Baad-e-sabaa mein ghul rahee hai shabnameen nameen!

by abdbundeli on May 04, 2012, 08:07:26 AM
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Takiyah, tamaam raat, bhigotey rahey hain woh!
Yah sach hai, sabra hijra mein khotey rahey hain woh!!

Ho jaayeyn gar na surkh, to, uyoon kyaa kareyn:
Khaarey hain ashk jinmein dubotey rahey hain woh?
 
Baad-e-sabaa mein ghul rahee hai shabnameen nameen:
A'ariz kisee gulaab kaa dhotey rahey hain woh!

Main kyaa bataaun, yuun hi kiyaa jaag intizaar?
Un ney kahaa hai, raat ko sotey rahey hain woh!!

Lamhoun mein nihaan laakh, daastaan-e-shab-e-wasl;
Dhaagoun mein khayaaloun key pirotey rahey hain woh!

Unkey suroor-e-husn kee had to bataa, 'abd'!
'Fasl-e-bahaar baarahaa botey rahey hain woh!!'

            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2012, 09:58:27 AM »
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Bhut khoob gajal likhi h aapne espe daad hajir h.
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 04, 2012, 09:58:27 AM
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Thanks, Dr. Saini!
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on May 04, 2012, 10:35:15 AM
Bhut khoob gajal likhi h aapne espe daad hajir h.

Shukriyah, Masoom ji!
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 04, 2012, 08:07:26 AM
Takiyah, tamaam raat, bhigotey rahey hain woh!
Yah sach hai, sabra hijra mein khotey rahey hain woh!!

Ho jaayeyn gar na surkh, to, uyoon kyaa kareyn:
Khaarey hain ashk jinmein dubotey rahey hain woh?
 
Baad-e-sabaa mein ghul rahee hai shabnameen nameen:
A'ariz kisee gulaab kaa dhotey rahey hain woh!

Main kyaa bataaun, yuun hi kiyaa jaag intizaar?
Un ney kahaa hai, raat ko sotey rahey hain woh!!

Lamhoun mein nihaan laakh, daastaan-e-shab-e-wasl;
Dhaagoun mein khayaaloun key pirotey rahey hain woh!

Unkey suroor-e-husn kee had to bataa, 'abd'!
'Fasl-e-bahaar baarahaa botey rahey hain woh!!'

            - abd bundeli


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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2012, 03:22:06 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Abd ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2012, 04:09:40 PM »
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Bahut Khoob abd bhai.
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ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause.....good essence abdjii...
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waaaaah Sirji waaah
behad umda ghazal
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waaaaah Sirji waaah
behad umda ghazal
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waaaaah Sirji waaah
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bahut hi khoob, bahut khoob

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