BARBADIAN THIN NASEEB MAIN

by SARVESH RASTOGI on April 11, 2009, 12:51:03 PM
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BARBADIAN THIN NASEEB MAIN
UNKA JO GHAR THA KARIB MAIN

HUM LUT GAYE UNKI CHAH MAIN
UNKA TO DIL THA RAKIB MAIN

UNCHA MAHAL UNKO BHA GAYA
KYA CHAAV THA IS GARIB MAIN

PHIR KYUN NA GHAR MERA TOOTATAA
KAMZORIAN THIN JO NEEB MAIN

KHOTE NA YUN APNI AABROO
HOTE AGAR HUM TEHZEEB MAIN

TU HAI MASIHA TO JAAN LE
EK DIN MILEGA SALIB MAIN

SARVESH RASTOGI
PHONE: 9810391523

बरबादियाँ थीं नसीब में
उनका जो घर था करीब में

हम लुट गए उनकी चाह में
उनका तो दिल था रकीब में

ऊँचा महल उनको भा गया
क्या चाव था इस गरीब में

फिर क्यूँ न घर मेरा टूटता
कमजोरियां थीं जो नींव में

खोते न यूँ अपनी आबरू
होते अगर हम तहजीब में

तू है मसीहा तो जान ले
एक दिन मिलेगा सलीब में
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2009, 01:03:34 PM »
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Wah wah Sarvesh ji.. yea gazal bahoot pasand aai hame.
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 02:32:31 PM »
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Nice work Sarvesh
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 02:40:56 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 11, 2009, 02:32:31 PM
Nice work Sarvesh

Shukriya Sajid.
Aap wakai Khair-Khwah hain.
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2009, 02:54:09 PM »
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Aap bahut accha likhte hai Rastogi ji  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2009, 03:13:47 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 11, 2009, 01:03:34 PM
Wah wah Sarvesh ji.. yea gazal bahoot pasand aai hame.

Shukriya Sophi
Aapki nazar-e-inayat hai
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Aap bahut accha likhte hai Rastogi ji  Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Roja.
Aap wakai shairy ki kadradan hain
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2009, 01:59:36 PM »
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Waah Kya Khoob Sarvesh Bhai, Specially,. THis Lines,.

KHote Na Yun Apni Aabroo,.
Hote Agar Hum Tameez Mein,.
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2009, 02:10:43 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 11, 2009, 12:51:03 PM
BARBADIAN THIN NASEEB MAIN
UNKA JO GHAR THA KARIB MAIN

HUM LUT GAYE UNKI CHAH MAIN
UNKA TO DIL THA RAKIB MAIN

UNCHA MAHAL UNKO BHA GAYA
KYA CHAAV THA IS GARIB MAIN

PHIR KYUN NA GHAR MERA TOOTATAA
KAMZORIAN THIN JO NEEB MAIN

KHOTE NA YUN APNI AABROO
HOTE AGAR HUM TAMIZ MAIN

TU HAI MASIHA TO JAAN LE
EK DIN MILEGA SALIB MAIN

SARVESH RASTOGI
PHONE: 9810391523

sarvesh saahab,

aap ki Ghazal achchhi lagii..  har sher muqammal hai.. mere jaanib se daad qubool keejiye...  duusre sher ka pahle misre ko ek baar phir se dekh leejiyega.. shaayad wazn me.n nahii.n hai.. shukriyah!

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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2009, 03:37:41 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 14, 2009, 01:59:36 PM
Waah Kya Khoob Sarvesh Bhai, Specially,. THis Lines,.

KHote Na Yun Apni Aabroo,.
Hote Agar Hum Tameez Mein,.

THANKS A LOT, AZEEM
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2009, 03:42:36 PM »
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U Are Always Welcome sarvesh Bhai,.

Har Ghazal Teri Dil Par Asar Karti Hai,.
Yun Lagta Hai, Tune Mera Dil Pardh LIya Ho Jaise,.

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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2009, 03:46:13 PM »
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Quote from: Ghaafil on April 14, 2009, 02:10:43 PM
sarvesh saahab,

aap ki Ghazal achchhi lagii..  har sher muqammal hai.. mere jaanib se daad qubool keejiye...  duusre sher ka pahle misre ko ek baar phir se dekh leejiyega.. shaayad wazn me.n nahii.n hai.. shukriyah!

Mayank



Hello Mayank wave
Thanks for your message.  Badi khushi hui.  Communication jari rakhen.  Aapne jo sujhao diya usper vichar karunga.  Anyhow, suggestion ke liye many many thanks. 
All the best.
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2009, 04:06:36 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 11, 2009, 12:51:03 PM
BARBADIAN THIN NASEEB MAIN
UNKA JO GHAR THA KARIB MAIN

HUM LUT GAYE UNKI CHAH MAIN
UNKA TO DIL THA RAKIB MAIN

UNCHA MAHAL UNKO BHA GAYA
KYA CHAAV THA IS GARIB MAIN

PHIR KYUN NA GHAR MERA TOOTATAA
KAMZORIAN THIN JO NEEB MAIN

KHOTE NA YUN APNI AABROO
HOTE AGAR HUM TAMIZ MAIN

TU HAI MASIHA TO JAAN LE
EK DIN MILEGA SALIB MAIN

SARVESH RASTOGI
PHONE: 9810391523

Bahut he touching lines hai jee...
gud one.....
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«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2009, 04:20:45 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 14, 2009, 04:06:36 PM
Bahut he touching lines hai jee...
gud one.....

Shukriya Huzoor,
aapki tarif pasand aayee
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«Reply #14 on: April 14, 2009, 04:28:40 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 14, 2009, 03:42:36 PM
U Are Always Welcome sarvesh Bhai,.

Har Ghazal Teri Dil Par Asar Karti Hai,.
Yun Lagta Hai, Tune Mera Dil Pardh LIya Ho Jaise,.

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So nice,
Shukriya Jaanasheen
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