BAAT BAN JAAYE.............................................SAINI

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Paas   aao   to   baat   ban   jaaye.
Dil   lagaao   to   baat  ban  jaaye.

Jo ghazal  kah  rahaa  hooN usko tum.
Gugunaao    to    baat  ban    jaaye.

Wasl  kee   raat meN kyooN roothe ho.
Maan    jaao   to  baat  ban   jaaye.

Mere  kashtee  ko  ab khalaa ban kar.
Tum  chalaao  to  baat   ban   jaaye.

Mujhko phooloN kaa shauk hai fir tum.
Muskuraao    to   baat   ban   jaaye.

Mere  aghosh   ke    samunder    meN.
Ab   samaao   to   baat   ban  jaaye.

Mere  aankhoN   kee  teergee meNtum.
Timtimaao   to    baat  ban   jaaye.


Sookh  kar  ho gayaa ye tan kaantaa.
Seb    khaao   to  baat  ban  jaaye.

Mere  haathoN  meN  haath dekar tum.
Fir  lajaao   to   baat  ban  jaaye.

Betee  baatoN   ke fiqr kyaa keeje.
Bhool  jaao  to  baat   ban  jaaye.

Roz  ‘saini’ko   yooN  sataane  se.
Baaz  aao  to   baat   ban   jaaye.

Dr.Surendra Saini

पास  आओ  तो बात  बन  जाए ।
दिल लगाओ तो बात  बन  जाए ।।

जो ग़ज़ल कह रहा हूँ  उसको तुम ।
गुनगुनाओ  तो  बात  बन  जाए ।।

वस्ल   की रात में क्यूं  रूठे  हो ।
मान  जाओ तो बात  बन  जाए ।।

मेरी कश्ती को अब ख़ला बन कर ।
तुम  चलाओ  तो बात बन जाए ।।

मुझको फूलों का शौक है फिर तुम ।
मुस्कुराओ   तो   बात बन जाए ।।

मेरी    आग़ोश    के समुंदर में ।
अब  समाओ  तो बात बन जाए ।।

मेरी  आँखों   की तीरगी में तुम ।
टिमटिमाओ   तो बात बन जाए ।।

सूख  कर  हो गया ये तन काँटा ।
सेब  खाओ  तो बात  बन जाए ।।

मेरे  हाथों  में   हाथ देकर तुम ।
फिर लजाओ तो  बात बन जाए ।।

बीती बातों की फ़िक़्र  क्या कीजे ।
भूल  जाओ तो बात बन जाए ।।

रोज़  'सैनी 'को यूँ सताने से ।
बाज़ आओ तो  बात बन जाए ।।

डाo सुरेन्द्र सैनी  
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2013, 11:04:25 AM »
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Baat ban gayi Saini Ji, bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2013, 11:42:52 AM »
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aha... baat ban jayegi dr sb.... bahut acche.......
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2013, 11:56:39 AM »
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Baat banii ki nahii bhaai jaan.
Any way grt composition
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2013, 12:41:53 PM »
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nice peshkash , saini saheb.
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2013, 12:55:55 PM »
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waah waah waah kya baat hai saini sir. so romantic dheron daad aapko is kalam par
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bahoot bahoot sundar rachna sir dhero dad
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2013, 03:00:38 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 18, 2013, 10:48:27 AM
Paas   aao   to   baat   ban   jaaye.
Dil   lagaao   to   baat  ban  jaaye.

Jo ghazal  kah  rahaa  hooN usko tum.
Gugunaao    to    baat  ban    jaaye.

Wasl  kee   raat meN kyooN roothe ho.
Maan    jaao   to  baat  ban   jaaye.

Mere  kashtee  ko  ab khalaa ban kar.
Tum  chalaao  to  baat   ban   jaaye.

Mujhko phooloN kaa shauk hai fir tum.
Muskuraao    to   baat   ban   jaaye.

Mere  aghosh   ke    samunder    meN.
Ab   samaao   to   baat   ban  jaaye.

Mere  aankhoN   kee  teergee meNtum.
Timtimaao   to    baat  ban   jaaye.


Sookh  kar  ho gayaa ye tan kaantaa.
Seb    khaao   to  baat  ban  jaaye.

Mere  haathoN  meN  haath dekar tum.
Fir  lajaao   to   baat  ban  jaaye.

Betee  baatoN   ke fiqr kyaa keeje.
Bhool  jaao  to  baat   ban  jaaye.

Roz  ‘saini’ko   yooN  sataane  se.
Baaz  aao  to   baat   ban   jaaye.

Dr.Surendra Saini

पास  आओ  तो बात  बन  जाए ।
दिल लगाओ तो बात  बन  जाए ।।

जो ग़ज़ल कह रहा हूँ  उसको तुम ।
गुनगुनाओ  तो  बात  बन  जाए ।।

वस्ल   की रात में क्यूं  रूठे  हो ।
मान  जाओ तो बात  बन  जाए ।।

मेरी कश्ती को अब ख़ला बन कर ।
तुम  चलाओ  तो बात बन जाए ।।

मुझको फूलों का शौक है फिर तुम ।
मुस्कुराओ   तो   बात बन जाए ।।

मेरी    आग़ोश    के समुंदर में ।
अब  समाओ  तो बात बन जाए ।।

मेरी  आँखों   की तीरगी में तुम ।
टिमटिमाओ   तो बात बन जाए ।।

सूख  कर  हो गया ये तन काँटा ।
सेब  खाओ  तो बात  बन जाए ।।

मेरे  हाथों  में   हाथ देकर तुम ।
फिर लजाओ तो  बात बन जाए ।।

बीती बातों की फ़िक़्र  क्या कीजे ।
भूल  जाओ तो बात बन जाए ।।

रोज़  'सैनी 'को यूँ सताने से ।
बाज़ आओ तो  बात बन जाए ।।

डाo सुरेन्द्र सैनी 


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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2013, 04:40:38 PM »
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waah bohat khoob saini ji
hr sher khoobsoorat huya hai ,......
bohat bohat bohat c daad,............
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great sir
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2013, 04:49:58 AM »
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Amit ji shukriya
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bohut khoob sir umda ghazal hai daaad qubool kareN
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simply superb sir
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