Bahut Khoobsurat Nazar Aata Hai Door Se Woh Manzar Mera "Khwaish"

by khwaish on April 23, 2010, 09:31:33 AM
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Do Baaton Ko Mad-E-Nazar Rakhte Hue Aaj Ka Din,23rd April mere liye Kuch Khaas Hai,Aaj Ke Din Kuch Dil Mein Basse Jazbaato Ko lafzon Mein Utaarne Ki Koshish kar raha Hoon..Umeed Hai Aap Sab zaroor Saath doge..Shukriya..

Kabhi Dhoop Kabhi Chaau Yehi Hai Mukaddar Mera
Hota Rehta Hai Zindagi Ka Yeh Karz Baraabar Mera...

Koi Umang Koi Khwaab Naya Sajata Rehta Hoon!!!
Bahut Khoobsurat Nazar Aata Hai Door Se Woh Manzar Mera...

Kal Jis Pathar Se Chot Khaayi Thi Aaj Ussi Pathar Ko Taraashta Hoon!!
Doobta Hua Kisse Dosh De Jab Kashti Bhi meri Thi Aur Tha Woh Samundar Mera...

Aaj Khushiyon Ne Kisi Ke Ghar Ke Dehleez Par Dastak Di!!!
Pata Chala Hai Logon Se Ke Hai Woh Ghar Mera...

Boond-Boond Ko Tarasta Raha Ek Pyaasa Umar Bhar!!!!
Aaj Dekh kar Hairaan Hoon,Paani Se Kaise Bhara Hai Woh Ghaagar* Mera...

Jashn-E-Mehfilon ki Aadat Nahi Hai Mujhe!!!!
"Khwaish" Ki Mehfile Tab Abaad Ho, jab Saath Mein Ho Rehguzar Mera...

         Ghaagar=Pot Of Water

                        ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2010, 10:43:19 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai         Khwaish ji.....

Bahut khoobsurat nazar aata hai zindagi ka safar mera
saath mein jo hai mere hamsafar mera

kabhi khushi to kabhi gum aate rahete hai
kat jaata hai yunhi mushkarrake zindagi ka safar mera

manzil kitni bhi door ho ab koi gam nahin
saath mein jo chalta hai mere rehguzar mera

"KHWAISH" ki bas itni toh thi khwaish
har haal mein mera saath de dilbar  mera.....
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2010, 12:05:46 PM »
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Kya baat hai Khwahish jee..bahaut ache..

Nice one Cara jee...
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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2010, 02:07:05 PM »
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Bohot bohot khoob Khwaish Dost....bohgot hi khoobsurat ghazal  Applause Applause Applause

Aap ko saalgirah bohot mubarak ho, aur meri Khuda se yahi dua hai ki aane waala saal, aur aane waale tamam saal aapki zindagi main khushion ke la-taadaad diye jalayen. Khuda aap ko humesha khush rakhe, ameen....
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«Reply #4 on: April 23, 2010, 02:15:47 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji... aur saath hi janamdin ki haardik shubhkaamnaayen...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2010, 02:35:07 PM »
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Wah Khwaish ji and Cara ji bahut khoob ,mindblowing creation,excellent.
wish you a very happy birthday too Khwaish ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2010, 05:44:25 PM »
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Do Baaton Ko Mad-E-Nazar Rakhte Hue Aaj Ka Din,23rd April mere liye Kuch Khaas Hai,Aaj Ke Din Kuch Dil Mein Basse Jazbaato Ko lafzon Mein Utaarne Ki Koshish kar raha Hoon..Umeed Hai Aap Sab zaroor Saath doge..Shukriya..

Kabhi Dhoop Kabhi Chaau Yehi Hai Mukaddar Mera
Hota Rehta Hai Zindagi Ka Yeh Karz Baraabar Mera...

Koi Umang Koi Khwaab Naya Sajata Rehta Hoon!!!
Bahut Khoobsurat Nazar Aata Hai Door Se Woh Manzar Mera...

Kal Jis Pathar Se Chot Khaayi Thi Aaj Ussi Pathar Ko Taraashta Hoon!!
Doobta Hua Kisse Dosh De Jab Kashti Bhi meri Thi Aur Tha Woh Samundar Mera...

Aaj Khushiyon Ne Kisi Ke Ghar Ke Dehleez Par Dastak Di!!!
Pata Chala Hai Logon Se Ke Hai Woh Ghar Mera...

Boond-Boond Ko Tarasta Raha Ek Pyaasa Umar Bhar!!!!
Aaj Dekh kar Hairaan Hoon,Paani Se Kaise Bhara Hai Woh Ghaagar* Mera...

Jashn-E-Mehfilon ki Aadat Nahi Hai Mujhe!!!!
"Khwaish" Ki Mehfile Tab Abaad Ho, jab Saath Mein Ho Rehguzar Mera...

         Ghaagar=Pot Of Water

                        ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~




Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Khwaish Ji

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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2010, 05:45:16 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai         Khwaish ji.....

Bahut khoobsurat nazar aata hai zindagi ka safar mera
saath mein jo hai mere hamsafar mera

kabhi khushi to kabhi gum aate rahete hai
kat jaata hai yunhi mushkarrake zindagi ka safar mera

manzil kitni bhi door ho ab koi gam nahin
saath mein jo chalta hai mere rehguzar mera

"KHWAISH" ki bas itni toh thi khwaish
har haal mein mera saath de dilbar  mera.....

Nice response Cara Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2010, 11:20:45 AM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhai.....
Dua Hai Har Din Aapke Liye Khash Hi Rahe



Khush Rahiye...


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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Majid Bhai

Aur Teh dil se Shukriya Duayon Ke Liye.. icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2010, 11:29:44 AM »
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wah wah khwaishji bade hi light se mood mein
bahut achha sa likha hai. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2010, 01:17:43 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai         Khwaish ji.....

Bahut khoobsurat nazar aata hai zindagi ka safar mera
saath mein jo hai mere hamsafar mera

kabhi khushi to kabhi gum aate rahete hai
kat jaata hai yunhi mushkarrake zindagi ka safar mera

manzil kitni bhi door ho ab koi gam nahin
saath mein jo chalta hai mere rehguzar mera

"KHWAISH" ki bas itni toh thi khwaish
har haal mein mera saath de dilbar  mera.....

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Caraji..

Aur bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2010, 03:07:59 PM »
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Waah Waah.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish Ji.. Bahoot khoob Likha hai.. !  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2010, 03:50:35 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob khwaish ji.....Rab aapko hamesha yu hi khush rakhe.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2010, 03:53:14 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Khwaish Bhai,.

Saal Giraah Mubarak Ho, Rab Khair Kare,.

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«Reply #14 on: April 26, 2010, 02:02:05 PM »
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Kya baat hai Khwahish jee..bahaut ache..

Nice one Cara jee...

Bahut bahut Shukriya Bhai Rahim!!! Usual Smile
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