Badi shiddat se mile unse hum, sawal tha hosh mein reh payenge hum

by thegrimreaper on August 02, 2009, 04:47:28 PM
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Aaj ek Ghazal likhne ki zurrat ki hai, sharing with you people, hope to hear from you all
.Ye ghazal kisi khaas ke naam



Badi shiddat se mile unse hum, sawal tha hosh mein reh payenge hum
Waqt aise beeta baaton mein maano puchte hum sawal, apne aap ko pehchaan payenge hum

kabhi unki hansi, kabhi unke gum
madhosh kar dete aur sunte rehte hum

wo samay kya tha ek dhaar si thi
lag gayi maano ek vaar si thi

chalne lage wo, dekhte rahe hum
hosh na tha , tha to bas unki hansi aur hum

wo the khush-mizaaz , aur khush gawar hum
bas chehekte wo to mehekte hum

ek yaad dhundli si chod gaye
ek mehak madhosh chod gaye

Aaj reh gaye bas hum aur akele hum

badi shiddat se mile unse hum
aur puchte reh gaye hosh mein reh payenge hum...
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2009, 07:38:06 PM »
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Wah wah Grim reaper ji,bahut khoobsurat gazal hai,mindblowing creation.
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2009, 07:49:28 PM »
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shukriya madhuwesh ji icon_salut
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2009, 06:32:49 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI     THEGRIMREAPER JI......

MILEY KYA UNSE HUM,
BAN GAYE UNKE SANAM,
APNA HOSH GAWA BHAITE HUM,
APNI PEHCHAAN KHO BHAITE HUM.
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2009, 08:00:50 AM »
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Bahut khoob Cara ji beautiful lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2009, 08:32:58 AM »
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Nice one TGR Ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2009, 11:28:23 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Reaper Ji  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2009, 01:06:27 PM »
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waah Grim reaper ji... Bahoot Khoob !.. I like the title very much Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 03, 2009, 02:21:17 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 03, 2009, 06:32:49 AM
KYA BAAT HAI     THEGRIMREAPER JI......

MILEY KYA UNSE HUM,
BAN GAYE UNKE SANAM,
APNA HOSH GAWA BHAITE HUM,
APNI PEHCHAAN KHO BHAITE HUM.

shukriya cara ji aur aap ki panktiyaan bhi kuch kam nahi
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«Reply #9 on: August 03, 2009, 02:22:39 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on August 03, 2009, 09:19:03 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot umda bahot behatreen likha hai Grim ji
awesome ghazal  Thumbs UP

shukriya kaash ji Thumbs UP
meri gazal saraahna ka paatr bane isse zyaada achha kya hoga
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«Reply #10 on: August 03, 2009, 02:24:37 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 03, 2009, 11:28:23 AM
Bohot Khoob Reaper Ji  icon_thumleft

shukriya Celmira ji



"Saraahna ho to kya gum hai
aapne hume iske kaabil maana
ye kya kam hai..."
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«Reply #11 on: August 03, 2009, 02:25:54 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 03, 2009, 01:06:27 PM
waah Grim reaper ji... Bahoot Khoob !.. I like the title very much Usual Smile

shukriya SOPHI ji
aapne saraaha aur aapko pasand aaya hello
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«Reply #12 on: August 03, 2009, 02:34:57 PM »
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good work dear keep it up.......

tera kissa kucch aisa ootha mehfil main
sar apna humko jhukaana pada
badnaam toh ho gaye thay bahut pahle
aaj sharm se mar jaana pada
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«Reply #13 on: August 03, 2009, 02:37:10 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 03, 2009, 08:32:58 AM
Nice one TGR Ji

shukriya Rajesh harish ji aapko pasand aayi
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«Reply #14 on: August 03, 2009, 02:37:56 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 03, 2009, 02:34:57 PM
good work dear keep it up.......

tera kissa kucch aisa ootha mehfil main
sar apna humko jhukaana pada
badnaam toh ho gaye thay bahut pahle
aaj sharm se mar jaana pada

shukriya saahil sahab aur mashaalah shayari
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