Bahut Ghayal Hai Yeh Dil

by suman59 on February 17, 2013, 05:43:07 AM
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यहीं पर छोड़कर इन रहबरो को,
चलो वापिस चलें अपने घरों को !!

बहुत घायल है ये दिल का परिंदा,
न फेंको तुम नुकीले पत्थरों को !!

वो मेरे दोस्त बनकर रह रहे थे,
कहाँ पेह्चानता हमलावरों को !!

सभी ने तालियाँ पीटी वहाँ पर
जहाँ तुम मिले थे तस्करों को !!

धरम का नाम लेकर छा गए वो,
खुदा बख्शे खुशी इन काफिरों को  !!
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2013, 05:46:37 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on February 17, 2013, 05:43:07 AM
यहीं पर छोड़कर इन रहबरो को,
चलो वापिस चलें अपने घरों को !!

बहुत घायल है ये दिल का परिंदा,
न फेंको तुम नुकीले पत्थरों को !!

वो मेरे दोस्त बनाकर रह रहे थे,
कहाँ पेह्चानता हमलावरों को !!

सभी ने तालियाँ पीटी वहाँ पर
जहाँ तुम मिले थे तस्करों को !!

धरम का नाम लेकर छा गए वो,
खुदा बख्शे खुशी इन काफिरों को  !!




Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2013, 05:50:44 AM »
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Bahut umda..
ek se ek badhkar khayaal.
i'm sure it's MOTM effect.
keep it up..
meter me likhi is kalaam ko padhkar dil khush ho gaya..
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2013, 05:51:12 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 17, 2013, 05:46:37 AM

Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

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shukriya jee but sharing nahi hai ye
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2013, 06:01:28 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on February 17, 2013, 05:43:07 AM
यहीं पर छोड़कर इन रहबरो को,
चलो वापिस चलें अपने घरों को !!

बहुत घायल है ये दिल का परिंदा,
न फेंको तुम नुकीले पत्थरों को !!

वो मेरे दोस्त बनाकर रह रहे थे,
कहाँ पेह्चानता हमलावरों को !!

सभी ने तालियाँ पीटी वहाँ पर
जहाँ तुम मिले थे तस्करों को !!

धरम का नाम लेकर छा गए वो,
खुदा बख्शे खुशी इन काफिरों को  !!




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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2013, 06:21:22 AM »
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ek yaadgaar ghazal ek rau qubool karen
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2013, 06:24:14 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 17, 2013, 06:21:22 AM
ek yaadgaar ghazal ek rau qubool karen

shukriya saini sb. thanks aapne mujhe correct karne ko kaha. aur abhi maine correct kiya. bahut bahut thanks..
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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2013, 06:24:48 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2013, 08:04:04 AM »
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bahut khoob Suman ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2013, 08:39:21 AM »
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bohut khoob maam
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2013, 09:48:59 AM »
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bahut bahut khooob...
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2013, 11:38:12 AM »
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Bahut khoob suman ji. sabhi sher kaabile tareef rahe. dheron daad qubool kare
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«Reply #14 on: February 17, 2013, 04:19:27 PM »
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Sumanji bahut khub ghazal kahi hai aapne.Saare ashaar bahut khub hain.Such me Padhkar dil khush ho gaya.Mubarak ho aapko.Aaise hi likhti rahen.Well done.
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