Baaqi hai

by bekarar on March 23, 2009, 08:29:54 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 24, 2009, 01:34:43 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 23, 2009, 12:00:09 PM
Hui muddat ke na koi taqraar hui tumse.......Subhan_allah kya pyaari baat kahi hain dost maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch itna beyakini ka aalam tha logho ka meri maut pe
Jab uthne laga janaza sab kehne lage GHAYEL me jaan baaqi hain

shukriya sajid...mujhe bhi ye line bahoot pasand hai.....aur do line tumne bahoot hi khoob likha hai...
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«Reply #16 on: March 24, 2009, 01:37:02 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 23, 2009, 03:18:37 PM
Wah! Wah! Wah!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..Har ek sher Lajaawab hai..bahut hi Khoob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
bas aapse ek hi shikayat sanjeev Bro,zara likhne ki Frequency Badhaiye,Hamesha Inteezar sa rehta hai aapki likhi Kavitao ka.. Thumbs UP
daad ke liye shukriya khwaish bro ...aapki shikayat jayaj hai par in dino jimmedaariyan kuch is kadar badh gai hai ki time hi nahi milta...jald hi sab-kuch normal ho to fir se purana andaaz hoga humara WADA
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«Reply #17 on: March 24, 2009, 01:38:46 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sanjeev ji Applause Applause Applause
bahoot shukriya roja...
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«Reply #18 on: March 24, 2009, 01:39:36 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on March 24, 2009, 07:14:34 AM
bohut khoob bekarar ji Applause
shukriya bhawna
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«Reply #19 on: March 24, 2009, 08:13:49 PM »
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Bohot bohot khoob Sanjeev Ji .... bohot achcha likha hai aapne..!
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«Reply #20 on: April 16, 2009, 07:02:41 AM »
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aapka comment padh-kar bahoot achcha laga talat shukriya
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«Reply #21 on: April 16, 2009, 09:46:12 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on March 23, 2009, 08:29:54 AM

dil me naakam hasraton ka, toofaan baaqi hai
bujh chuke housalon me ab bhi jaan baaqi hai

zara thahro, meri haar ka jashn manane walon,
jang jaari hai abhi,elan-e-anjaam baaqi hai,

meri aukaat ko na aanko, khali girah ko dekh-ke
khareed lun tumhe bhi jisase, wo mera IMAAN baaqi hai,



Waah..Meri Jaan..Sanjiv bhai Sa..Aap To Kalum Se Jehaad Karne lage Ho..
Ik Mujaahidana Koshish Dikh Rahi aapk Ash'aar Likhne Mein
Jabardust...La - Raib Jazbaa o Zor e bazu Kya Misaalein de koi..!!
Behtrin o al'a Hai Ye Teen ash'aar.


Waise aapko Indo paak seema pe chale jaana chahiye..,,Posting Karwaadun Kya  Usual Smile
 
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«Reply #22 on: April 21, 2009, 12:41:04 PM »
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Kamal likha hai Bekarar Ji, Wah.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #23 on: April 21, 2009, 02:19:53 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahoot khoob Sanjeev ji
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«Reply #24 on: April 27, 2009, 06:29:56 AM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on April 16, 2009, 09:46:12 AM
Waah..Meri Jaan..Sanjiv bhai Sa..Aap To Kalum Se Jehaad Karne lage Ho..
Ik Mujaahidana Koshish Dikh Rahi aapk Ash'aar Likhne Mein
Jabardust...La - Raib Jazbaa o Zor e bazu Kya Misaalein de koi..!!
Behtrin o al'a Hai Ye Teen ash'aar.


Waise aapko Indo paak seema pe chale jaana chahiye..,,Posting Karwaadun Kya  Usual Smile
 

Tareef ke liye bahoot shukriya bhai raza.....waise mujhe border par bhejne wale the aap khud kahan gayab ho?
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«Reply #25 on: April 27, 2009, 06:31:34 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 16, 2009, 09:55:07 AM
Wah Wah Sanjeev Bhai
Bohat Hi Umda Likha Hai Aapne
Maafi Chahta Hoon Padne Mein
Derr Kardi Meine ...
Aur Last Waali Line
To Aapne Kamaal Ki Likhi Hai
Dil Ko Chhu Gayi....

chalo is bahane aapke dil ko choone ka mouka to mila.....shuhab bahoot shukriya
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«Reply #26 on: April 27, 2009, 06:32:55 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 21, 2009, 12:41:04 PM
Kamal likha hai Bekarar Ji, Wah.
SARVESH RASTOGI
shukriya rastogi sahab.....kamal to aapki najron ka hai janab....
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«Reply #27 on: April 27, 2009, 06:34:01 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 21, 2009, 02:19:53 PM
Applause Applause Applause bahoot khoob Sanjeev ji

bahoot dhanywaad pooja ji
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«Reply #28 on: April 27, 2009, 07:05:42 AM »
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 Applause  Applause  Applause
Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Brother...

Shally.
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«Reply #29 on: July 01, 2009, 12:42:41 AM »
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Wah wah Bekarar ji,very beautiful gazal,wonderful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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