Baad-e-sabaa mein ghul rahee hai shabnameen nameen!

by abdbundeli on May 04, 2012, 08:07:26 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2012, 10:19:00 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriyah, 'Soudagar' ji!
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«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2012, 10:21:39 AM »
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verii naaaaaaaice abd

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, 'khamosh' ji!
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«Reply #17 on: May 05, 2012, 10:22:32 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Abd ji...!!!

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji!
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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2012, 10:23:38 AM »
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Bahut Khoob abd bhai.

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, Iftakhar ji!
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«Reply #19 on: May 05, 2012, 10:25:10 AM »
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nice

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah janaab!
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«Reply #20 on: May 05, 2012, 10:25:59 AM »
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ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause.....good essence abdjii...

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, Dolly ji!
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«Reply #21 on: May 05, 2012, 10:27:09 AM »
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waaaaah Sirji waaah
behad umda ghazal
waaaaah Sirji waaah
behad umda ghazal

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, 'sarfira' ji!
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«Reply #22 on: May 05, 2012, 10:28:17 AM »
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bahut hi khoob, bahut khoob

jasbir singh

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, Jasbir bhai!
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«Reply #23 on: May 05, 2012, 11:01:03 AM »
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Takiyah, tamaam raat, bhigotey rahey hain woh!
Yah sach hai, sabra hijra mein khotey rahey hain woh!!

Ho jaayeyn gar na surkh, to, uyoon kyaa kareyn:
Khaarey hain ashk jinmein dubotey rahey hain woh?
 
Baad-e-sabaa mein ghul rahee hai shabnameen nameen:
A'ariz kisee gulaab kaa dhotey rahey hain woh!

Main kyaa bataaun, yuun hi kiyaa jaag intizaar?
Un ney kahaa hai, raat ko sotey rahey hain woh!!

Lamhoun mein nihaan laakh, daastaan-e-shab-e-wasl;
Dhaagoun mein khayaaloun key pirotey rahey hain woh!

Unkey suroor-e-husn kee had to bataa, 'abd'!
'Fasl-e-bahaar baarahaa botey rahey hain woh!!'

            - abd bundeli

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut khubsoorat qalam abd sahab mubarakbad qabool farmaien
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«Reply #24 on: May 05, 2012, 01:10:17 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut khubsoorat qalam abd sahab mubarakbad qabool farmaien

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Pankaj ji!
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«Reply #26 on: June 26, 2012, 04:15:48 AM »
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Congratulations ,

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«Reply #27 on: June 27, 2012, 07:47:19 AM »
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very nice sir, very nice
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«Reply #28 on: July 03, 2012, 03:09:01 PM »
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very nice sir, very nice

Dear 'day', thanks!
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