:40 AM
bahut hee khoobsoorat
thank you dr. jee
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«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2012, 04:28:34 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on July 04, 2012, 10:25:22 AM
very very good, lutf aa gaya padhkar

tks jee
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«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2012, 04:29:22 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 04, 2012, 06:36:48 PM
Aapki is ghajal ke kya kahne.
khayaal-o-ehsaas to bahut gahre..
itni sanjeedgee se likha hai...ki tareef ke liye shabda nahee mere paas.
Bahut umda..

tks jee
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2012, 04:30:23 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on July 04, 2012, 11:35:12 PM
wah kya bat hai, maja aa gaya

Quote from: nidhi_yadein on July 05, 2012, 12:43:54 PM
wahhh kya khoob likha hai :-D.

thank you very much nand jee and nidhi jee
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«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2012, 04:31:51 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 05, 2012, 06:13:35 PM
bahut hi khub aunty ji..... kya likha hai aapne umda qalaam... padhkar behad achha laga...... dhero daad aur dher sara pyar bhi.........

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