Badi shiddat se mile unse hum, sawal tha hosh mein reh payenge hum

by thegrimreaper on August 02, 2009, 04:47:28 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 03, 2009, 02:53:10 PM »
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bohot khoob likha hai grimreaper.. really nice.
 main hindi mein kuch khas nahi likhti, just trying

yeh jo hum palkein bichhaye baithe hain
 iss ummeed mein jab se
k koi tou aate jaate karaa dey
 mera tarruf aap se
yunhi koi bewajah thodi hai
 k humein kuch soojta nahi
woh tou apki muskuraahat hai
 jo main bhoolney se rahi
qareeb aakar, apna naam to batao
 kyon inn ankhon se kia laachar?
aisi deewangi jo na dekhi hogi tumne
 tou paas aane ka ab kar lo vichaar.
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«Reply #16 on: August 03, 2009, 03:07:22 PM »
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bohot khoob likha hai grimreaper.. really nice.
 main hindi mein kuch khas nahi likhti, just trying

yeh jo hum palkein bichhaye baithe hain
 iss ummeed mein jab se
k koi tou aate jaate karaa dey
 mera tarruf aap se
yunhi koi bewajah thodi hai
 k humein kuch soojta nahi
woh tou apki muskuraahat hai
 jo main bhoolney se rahi
qareeb aakar, apna naam to batao
 kyon inn ankhon se kia laachar?
aisi deewangi jo na dekhi hogi tumne
 tou paas aane ka ab kar lo vichaar.

shukriya aapko pasaand aayi
aur bahut hi accha likha hai aapne sanya ji
likhte rahiye , hum jaise kadrdaan aapki shayari padne ke liye hamesha haazir hain
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