"bade zamaane lage"

by aaina on June 13, 2009, 07:40:25 AM
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Mujhay mila hai wo abke bhut zamaane mai
Lage kaii baras usko mere paas aane mai

Wo jaanta hai ke mein uska humnafas thehra
Magr laga wqt usko mujhay bataane mai

Mein jaanta hi na tha ke wo aise qareeb aayega
Youngo.n se baitha tha wo mere hi fasaane mai

Ye qurbato.n ka silsila bhi ajeeb hi thehra
Wahi sila hai is dour mein hoke agle zamane mai

Ye baat ab meri samjh mai aa hi gayi aslam
Wo mumtaaz hai mere ghareebkhaane mai
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2009, 08:35:16 AM »
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Nice one Aslam Ji...... Thumbs UP
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2009, 09:01:00 AM »
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waah Wah Kya khoob LIkha hai.. bahoot achi Ghazal hai Aslam Ji.
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2009, 09:45:19 AM »
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Mujhay mila hai wo abke bhut zamaane mai
Lage kaii baras usko mere paas aane mai

Wo jaanta hai ke mein uska humnafas thehra
Magr laga wqt usko mujhay bataane mai

Mein jaanta hi na tha ke wo aise qareeb aayega
Youngo.n se baitha tha wo mere hi fasaane mai

Ye qurbato.n ka silsila bhi ajeeb hi thehra
Wahi sila hai is dour mein hoke agle zamane mai

Ye baat ab meri samjh mai aa hi gayi aslam
Wo mumtaaz hai mere ghareebkhaane mai



GUD 1 AAINA SB
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2009, 04:46:57 PM »
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Kya baat hai Aaina Ji
Bahut Khoooob
SARVESH RASTOGI
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aaina
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2009, 04:23:03 AM »
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Nice one Aslam Ji...... Thumbs UP

thnxxxxx jannatjahan
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aaina
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2009, 04:24:27 AM »
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waah Wah Kya khoob LIkha hai.. bahoot achi Ghazal hai Aslam Ji.

thnxxxxxx so much for ur appriciation sophi ji
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aaina
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2009, 04:25:37 AM »
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GUD 1 AAINA SB

shukriya khamosh_aawaaz
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aaina
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2009, 04:26:52 AM »
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Kya baat hai Aaina Ji
Bahut Khoooob
SARVESH RASTOGI

bhut bhut skukriya servesh sahab
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2009, 04:38:54 AM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji,very nice and beutiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2009, 09:57:06 AM »
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Mujhay mila hai wo abke bhut zamaane mai
Lage kaii baras usko mere paas aane mai

Wo jaanta hai ke mein uska humnafas thehra
Magr laga wqt usko mujhay bataane mai

Mein jaanta hi na tha ke wo aise qareeb aayega
Youngo.n se baitha tha wo mere hi fasaane mai

Ye qurbato.n ka silsila bhi ajeeb hi thehra
Wahi sila hai is dour mein hoke agle zamane mai

Ye baat ab meri samjh mai aa hi gayi aslam
Wo mumtaaz hai mere ghareebkhaane mai


Waah..Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2009, 10:10:03 AM »
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bahut achche aslam bhai......
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aaina
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2009, 10:36:12 PM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji,very nice and beutiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thnxxxxx so much madhu for ur appriciation
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aaina
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«Reply #13 on: July 15, 2009, 10:44:13 PM »
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bahut achche aslam bhai......

shukriya bro
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aaina
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«Reply #14 on: July 15, 2009, 10:45:09 PM »
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Waah..Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji

bhut bhut shukriya talat
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